(Male): Dark Red
(Female): Purple
[Intro]
Im done, Im gone,..Goodbye
[V1]
Watch me get my sh*t
I'm so done with the childish game
I'm just through with it
Got other dudes calling your name
Don't let them get hit !!! Ooo yeah
I'm insane.. and going crazy
This what you done to me.. got me so hazy
You had your chance
Your luck is over
I'm too far advanced
I'm not no pushover!
[Hook]
Got my things
I left the ring
I don't have to sit through your lying
Walked out the door
You're begging on the floor
We're just broke up and not anymore
[Chorus]
Just watch me leave (x2)
Watch me leave
And if you still don't believe
(Believe)
Just WATCH ME..!
[V2]
You can get your bags
Like I cared about you
Just remember what we had
Your new chick will never do
Just leave, dont drag
Dont even leave a clue
Ill Keep my cool and be a lady
Wont act a fool and be all shady
I had better days
My heart gained a crack
I feel like I want you to stay
But you're not coming back
[Hook]
He got his things
He left the ring
Now I am crying
He walked out the door
I'm begging on the floor
We're just broke up and not anymore
[Chorus]
Just watch me leave (x2)
Watch him leave
And if you still dont believe
(Believe)
Just WATCH ME..!
[Bridge]
She took me as a joke
But now its said and done (was said and done)
This is a battle that I've won
(That he won)
Yeah
I didn't blow smoke
Wont deny, I had fun..
Girl bye..Go find your number one
(Number one)
Oh he's done
Oh he's gone
What went ..
What went wrong
Oh he's done
Oh he's gone
He said goodbye
I don't think I can be strong!
[Chorus]
Just watch me leave (x2)
I gotta watch him leave
And if you still don't believe
(Believe)
Just WATCH ME..!
[Outro]
Oh he's done
Oh he's gone
What went ..
What went wrong
Oh he's done
Oh he's gone
He said goodbye
I dont think I can be strong...
@Speezy: IDK why but I SCREAMED at the "Girl bye" in the bridge. I know it probably wasn't meant to be read like that, but I read it in a sassy gay voice and it just had me rolling.
@Speezy: IDK why but I SCREAMED at the "Girl bye" in the bridge. I know it probably wasn't meant to be read like that, but I read it in a sassy gay voice and it just had me rolling.
Now that calamari has posted his results can we just rush-release the elimination?
The earliest I can do it is probably like 2 PM EST tomorrow
Unless I wake up really early which I'm not here for. I guess I could prepare it now and post it in the morning
Originally posted by Hugamari
Although it did help that the male and female parts kept the same flow, I found it odd how the guy would say things like "I think you're naive". I think if it felt the same flow, with a bit more difference in the lyrics than you/I being switched around, it would have worked better.
Thematically, I thought it was interesting. I mean, I guess it could be a bit played out, but it didn't feel like it when I was reading your lyrics. WAIT. Is the girl cheating, too? What kind of messy ass relationship?
Well it could be read as that but for me it was her being naive in this relationship and staying with him although she know's what he's up to and she's basically cheating herself by sticking with him and being a fool.