[Jaxswim]

OH wait

you make missteps by voicing thoughts that they wouldn't have

This one's me. It's 8th's review of my R1 entry as well.

OMg @me being 2nd in Jackson's rankings

[Dylobs]

I'm not in Jackson's Top Scorers.

Is that me under the Daft Punk part of Swiftie's hints?

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Dylobs

Thanks Swiftie AGH I hate that I went from one end of the writing spectrum (excessive language) to the other (basic language). Could you also show me where I switched tenses cause I read through my entry so many times to double check that and I can't at me missing obvious things?

Prisoner of my mind's bedroom
Awakened from a sexual tomb
Threatened to leave a time too soon
Now a lifeless body in the room

Dreaded the day he'd try to leave
He wasn't ready, he was naive
To think that what he would receive
Would align with his childish belief

I must move on, less I forget
The lifeless body on the carpet
What did I do? No time to regret.
I chose to hide him in the closet

[Pre]
I packed his body in with clothing
A cotton bag of self-loathing
Checked his pulse to verify
I must be sure I took his life

[Chorus]
Suddenly there was a feeling
Fear or not, it's overwhelming
That there's a noise that I was hearing
A metronome that kept on ticking

I double checked to reassure
I hastily opened up the door
Saw the body had not restarted
But still I heard the tell-tale heart then

This part was messy

[Gladion]

Oh :/

I was like #18 for swifie

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Hugamari

And the first one in Hor's hints is mine because that was from his review of my song this round.

Correct, what does that mean? What does MAry represent?

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

OH wait



This one's me. It's 8th's review of my R1 entry as well.

OMg @me being 2nd in Jackson's rankings

neux you were tied for 1st

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

Oh :/

I was like #18 for swifie

Those aren't in order, there's no way. There's something to do with the corresponding grammy winners.

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Prisoner of my mind's bedroom
Awakened from a sexual tomb
Threatened to leave a time too soon
Now a lifeless body in the room

Dreaded the day he'd try to leave
He wasn't ready, he was naive
To think that what he would receive
Would align with his childish belief

I must move on, less I forget
The lifeless body on the carpet
What did I do? No time to regret.
I chose to hide him in the closet

[Pre]
I packed his body in with clothing
A cotton bag of self-loathing
Checked his pulse to verify
I must be sure I took his life

[Chorus]
Suddenly there was a feeling
Fear or not, it's overwhelming
That there's a noise that I was hearing
A metronome that kept on ticking

I double checked to reassure
I hastily opened up the door
Saw the body had not restarted
But still I heard the tell-tale heart then

This part was messy

Damn I think I wasn't specific enough when I checked over it

[swiftie13]

BUMPT

HOR'S HINTS

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Jackson

neux you were tied for 1st

I love you bitch, you give me so much confidence

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

Those aren't in order, there's no way. There's something to do with the corresponding grammy winners.

smart cookie

[Achilles.]

I'm assuming swiftie's hints are by # of Grammys won, but idk why there'd be two sections for 7 time winners.

Whitney: 7
Coldplay: 7
Mariah: 5
Taylor: 10
Daft Punk: 6
Rihanna: 8

[Hugamari]

oldest grammy winner = highest score?

You could go the obvious route and say more grammys in the picture = higher sore, and based on the comments under the first pic you'd think that'd be true, but I think that idea falls off rather quickly.

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I'm assuming swiftie's hints are by # of Grammys won, but idk why there'd be two sections for 7 time winners.

Whitney: 7
Coldplay: 7
Mariah: 5
Taylor: 10
Daft Punk: 6
Rihanna: 8

I think that's Mary J. Blige, who has 9 Grammys, not Whitney.

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I'm assuming swiftie's hints are by # of Grammys won, but idk why there'd be two sections for 7 time winners.

Whitney: 7
Coldplay: 7
Mariah: 5
Taylor: 10
Daft Punk: 6
Rihanna: 8

hmmm.. do either Whitney or Coldplay have 2 technical grammies which could bring it up to 9? if not slay at the gap between people getting an 8 and people getting a 10

[swiftie13]

Mess, that's not Whitney

[ceremonials]

I'm in swifties second tier.don't think I'm in Jackson's

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

I think that's Mary J. Blige, who has 9 Grammys, not Whitney.

a goddamn mess

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

I think that's Mary J. Blige, who has 9 Grammys, not Whitney.

ding, smart cookie indeed

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by Achilles.

Whitney: 7