I disagree with everything you said Jackson. I'm just not pretentious. I am authentically minimalistic in my style. It seems this competition doesn't appreciate minimalism. Next time, I'll just use nonsensical lyrics and rhymes. It seems that's what you like.
Thanks for your time.
If by minimalistic you mean minimalistically talented then sure
We don't write these reviews for fun, we're trying to help you. If you can't take feedback or critique, this game isn't for you, and neither is songwriting.
If by minimalistic you mean minimalistically talented then sure
You don't know **** about music. I'm not going to suck up to the judges like everyone else. I could write Bohemian Rhapsody and all you'd say is how 'forced' it sounds. Do better.
You don't know **** about music. I'm not going to suck up to the judges like everyone else. I could write Bohemian Rhapsody and all you'd say is how 'forced' it sounds. Do better.
OK but which one of us got 2nd in this game, has hosted, judged twice, and has real songs thousands of people actually listen to? What are your credentials? Bye hater!
OK but which one of us got 2nd in this game, has hosted, judged twice, and has real songs thousands of people actually listen to? What are your credentials? Bye hater!
MattyTacos & TheCheetahWings – 1955
This song didn’t quite go to the places I had hoped it would. I’m assuming this is about a homosexual relationship taking place in a time when such relations were taboo. Even though I appreciate that your exact intentions were never explicitly stated, I was hoping the story would have been fleshed out a little better. The premise is beautiful but it lacks any sort of climax or plot twist. You could have talked about how both singers grew up and married women and were never quite happy, or about how one never left the closet and the other did and found the love of his life. The flow of the song was really interesting, and although it bugged me a bit at first I grew to love it. I like how the entire song was practically an AA rhyme scheme. It kept the song feeling very consistent throughout, and contrasting that flow with a more progressive storyline would have elevated it to another level.
Thanks for the critique I do agree the storyline could've used more fleshing out. Like Matty said we even had a line about them both getting wives It just wasn't fully working out.
We don't write these reviews for fun, we're trying to help you. If you can't take feedback or critique, this game isn't for you, and neither is songwriting.
I'm sorry I just don't get why Jackson doesn't think bleeding anuses are funny. I can't take that critique.
Hey temporal do you think it's possible for reveals we could start from #10 up to #1? I think that would be a lot more exciting and stressful but a fun type of stress
Not trying to be the judge suck up or anything but in my 3 seasons of PH every time a judge has said something was forced they were right I look up "what rhymes with ____" and i put it in there. That's what I used to do anyways and they knew when I did that somehow
I do agree the storyline could've used more fleshing out. 
Like Matty said we even had a line about them both getting wives 
It just wasn't fully working out.