Hmmm I think I'm more successful in drawing inspiration from an EXTERNAL source and THEN writing from a third person perspective, which is why my songs for the Painting and Writing For An Artist rounds were so well-received
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I loved how you used one of your phrases in Native American to rhyme with one in English; that's a very impressive skill in itself!
I did that too: "Je ne sais quoi il est.. That makes me feel this way.. Je ne sais quoi it is.. That makes me feel like this"
Hmmm I think I'm more successful in drawing inspiration from an EXTERNAL source and THEN writing from a third person perspective, which is why my songs for the Painting and Writing For An Artist rounds were so well-received
I did that too: "Je ne sais quoi il est.. That makes me feel this way.. Je ne sais quoi it is.. That makes me feel like this"
I meant rhyme a word in a different language with another in English… someone else did it with "Je T'aime" & "them", but it seemed more inventive to use a non-familiar phrase…
Spitfire really was an honest depiction of what had happened to me, earlier in the week. Sadly, I'm assuming it did not reflect onto the lyrics and felt too much like some of my other songs
I think I did restrain myself but it clearly wasn't enough. Or maybe I held back too much and instead lost myself on the way. I have no idea. Let me PRAY though once again
I meant rhyme a word in a different language with another in English… someone else did it with "Je T'aime" & "them", but it seemed more inventive to use a non-familiar phrase…
I meant rhyme a word in a different language with another in English… someone else did it with "Je T'aime" & "them", but it seemed more inventive to use a non-familiar phrase…
Hey Nait! Since you're online, please repost my comments (I'm on mobile and collapse tags don't work).
EDIT: IT DOESNT HAVE TO BE NAIT PLEASE ANYONE
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This video would be depressing.
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What kinda loophole!? You couldn't use a word/phrase that actually had a translation in English!?
The story is beautiful in essence. It's practically heartbreaking. But you have this way of making such a beautiful idea stoic. I'm not sure what it is, and I haven't been able to figure it out my-damn-self, but I can't mark you down for this just because I'm an emotionless robot…
"I love you" in any other language is familiar, especially in songwriting. Almost like "Hello", "Goodbye" or the numbers in different languages…
So it is…
BITCH, I caught that edit of you trying to skool me that "est" is pronounced "eh" instead of "ay".
You betta REPENT mother****er, and you BETTA rank me higher since that is SUCH an incredible feat in itself.
The fact that I can rhyme English with non-English. I am the true dark horse contender.
Ain't nothing gonna change THAT, and you BEST believe THAT.
I did NOT learn French for nothing lil mister.
BITCH, I caught that edit of you trying to skool me that "est" is pronounced "eh" instead of "ay".
You betta REPENT mother****er, and you BETTA rank me higher since that is SUCH an incredible feat in itself.
The fact that I can rhyme English with non-English. I am the true dark horse contender.
Ain't nothing gonna change THAT, and you BEST believe THAT.
I did NOT learn French for nothing lil mister.
That's not that familiar!
