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Tournament: PLATINUM HIT 5 [FINALE] [Looking for new host! App inside!]
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
ff that ****ed up post unedited post from before 
NOT you replying INSIDE my quoted post 
I always do that sometimes ngl  |
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
Get mula bitch  Lemme sort out my patients' files whilst I wait for the results in the meantime  |
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
You guys just want them right now without Jack!'s hints!?  |
I vote YES
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End all this theory bullcrap, Nait sis... pls
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Tymps. or EatmeZayn, your take!?
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No response? Okay, well, just so you know… this means you won't be getting the actual results for over a day… just letting you know…
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il;hfnkgvsdjovldnvdslj/////SERIOUSLY like omfg I'm gonna noo 
Okay I am seriously NOT about to have another meltdown rn ff lemme grab a paper bag
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
il;hfnkgvsdjovldnvdslj/////SERIOUSLY like omfg I'm gonna noo
Okay I am seriously NOT about to have another meltdown rn ff lemme grab a paper bag |
I mean, you'll be getting me and Hug's judging, just not the actual results…
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BITCH
You're still online though, who you tryna fool?? 
I bet you're formatting.. AT. THIS. VERY. SECOND
PS: I've kinda noticed how every single round I have taken over the persona of my song.
This time it's: Spitfire 
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
BITCH
You're still online though, who you tryna fool??
I bet you're formatting.. AT. THIS. VERY. SECOND
PS: I've kinda noticed how every single round I have taken over the persona of my song.
This time it's: Spitfire |
I've had the judging ready for hours… 
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
I mean, you'll be getting me and Hug's judging, just not the actual results…
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Oh, SCRATCH THAT then 
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No sense in getting the judging if we won't get the results for over a day 
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
I've had the judging ready for hours… |
I know, which is why you won't change it due to *ahem* questionable personalities
Please don't change my ranking  Or maybe you should I'm just rambling at this point ngl 
All these smilies are kinda trippy though  They're so colourful and pretty imo 
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
Oh, SCRATCH THAT then |
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Originally posted by Scorpio King
No sense in getting the judging if we won't get the results for over a day |
Great, so we're not doing it!?
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Bye this thread is a damn mess
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Bye this thread is a damn mess
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Bye. C U Tomorrow…
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
Great, so we're not doing it!? |
SCRATCH THAT, as in, moving past the fact that I called you a bitch for being so damn FICKLE.
Don't play with ma emotions (+ mental stability) like this boii.
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ここに意見です。見たい?
 GotSkill - Powwow
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Originally posted by Jack Lees
I imagined a really fun and catchy melody to these lyrics, they were great! I really loved these lyrics, they were fun to read! Good work!
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Originally posted by Hug
You know the **** what? You just pulled Lullaby part 2 on us. When giving a set objective like this, you seem to completely blow it out of the water.  I am fascinated by this. Amazing job! |
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
I would've liked this so much if I wasn't so sure this was a huge metaphor about giving a BJ… Other than that image *shutters*, this was pretty damn impressive. I loved how you used one of your phrases in Native American to rhyme with one in English; that's a very impressive skill in itself! Overall, this was great work!
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Tymps. - Saudade
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Originally posted by Jack Lees
Nice! I liked this, it was one of my favourites from yours. I think some lines were a little uneventful, but it was still great to read. I loved the piano line, I had this great image in my head while reading it. Good work!
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Originally posted by Hug
This video would be depressing.
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
What kinda loophole!? You couldn't use a word/phrase that actually had a translation in English!?
The story is beautiful in essence. It's practically heartbreaking. But you have this way of making such a beautiful idea stoic. I'm not sure what it is, and I haven't been able to figure it out my-damn-self, but I can't mark you down for this just because I'm an emotionless robot… |
Scorpio King - Play the Fool
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I loved the chorus! It flows so well and I had a brilliant melody in my head while reading it. One of my favourites this week and from you in general, so well done, you did a great job!
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Originally posted by Hug
I tried translating your phrase into English and it didn’t quite translate…what does it mean? I would understand why it was used if I knew what it meant, but it just seems thrown in there to fit the challenge…
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
What you did right: you made a song that seems familiar and new at the same time. With a song like "Rude" blowing up on the charts, this is kind of a risk to do a similar idea, but I really did enjoy reading it.
What you did wrong: You did the one thing with the challenge I was hoping no one would do and that's throw in a random phrase in a different language solely for meeting up to the "status quo". I did want a non-English phrase added to your song, but I wanted it utilized to the point it felt natural for it to be there.
What that adds up to: A great song bested by the challenge!
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EuphorianSea - Spitfire
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Originally posted by Jack Lees
Like Nait said last week, you’re a brilliant poet, but honestly, sometimes that pushes away from your songwriting. I know the difference between them is arguable, but it really shows with you. You’re fantastic at writing what you write, but sometimes it can be a little awkward to read.
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If that’s how you really feel. |
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
This could been better. Honestly, I'm starting to feel we're just getting the same song from you with different titles. Maybe it's just me, but all I'm seeing are mixed-up clichéd lines and overly dramatic hooks/choruses. Again, maybe it's just me…
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feelslikeadream - These Words
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Originally posted by Jack Lees
My favourite this week! I LOVE the chorus, it seems so happy and it was so fun to read. These are brilliant and maybe my favourite from you? I feel like I say that a lot, haha. Great work!
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Interesting take on the challenge. I found this to be really sweet and endearing, albeit awkward pieces, but y’know, it’s accepting the flaws and realizing they’re still perfect for you…that’s love.  |
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This is like a weird country/pop song that I like and I don't like. I wanna say I fully like it, but it's so square to me. Not sure if it's up to par with some of your previous work…
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EatmeZayn - Emotionless Emotions
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I liked these! Your chorus threw me off a bit in sense of flow, but it was still great. I really liked it. Not your best, but there was highlights like the verses that brought the song up. Good work, though!
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Originally posted by Hug
Hmm…bland. Technique is there, but I’m just not feeling it. I guess the title of the song works really well given the circumstance.
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
I'm not really feeling it this time around. I mean, "emotionless" is right; I just can't connect with something like that…
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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So, sayounara, guys… expect results in the morning!
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