[UpAllNight]

Originally posted by Warrior

I want comments

You also want "Warrior" to go gold. Keep holding on.

[EatmeZayn]

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Are we getting comments or not? **** Midnight's last comment, he has two, that should suffice

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by EatmeZayn

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Are we getting comments or not? **** Midnight's last comment, he has two, that should suffice

Well if that's really how you feel.

[Remmy]

Huga's back.

Right tho... Midnight was late and caused a delay.. now here's another one.

[Hugamari]

Round 2 ~ Word of the Day Challenge: Comments!

Bahjat: I could so imagine Negative Man singing this :negativeman:

On a more positive note, though,

"If it's ok why's no one accepting it? " <--- I loved that line. It's something many people, especially us on ATRL, could relate to. for that.

I don't...really have anything negative to say, there's slight variations in the hooks and chorus which keep things fresh, and you get vivid images from the lyrics themselves. Great entry.

Disco_Blisters:

'im just a boy with a heart in his chest
im just confused on how to use it yet"

That stuck out like a sore thumb, like you were trying for a rhyme there. Did you struggle with this part? The pre chorus is really nice! It's just...that part.

I feel sorry for you having didactic, though. I know I'd struggle to use a word like that, but you did it pretty well.

"The past don't exist it's only a myth
the present is where my eyes should be pit"

This also stands out. What does this mean? Seems like pit was another forced word. Funny how didactic was one of the words that don't seem forced ^^;

There's definitely improvement, though. Hoping we can continue to see that.

seanoh: I can already imagine the pre-chorus to be a catchy ear-worm. That's a good think since that's what a pre-chorus is for a lot of the time.

I decided I won't be all that critical on the lyric content since this seems to be more of an upbeat song than a powerful ballad, so I will focus on how it flows and how catchy it is. Well...you did well on both. Nothing really sticks out as in it doesn't seem inconsistent in flow and it is catchy. Also...I don't see what your word was...that's a good thing since it means your word didn't seem forced

Good entry overall.

Hustler: I'm kinda confused as to whether I should commend you for using being a model as a metaphor for constantly being judged, or I should be criticizing the verses for seeming inconsistent. I'll do both?

Great use of a metaphor (if that's what you were going for), but I kinda feel like this has a few different ideas and they are all over the place.

Also, I can't tell what your word is - great! It's doesn't seem like it's just used to be used.

VDK: YOU REALLY MAKE ME WANT TO JUST CRY. The text language REALLY throws off the song, which is probably one of the most original out of any Platinum Hit entry, like. WOW, this would be amazing if you used full words instead of text speak. Like...*sigh* let me just ignore the text speech for this entry.

Oh, you said to notice the tenses...boo, don't **** with us like this. Now I have 2 things to cry about. Great entry despite the text speech.

ImARudeBoy: "fools in love" RIHANNA HER IMPACT.

No, but seriously, the structure of this song is different, points for that. I would've liked to see the pre-chorus and chorus again, instead of indicators that they were there, but I guess that's just a convenience to make the read shorter. It's not even a problem, though.

I kind of feel like "deserve so low" was forced, but I could just be reaching for something to critique here. Another solid entry on your behalf.

JadGhamloush96: That first verse starts off so cute, and then PLOT TWIST: you are this villian. I like it The rest of it is so depressing, though. In that sense, I kinda like how the feel of it changes throughout, makes it different.

I feel like this was a definite improvement from the first challenge. Maybe the freedom of letting you choose any subject you want helped? I think that's the case for a lot of entries.

Lucky#17: Ke$ha teas. You better work bitch. Nah, but I would've liked to see where each part of the song started, just for reading's sake.

I could imagine a nice electro beat behind it, so bravo on that. I just...have this feeling something could be changed. What exactly that is...I don't know.

e437: You can do better.I wasn't really feeling it. I see you tried to be a little creative in your formatting by not including a prechorus/hook, but...I feel like this song needed one.

[end or something] <-- outro is a nice word to use.

Also, extraneous sticks out.

Warrior: Indelible/incredible jufhkjlhafh WHAT. I honestly don't think I would've been able to come up with that. I thought that was really good word choice.

I love the verses, but everything else is kinda...not so much.

Stains like this just won't come out, just like you and me.

You're indelible, Incredible, you leave a mark on me.

You're wonderful, excitable, you left a stain on me.

I have a feeling that someone will not like the "me" being used 3 times.

Good job overall, though

EatmeZayn: Beautiful imagery in this song. Even though the chorus is a bit long, I really love the flow of the song.

I am looking for something to critique, but I can't find anything Great entry.

Erotic: Great word choices This kinda seems like it would be one of those epic orchestral songs that are in movies like Lord of the Rings. Seems all dark and eerie.

The "Torment/Prevent - Atrocious/Ferocious" part is a nice touch, too.

Oh, and 666 posts as of me judging this...creepy.

Remember: Was this inspired by real events? It seems so specific that it seems like an excript from a biography. 2NEway, a lot of people really stepped it up this round, so I don't really have much to critique on.

doodledot13: Sledgehammer and armour, do those rhyme? Guess they kinda do. Also, reading this gave me Wrecking Ball teas.

TeamRHI: What type of Same Love-level anthem? Serve us that LGBT-pride song I also thought this flowed really well, everything fits nice and snug and no words really stick out. I thought you did a really nice job with this.

Midnight: You know the **** what? Bonus points because you got really creative with this entry. I can honestly imagine a slower, sexy instrumental to the back of this throughout the song, yet also a little bit of the dark vibe, since this is a Batman character we are talking about.

But...is this about having sex with her? Like I said, very creative to say the least. I appreciate it in that espect. You also use some nice words beside for the one you were told to use. Brilliant job overall...just get it in on time next time. I am letting it slide since I ****ed up majorly this round.

[Hugamari]

Round 2 ~ Word of the Day Challenge: Comments

Warrior
Challenge: I love the use of your word. I had to look up what it meant because I didn’t check before giving it to you and it fits perfectly.
Overall: This was by far a step up from last round for you. It’s very smooth and poetic. Just that some lines seem kinda awkward in context and throw you off. Like, you have this whole sad song going on and then you include “Sis, you're not the queen.” But I love the word choice. I hope to see you keep this level of quality throughout the game.

e437
Challenge: Okay, you used the word. The usage was fine, I mean it was nothing that interesting. It didn’t look very natural tbh.
Overall: While this is a step up from last week, I’m sad to report the same things went wrong this week that went wrong last week, which isn’t what we want. We want new mistakes, not old ones It just feels kinda whiny and needs a more consistent meter. I meant to give tips this week on meter so you’d know how to fix it so I’m sorry for that

EatmeZayn
Challenge: You did what I think was the smartest move this round for anyone with a bigger, more complex word, which was using other big complex words so that it fit in. Very well done.
Overall: YES YOU FIXED THE METER PROBLEMS I can tell you took my comments to heart, thank you so much I just LOVE the language. I want to put it on my refrigerator door. This whole song is very riveting and you just make it so interesting to read. I love the passion / compassion / attraction part. Keep it up, dood.

Remember
Challenge: You used the word, it’s hard to tell how subtle it is since you put it in all bold and gave the definition I guess it’s pretty subtle. It’s not used especially well but whatever, it fit the challenge.
Overall: Thank you for listening to our comments and writing your lyrics (semi ) normally, I appreciate it. I LOVE how the love interest is an astronomer, and I loved how you brought that out. I just wish you didn’t say it straight out. I hate to use the word subtle so much but The meter’s a bit messy in the verses but it’s a big improvement from last week. Good job.

doodledot13
Challenge: Okay, I know you got the hardest word, so before all else you get some sympathy points. However, the use of the word seemed really sudden and awkward. If you made it rhyme it wouldn’t have been as awkward.
Overall: Nice thematic idea going on there. The meter definitely improved since last week. I honestly could’ve gone without the “Do you have to?”s imo. This is definitely an improvement from last week. Something about it just feels kinda blah. I think it might be because a lot of people this week wrote about the same topics. Maybe try a more complex idea to write about next week? Just a suggestion, you don’t have to take it.

TeamRHI
Challenge: I looked through this and wasn’t able to figure out what your word was. I’m too lazy to go check so I’ll just assume you did this challenge really well.
Overall: I like the message, I just wish you weren’t so obvious in some parts. Subtlety seems to be the word of the week. Can you imagine someone singing “homo, ***, queen, queer” in a song? It sounds kinda awkward. Assuming you purposely used “isles” instead of “aisles” I really liked that line, very poetic. I have to admit, though, I’m a bit let down. Parts are trite and it doesn’t stand out as much as last week’s entry.

Lucky#17
Challenge: “You got a cerebral, way of thinking” GEORGIE Cerebral at its most basic definition means “of the brain” like that line omg I’m so sorry I know this is really mean but
Overall: I’m kinda confused by the song format, if those two things are supposed to both be verses then you need to fix their meters but if not it’s fine. The lyrics are a little trite but the imagery is nice. There’s something I haven’t talked about yet but when writing lyrics write things like you would say them, so “sad is me” or “over is my game” would be a bad example. Just for future reference.

JadGhamloush96
Challenge: Fine.
Overall: You got some good imagery going on here. However, I feel like you need to focus on one central theme rather than so many at once. Enter first verse: you have a motif going of colors, drawing, etc. Enter chorus and you start talking about sharks? Then for the rest of the song you don’t have any motif. It feels kinda disordered. You did improve on your meter though. All in all, good work, just try to connect things.

ImARudeBoy
Challenge: Fine. “Always incoherent- didn't know where to go” doesn’t make much sense since incohoerency has nothing to do with going places Your word was easy tho.
Overall: Interesting topic. Unfortunately something about it falls flat. I feel like some lines were just there so that things would rhyme, ex. “I want a decked out penthouse on the top floor”. I was honestly expecting a bit more from you but I know you’ll rebound next time. It was still good though. I liked the language. I’m sure you’ll place well this round, I just wasn’t as big of a fan of this as I was of New York City.

VDK
Challenge: Good move making the title of the song your word. It makes it seem more natural if you have a weird word like you did. It’s what I would’ve done.
Overall: What kind of shocking improvement The lyrics are very typical but they have personality to them. If you may recall you were my least favorite last round but I can safely say you aren’t this round. The lack of spelling errors and text language makes it look far more professional. However, there is still room for improvement

Hustler
Challenge: I’ll be honest, your word was one of the easiest. However, it looks natural, so congrats.
Overall: I feel like the message of this song kinda flip flops at points. It loses a bit of consistency. However, these are good lyrics. The opening line is great. It really grabs you in. The song is verging on being a bit trite, so watch your step for next round (if there is one for you )

seanoh
Challenge: It seems sorta natural. You probably got the hardest and weirdest word, it might’ve flowed better if it was the title?
Overall: WHAT THIS SLAYS. I love the sickness theme and I especially love that you stuck with it through the whole song rather than ditch it after one verse. Although, I’ll be honest, your word choice could’ve been better, plus the first half of your chorus made me chuckle, I ain’t gon’ lie. But overall good work, you did better than last round.

Disco_Blisters
Challenge: Okay, but why is the love didactic? It didn’t feel like someone told you to use it but rather like you chose it yourself but only to make your vocabulary seem larger. Unhappy with this section.
Overall: Pretty good, pretty good. I love all the metaphors, especially the ones about human anatomy since it made a sort of theme throughout the piece. Some of the lyrics were just too out there for the song, though. Like “I need to hit a home run” was a bit too left field, pun not intended until I noticed it and decided to keep it.

Bahjat
Challenge: I can’t tell what your word was, I think it’s anomally? That’s a good thing, you aced this one.
Overall: Bitch you know I love your lyrics I lovelovelove the chorus tag, and I really like the bridge, prechorus, chorus, etc. I’m kinda iffy on the verses but that’s mostly because I just find people asking questions to the universe in songs unbearably cheesy Just a taste thing. Great job. Again.

Erotic
Challenge: As I said to others, wise choice using other big words to make the big word I gave you seem natural and flowing. Good jog.
Overall: As you may recall last round I ranked to much higher than the other judges. That’s honestly because I saw the potential to make these lyrics in last round’s work. I really love this one. I’m not going to take the time to point out each metaphor I like because I like so many. I’m just gonna say keep track of all your metaphors and make sure they serve more use than making it sound pretty.

Midnight
Challenge: As I said to others, wise choice using other big words to make the big word I gave you seem natural and flowing. Good job. Sorry but you’re the last one I’m doing and I didn’t feel like typing something new. Piir dat. I couldn’t remember what your word was, though, so extra good job
Overall: WHAAAAAT. You are lucky we are judging this because you are coming to slay. I don’t have anything to say about this. This, this is brilliant. I love it. And it’s a good thing I get to see these lyrics. That is all.

[UpAllNight]

Originally posted by EatmeZayn

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Are we getting comments or not? **** Midnight's last comment, he has two, that should suffice

Sis, you're probably gonna be in Zayn's stomach by the time the comments get posted.

[Hugamari]

Round 2 ~ Word of the Day Challenge
JadGhamloush96 - "Shark In Our Sea"

Well, let's just get straight to the challenge part of this. It doesn't fit. The word "indolence" was used to rhyme rather than utilized to the song.

Now, onto the rest of the song: I lost the sense and what the song was suppose to mean. Even in the hook; otherwise known as the focal point of the entire song; there were conflicting areas. You don't want to be the shark in you and your love's sea; understandable, but then you talk about sorrow. The animal in question you are comparing yourself has never, in a sense, been seen or identified as a sign of "sorrow" so it almost feels unmatched, in a bad way.

And then there was little sense in the verses. Again, like I said before, poeticism can only go so far if there's little meaning that can be interpreted. You never went into why you're a "shark in [your] sea", or you did with such little detail that never stuck. And some of the phrases had no connection to each other; they look like they were just placed together for a simple rhyme scheme rather than as a sensible story part.

Long story short, there's just no understanding and it's hard to interpret what you're trying to portray.

ImARudeBoy - "Incoherent"

Well, I don't have to guess what your word is. But, for some reason, why you named your song after it is... "incoherent".

Not sure how to say this, but this was corny. Very corny. And it was almost too easy to understand. I know I'm not asking you to write like you're Emily Dickinson, but the effort put into this was lost. Every line was cliché after cliché to the point where it was nonsensical. You don't have to try so hard to make it look good, because the important part is that it sounds aesthetically pleasing to the ear.

For a theme, it's not bad. Regret is a very accomplishable topic for songwriting, but again, the effort is lost. If I was the person you regret going against, I would not think you took the relationship seriously. Like you'll use every single line in the book just to try and get me back, and it just doesn't work.

It's okay work, but you can do better. Just don't try to out better your best, if you understand.

VDK - "Paragon"

I'm not against your story in any way, but for this challenge, you seemed to excessively define the word you were given. It's not so much that I was asking for the definition, I just wanted you to utilize the word you were given in an accessible way to others. Here, it just seems like there's only one way to use it.

Your story, however, is believable and understandable. It's not an amazing story, and it doesn't seem to have an end; although, that's more of a preference than a critique. It just seemed like there should've been some sort of ending that leaves us knowing that Lucy has some sort of resolution. That's all.

Hustler - "Say I'm the One"

I'm unsure who this was directed to. At one point, it seemed like you were talking to a fandom you've acquired, then I read the pre-chorus and it seemed more likely it was just one person you claim as the "queen of hearts". But, then bits and pieces of the song do not fit to make it wholly obvious. You got me guessing, so I guess that's not a bad sign.

You passed the challenge part effortlessly. I don't have to look at the word "scrutinize" and wonder what it means because I feel that a synonym of said word could fit their perfectly and I could grasp an understanding of what the word means.

Really, my only gripe are the unneeded metaphors you threw into here. I mean, "heart on fire", "queen of hearts", "hard to breathe"; these are clichés I would suggest avoiding in the future. They're not bad, but they serve more as focal points rather than verse lines.

So, good job. Just make your main focus clearer and avoid any unnecessary metaphors.

seanoh - No Medication

"What's a malady?"

That's the first question that's going to go into someone's head the second they read this. You tried to give an exposition as to what it was in the beginning of the song, but it was so far apart from the hook that I was completely thrown off by the word. You need to either lead into a word like that more clearly, or work it like a simile and compare the word "malady" to however you are feeling or experiencing so we'll get a more coherent idea of what the word means in this piece.

You had two metaphors working with and against you. You used the "affliction" of love as a sickness and as a catchy tune. Most wouldn't see this working together, and it's clear it could. But sometimes the delivery was too quick. I mean, you can keep both metaphors, just try to stick with one metaphor at a time as to not create conflict and tension between which is the more important metaphor we, as listeners, should be paying attention to.

So, great work, just watch where you put your maladies and melodies...

Disco_Blisters - "Didactic Love"

By name alone, I'm going to ask "what the heck does 'didactic' mean"?

And when I read your work, I'm still asking "what the heck does 'didactic' mean"? I mean, it seems like it would mean "informative", but I would've loved it more had you used it as it was originally intended. When someone is "didactic", they're more "avoidably preachy" and tries too hard to sound better than you by informing you of things you don't need to know necessarily. Sort of like what I'm saying if you don't take what I'm saying seriously...

Really, this entire piece rode on you using that word correctly. Not the safest bet. But, it's not that you didn't use the word incorrectly, but you didn't use it effectively. A didactic love should be one to appreciate for their advice on the subject, more like one to refuse their "advice". So, had you utilized the word in a line ineffectively, there would be no issue. But you based the entire topic on it, and it ended up ruining the song for me. Sorry...

Bahjat - "song!"

Love the name! J/K

Bahjat, word of advice. Know the word well before you use it, not just for this challenge, but for all challenges. You used "anomaly" as a describing word, rather than a thing which is how it is suppose to be used. However, I will skip over that seeing as you intended to use it correctly.

And because your writing is really on par with budding hit songwriters. I like how effortless your metaphors sound, especially "I wanna be the wind, not the house of cards". Seriously, good work on this. There were a few "obvious" ones, but they didn't tear me away from the song itself, and you did utilize your word (however incorrectly) effectively. So, great work Bahjat!

TeamRHI - "Acceptance"

You wrote my favorite song this week.

The story, the message, the beauty, yet sadness in it all: I mean, where was this last time? And I like how you incorporated "profane". I almost didn't realize that was your word.

I'm so in awe with this, I can barely compose something to tell you. Just keep doing what you're doing because you are doing fine.

Warrior - "Stain On Me"

You said the word almost a dozen times and I still am unsure what the word means.

This is what I picture: some songwriter wanted to use a cool word in his next song and found the word "indelible". He saw the definition and wanted to use it effectively. However, because he liked the word so much, he wanted it to be plastered all over the song so people will go home with the idea that he can use big words effectively. Now, I'm most likely wrong in my assumption since we gave you the word, but do you see why I would think that way? You can continuously use the word thinking we have the clear idea of what it means before you even use it. That's sloppy writing, and it's somewhat boastful.

And another thing I read: very effective song titles in your verses. "Love is Dark", "Un-Play These Cards", "You Give Love a Bad Name"; these are effective in the songwriting process, but not as single lines to issue a point. Because these are, say it with me, CLICHÉS, and the worst thing about using clichés in songwriting is that they stick out in the wrong way. They're only effective if you are basing the entire song on one of them, not all of them.

It's not your best, I feel.

Lucky#17 - "Backstabber"

Well, I won't take the time to go around your back, I'll just insert the knife right now.

"Commas, commas everywhere, and not one of them needs to be there." I'm assuming that you were separating your lines by commas as a sort of rhythm. Yeah, keep that for yourself, because it's going to look crazy to others.

And another thing I don't like is calling this person all these words and not explaining once why. I assumed you thought the hook was going to tell the story for you and we wouldn't need any explanation, but it doesn't work when it's the beginning of the piece.

And lastly, the challenge part. So, the word is used correctly, but not effectively. You tell someone they have a "cerebral way of thinking"... why!? Why does he/she have a cerebral way of thinking? If you leave us guessing, the audience is going to get confused. I mean, we're not asking for straight-up definitions, but you could use a little tact in describing why you were using that word.

But, the theme isn't bad. Just explain a little more please.

Erotic - "Maleficent"

I feel dumb. I don't like that.

It wasn't enough that you used malefactor in a less-appeasing way, you used almost every word possible to make it look like you were questionably ingenious. It was too much everywhere. It didn't read like a song, it read like a novel. When it comes to poetry and songwriting, it can't be too intelligent otherwise it won't be as poetic.

I mean, you used most of the words in an effective way, but it never stuck on me what you were really trying to portray. Are you this scholar reading the excerpt from a book? Are you some passing by philosopher who shares this brilliant story? Or, are you someone who tried too hard to not sound "not-so-smart"?

Really, as a poem, it probably be top-notch work. But for a song, I couldn't picture anyone picking this up and having the nerve to write a melody to it. Again, sorry...

e437

Let's kickstart this with "I like the direction you took with this song". Someone you once knew is now a stranger in your home: it feels dangerous, feels lonely, feels painful, but the feelings one should get in the synopsis are absent in the entirety of the song. For me, it felt more of a lost feeling than a painful one.

I liked how you used extraneous, but I wished you would've used it in a way that wasn't so obvious and oblivious at the same time. I mean, let's pretend I have absolutely no idea what that word meant. Reading the hook, I'm still having a hard time understanding what the word is suppose to mean and how it fits with the rest of the words. I know we threw you a curve ball with this word, but you have to be able to swing back with better meaning and better understanding.

I'm in love with the directions and risks you take, but this time, the delivery was lacking. So work on it for future reference and you could have a killer song here.

EatmeZayn

Ooh, u dirty...

Well, from what I'm reading, it's simple enough, but you tried to make it too poetic to the point that it was almost nonsense. I mean, what you wrote is beautiful lyricism, but pieced together, it's all lost together. Some of it was in wrong places, others were awkward wording, so try to avoid trying to sound like Emerson and more like whoever you see as a lyrical god(dess).

Onto the challenge part of your lyrics, this is the second time I'm seeing this. You have to use the word you were given in a way that it won't sound out-of-place or improperly used. Imagine if someone was reading this: by the time they got to the bridge, they would've asked "What the hell does 'prevaricate' mean?" The way to avoid someone saying that is putting said word in a place where you can get a vague understanding of what it means without having to look it up. Something like: "I don't want you to prevaricate / 'Cause you seem to avoid me like the plague". You'll get a vague idea of what the word means, and it won't stop someone from reading the entirety of the lyrics.

Other than that, exceptional lyricism, but watch how you use it and where it's place. Otherwise it will just end up looking like plain gibberish.

Remember

Yes, Remember, thank you for the definition. I am an idiot.

Aside from you giving us the definition (), I understood enough what the word dike meant. I didn't feel the need to look it up or see if you were using it correctly, because it felt correct where it was.

Your lyricism is on-point. Very glad you took the higher road and made it very emotional and very lyrical at the same time. My only gripe is that you also made it very literal. When it comes to lyricists and songwriters, the one thing they aim for is making the lyrics reachable to all kinds of people. Yours, on the other hand, seemed to be aimed only at those who used to date astronomer wannabes. While I don't mind who it was, it seemed unnecessary to put his dream occupation in a song about how you feel...

And, just nitpicking, the ending part was also unneeded. I know you probably wanted us to feel saddened at the end, but it just felt like extra that probably would've been lost to the listener.

Other than that, this was one of my favorites to read. It was well-written, it made sense, and you told a believable (albeit literal) story. Great job, Rem.


doodledot13


Had I not known, I would've thought your word was "armistice".

I'm liking the direction most of you guys are taking. It's really improving your thought process. I really do appreciate you using "antagonistic" in a sense that it doesn't feel unnecessary, but you also used it in a safer way than the others. It never really stuck on me that you have used this word before and can use it in any sense; it's almost like you know the definition and tried to fit it around a piece that calls for such word instead of utilizing it however you can.

Other than that, the theme is solid, the writing is spot-on, and the believability makes me feel like you've gone through this before. So, all-in-all, this is another favorite of the entries. I'm sure you won't have the same problem you had in this one in your next piece. We won't expect you to use words like armistice and antagonistic again...

[UpAllNight]

Originally posted by Remember

Who doesn't?



Except for the judges cuz I'm a trite bitch.

[EatmeZayn]

Originally posted by Bahjat

Sis, you're probably gonna be in Zayn's stomach by the time the comments get posted.

mmm I'd rather have some of Zayn in MY stomach tbh.

[Remmy]

Originally posted by Hugamari

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Originally posted by Hugamari

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[EatmeZayn]

Originally posted by Hugamari

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[Auris]

Originally posted by Bahjat

Sis, you're probably gonna be in Zayn's stomach by the time the comments get posted.

nnnnnnnn delete this post so the comments can all be together

[Auris]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Nait's comments reserve space. Use ctrl + f to find your name unless you are midnight, none of the contestants give 2 ****s about you.

[UpAllNight]

Originally posted by EatmeZayn

mmm I'd rather have some of Zayn in MY stomach tbh.

Sis, I don't think it's THAT long.

[Remmy]

Originally posted by TeamRHI

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Right, I was thinking the same. That combo breaker.

[Prometheus.]

Thanks for the positive feedback Huga!

I actually built my pre-chorus around "limbo" and "deserve so low"

[UpAllNight]

Originally posted by TeamRHI

nnnnnnnn delete this post so the comments can all be together

No. I did it on purpose so us, the contestants catch some air.

[Remmy]

waiT, I got positive feedback for the first time so far and we're only 1/3 through..

I'm already crying

[EatmeZayn]

Originally posted by Bahjat

Sis, I don't think it's THAT long.

aklfjadlk; I meant something else sis. Skeet skeet hun.