Hey, do y'all think these lyrics are too explicitly obvious with the meaning. I wrote them in like 3 minutes to see if I could brainstorm any good lines for this song. I'll probably end up not using a lot of it.
Empyrean
Angels flew
Twelve whole years looking down on you
Let’s share this view
I think this has been overdue
Yes, this has been overdue
You’re coming home
You’re coming home
A life was had
And though we can never go back
Don’t be sad
Now we’re done with all of the bad
You’re coming home
You’re coming home
You’re coming home
Let the strings sing you a tune
Dancing around a neighboring moon
We can be happy
You’re coming home
You’re coming home
You’re coming home
You’re coming home
(if you look up "Empyrean" it's super obvious what the song is about

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I was feeling inspired because I just finishing writing the music and producing the instrumental to this song. This song is some heartbreaking ****
