I'm definitely one of the more mixed reviews. I know dat.
I think I'll rank higher than last week, but still get slightly dragged. Maybe #8 or #9 overall.
Very glad you took the higher road and made it very emotional and very lyrical at the same time.
...it never stuck on me what you were really trying to portray.
Not sure how to say this, but this was corny.
Other than that, the theme is solid, the writing is spot-on, and the believability makes me feel like you've gone through this before.
...what you wrote is beautiful lyricism, but pieced together, it's all lost together.
You wrote my favorite song this week.
