I DONT KNOW about YOU mATTY
but SOME of US are BUSIER than JUST flicking our TWATS to Demi and Ariana VOCAL RANGE videos on youtube okay
YOU dont KNOW HA life
MAybE she just didn't havE THE ****ing TIME MAYBE she WAS TIRED
But YOu're 12 SO 0f COURSE u WOULDNT know u FUćKING WannaBE CUMDumpSTER
akskksgal, I hate you
We were talking the whole week! The most he did was watch Big Brother!
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Originally posted by 8thPrince
I think the stressing in Matty's song was fine. Just a little variation on iambic tetrameter
Thanks for defending my stressings
Did you post reviews yet? Let me go back a few pages
Tylerbv – 17
Bish I have a song with this title too, dafuq? OK but this was your best entry the second week in the row. Once again, there’s a few imperfections, but it was much more song-like and consistent than anything else you’ve submitted as well as sounding more poetic. The concept was great and there were some amazing lines (“You’re all gonne love me when I’m high/And I’ll finally love myself too”). You should have excluded the bathroom floor line as well as the “tears” line in the chorus and “hoping” in the second verse. “Ragged” seemed unnecessary next to the word pill. The bridge was great, especially the last lines. And this is just a random note but “Who I Am Sober” would have been a cool alternative title for this.
Mess. Looks like age titles and mechanical horses are the new thing. The acclaim for my prechorus Yeah a few of those lines were a little awkward, but I liked the points I was trying to get across. Thanks for the good review
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Originally posted by CountryBritney
Tylerbv's gonna snatch the crown in the end with his constant improving
ok reviewing batch 2 now. It's the only chance I got.
I had a really bad day but please remember I am human. And now I can't even take a shower cause maintenance is doing something. So I must review without showering. I apologize in advance to those in batch 2.
ok reviewing batch 2 now. It's the only chance I got.
I had a really bad day but please remember I am human. And now I can't even take a shower cause maintenance is doing something. So I must review without showering. I apologize in advance to those in batch 2.
ok reviewing batch 2 now. It's the only chance I got.
I had a really bad day but please remember I am human. And now I can't even take a shower cause maintenance is doing something. So I must review without showering. I apologize in advance to those in batch 2.
