[Vulnicura]

still have no idea what song to do a sequel for

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Hugamari

When is Temporine going to add that to the OP? Even though I think I have it down, it might be nice to look back on.

He endorsed them in the judge chat so I'm sure he'll add them later.

4-6 will be I'm a few hours and I might add a 7th for cliches and poetic devices if I'm feeling frisky

[ceremonials]

I think my Lanslide sequel might be called "Mirror in the Sky" but I'm not 100% sure I like it

#36 Origin
#21 Stockholm Syndrome
#16 False Prophet
#15 Ceremonials
#13 Madness Ends
#8 Unholy Night
#8 Unholy Night + Madness Ends
#8 Anchor
#? Mirror in the Sky (?)

[feelslikeadream]

Oooh, I was gonna do tips the last season I judged.

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

still have no idea what song to do a sequel for

I see Lorde is in your sig.

Do a see sequel to "Royals" about how Hollywood and Taylpr Swift turned Lorde into the thing she said she'd never be.

[Tylerbv]

I've had the song since like the hour the challenge was announced, but I still haven't started my song

[Musickid203]

What do you call those poles on the sidewalk that lightning hits when it's raining. I need it for one of my lyrics and I can't remember the name

[8thPrince]

Originally posted by Musickid203

What do you call those poles on the sidewalk that lightning hits when it's raining. I need it for one of my lyrics and I can't remember the name

Lightning rods?

[Cupid]

Regarding the tips, meter and stressing are what I struggle with.

Because I only write poetry and these are the first songs I've written, i'm used to making the meter try and be exactly perfect. I've been trying to work on my meter and make it sounds more "song-like", I think I did it with this song.

And stressing is hard for me because of my accent/where i'm from, when I read it aloud it's different from y'all.

[Achilles.]

I think there's a decent chance that Fruit Loops is the only participant who has heard of the song I'm currently working with. #obscure

Originally posted by Musickid203

What do you call those poles on the sidewalk that lightning hits when it's raining. I need it for one of my lyrics and I can't remember the name

Lightning rods, but I've never seen them on sidewalks before.

Originally posted by Vision

And stressing is hard for me because of my accent/where i'm from, when I read it aloud it's different from y'all.

But you Brits (Adele, Sam, Leona, etc) always sound American when you sing.

[Musickid203]

I was thinking of a telephone pole

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by Vision

Regarding the tips, meter and stressing are what I struggle with.

Because I only write poetry and these are the first songs I've written, i'm used to making the meter try and be exactly perfect. I've been trying to work on my meter and make it sounds more "song-like", I think I did it with this song.

And stressing is hard for me because of my accent/where i'm from, when I read it aloud it's different from y'all.

ok duck!

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Achilles.

But you Brits (Adele, Sam, Leona, etc) always sound American when you sing.

Adele sounds British when she sings imo.

Just look at Paloma, Bowie, Amy etc

[swiftie13]

Jackson being helpful when will tampon? Ironically nicknamed after a very helpful device!

[Musickid203]

[Temporal]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Jackson being helpful when will tampon? Ironically nicknamed after a very helpful device!

[Achilles.]

I finished a song.

But there are two days left, so I'll wait and see if I come up with anything else cause I've got a few other ideas, still.

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I finished a song.

But there are two days left, so I'll wait and see if I come up with anything else cause I've got a few other ideas, still.

What song did you use

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by ceremonials

What song did you use

"The Bridge" by Dolly Parton.

It's about a woman who falls in love with a man on a bridge and they always meet there and one night they have sex and she gets pregnant and then he leaves her and she goes to the bridge and it's implied that she jumps off. My sequel "The River" reveals that she survived the fall.


It was apparently very controversial when it was released back in 1968

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by Achilles.

"The Bridge" by Dolly Parton.

It's about a woman who falls in love with a man on a bridge and they always meet there and one night they have sex and she gets pregnant and then he leaves her and she goes to the bridge and it's implied that she jumps off. My sequel "The River" reveals that she survived the fall.


It was apparently very controversial when it was released back in 1968