[Tymps.]

I should talk with Huga to see if judges can become mentors

[Remmy]

Sent.

Buy KiNG, my full exclusive Platinum Hit 3 LP, on 9/24:

(not to be confused with Lifetime - my Platinum Hit 3 compilation album, which is due to be released after this game ends and includes the top 12 hits LIFETIME + CHASING STARS)

[VDK]

Okay, gonna get writing

[VDK]

VDK - Love story (I am making one myself, so don't let me down, k? )

Uhmmm, do I sense shade?? Am I meant to be offended by this?? Lyk I'm really asking you...like a question. Should I???

Y d weeping

[Tymps.]

Hey guys, I wrote a song today and would love some feedback! Here's the lyrics:

Rainbows & Black Holes

I think I fear the other side
Of rainbows and black holes
If only I could run and hide
Before gravity takes its toll

With butterflies and blue-ish eyes
And darknesses alone
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

I think I fear just asking it
Or calling out its name
If only I could quit
To come back later in the game

With butterflies and blue-ish eyes
And darknesses so cold
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

Would rays of sun sting even more?
Would we burn up at the Earth’s core?
Would our names be engraved or washed up ashore?
We’ll never know the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

I think I fear the answers too
Of thoughts so late at night
Stay looking up at skies so blue
With thoughts you try to fight

With cyanide and crystal eyes
Fixated on their goal
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

Would rays of sun sting even more?
Would we burn up at the Earth’s core?
Would our names be engraved or washed up ashore?
We’ll never know the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

These butterflies and blue-ish eyes
These darknesses so cold
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

[VDK]

My song title: 3 WORDS

This song made me go to places Im not ready to go

I honestly wish I find a love like the one I describe

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by AdamAL4

Hey guys, I wrote a song today and would love some feedback! Here's the lyrics:

Rainbows & Black Holes

I think I fear the other side
Of rainbows and black holes
If only I could run and hide
Before gravity takes its toll

With butterflies and blue-ish eyes
And darknesses alone
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

I think I fear just asking it
Or calling out its name
If only I could quit
To come back later in the game

With butterflies and blue-ish eyes
And darknesses so cold
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

Would rays of sun sting even more?
Would we burn up at the Earth’s core?
Would our names be engraved or washed up ashore?
We’ll never know the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

I think I fear the answers too
Of thoughts so late at night
Stay looking up at skies so blue
With thoughts you try to fight

With cyanide and crystal eyes
Fixated on their goal
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

Would rays of sun sting even more?
Would we burn up at the Earth’s core?
Would our names be engraved or washed up ashore?
We’ll never know the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

These butterflies and blue-ish eyes
These darknesses so cold
We’ll never find the other side
Of rainbows and black holes

Are you sure you want my feedback? With y'all calling me this game's "Simon"...

[Remmy]

Originally posted by AdamAL4

If only I could quit
To come back later in the game

foreshadowing?

Originally posted by VDK

My song title: 3 WORDS

hey Cheryl Cole hey

[Prometheus.]

Rainbows, Adam? Rainbows?

Subliminal messages?

[doodledot13]

Sent

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by VDK

Uhmmm, do I sense shade?? Am I meant to be offended by this?? Lyk I'm really asking you...like a question. Should I???

Y d weeping

I don't use emoticons at all if I am being serious, so don't take it do hard.

[VDK]

Oh, okay...was just clarifiying...no hard feelings.

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by ImARudeBoy

Rainbows, Adam? Rainbows?

Subliminal messages?

I used rainbows & black holes because they contrast with each other, kinda creating a sense of chaos right off the bat.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Hugamari

I don't use emoticons at all if I am being serious, so don't take it do hard.

Lemme extend on this statement a bit. I actually chose you for the Love Story theme because I knew you could do wonderful things with it.

I think you impressed all the judges with your WotD challenge, with the major improvement we saw. I figured we would be able to continue seeing that if I gave you this challenge. In a way, that's why I said what I said in parenthesis.

Oh, and deadline is moved to the end of Saturday, so if you do not have your entries in, do not feel rushed.

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Are you sure you want my feedback? With y'all calling me this game's "Simon"...

Mess. Gimme the feedback.

[Auris]

I'm making this way harder than it should be

[doodledot13]

Is mine received?

[Warrior]

I literally have 1 hour to write this omfg

[Tymps.]

I might not be able to judge this weekend

I'm really busy for the next two, three days. I know someone who can replace me Huga

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by doodledot13

Is mine received?

Yes, sorry for not updating the Op with it.