[Auburn]

the clashings in this thread tonight

[Citrus]

I wasn't trying to condescend, I was trying to be blunt since you said you were tired and I'd already explained in more nuance to Jpow. You're obviously good if you did well last week and even got Hug praise, but don't ask me for advice when you said, and I quote, "[you] wanted to go top 5" and then get mad at me for it.

I'm sorry I'm not a "this was great and very you " kinda reviewer, but if you want that CB edit you gon have to turn in a CB level song first. She had her moment in R4, so can you henny.

[keshaspearsxo]

What does egregious mean!

[Corsola]

I didn't ask you for advice, jpow did and I didn't object. He also told me to come see what you had to say so I did. I don't think it was just you trying to be blunt because I was tired, I think that's just your general personality. Of course I wanna go top 5 but I know it's unrealistic since this is my first season with no experience and honestly I'm just trying to consistently improve each week.

And I don't mind if you're not a nice reviewer. Temporal was ruthless to me R1 and this round too while Cupid was ruthless R2 but I can still see where they were both coming from. The thing that irked me about that conversation with you was that it felt like you gave off such an air of superiority that I was just like ''okay, work''. I wasn't gonna comment on it but it clearly showed again when you told me ''maybe next time you'll trust me, xo'' because I didn't completely erase my whole concept and do a concept YOU created instead.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

What does egregious mean!

The fact that you don't know what "egregious" means exposes an egregious error in your education!

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Gladion

AHHHHH the scream i let out As a frequent wendy watcher this really got me

Phresh really is the only one who can do comedy well in here imo. Like the topic and content of the songs are so random and should be bad, but somehow it's so good lol. I really hope this goes top 10

This is true he's the only one who's ever made me laugh

[jpow]

mess at all roads leading back to me.

let me say i love hearing advice from others. especially since i know citrus is good (obviously won last season). so that wasn't cors, that was me. i also wanted cors to come so we could both hear it at once thinking that would be easier. i do think citrus was a little more blunt in our chat than needed be, but like citrus said he had explained that to me already and it was a lot softer. i don't think it came from a malicious place

anyway i love you both citrus and cors

[Citrus]

Literally I told you that the imaginary friend/coming of age was your best bet out of the two concepts you were working with, I never told you to go with something that you hadn't already come up with.

And miss me with I'm just an asshole and a mean person. I thought I was Bianca helping Adore, but it seems you got more Courtney helping Joslyn. So I'm sorry if I was too blunt in my review. But pls understand it didn't come from a place f "ooh lemme watch this bitch do bad", bc if it did I wouldn't bother writing a critique at all. It came from a place of love and I'm sorry you didn't feel that. </3

[SaintWest]

Originally posted by RihsusChrist(ATG)

Oh the judge, jury, and executioner has arrived...who are you to judge how a person should feel in a situation?
I'm not getting into another argument with you about what you feel is a legitimate entry or not...I'm not wasting anymore energy arguing with your soulless, droll opinions.

To explain my portion of the song...the Hunters would be the murderers...as in the shooting in the club has already happened, and his mothers final criticism causes him to snap, lose it, go crazy, lose control, go into a rage...you do understand that emotion, if you actually feel emotions that is???

Have you ever listened to a rap song...all the swearing that is in those songs? Must not have if your virgin ears sting from what I wrote!
Now the the thing that really hurts my feelings is that you would even insinuate...INSINUATE that my contribution to the song is in some way an intentional hindrance to my teammate, beatinglikeadrum!

Judge our entries separately...he worked hard on his and I worked hard on mine. I still stand by our entry in what we were trying to convey, but if my part not being associated with his gets beatinglikeadrum in the next round Im all for that.

I had fun working on that song with him, it was a cool experience.



Since the great and powerful HUGAMARI has spoken...feel free to pile on.

Hmm..let me try to put it another way.

I'm all for people finding new ways to creatively express themselves, or using certain themes/ideas/events and putting a unique spin on them. Even in Hug's review, he wasn't necessarily bashing the concept, just the execution.

The Orlando shooting was a historically tragic event that is still something that affects people today, and will for many years. Especially for a lot of members here on ATRL, who are apart LGBTQ+ community, we feel personally connected to it. That being said, anything to do with the shooting should be handled very carefully. Again, I'm all for creative expression, but there is a time and place for everything. I haven't read your full song, but, it just seems pretty tasteless. The metaphors and lyrical choices you make, I just can't see any justifiable reason.

“Oh, we’re in a night club and some crazed maniac is going around killing people?"
"Not gonna lie, seeing you suffer, you try to utter, as blood gushes further!”
“Beg for forgiveness, but I'm f***ing vicious, your carcass delicious!!”

Although these lyrics may mean something else to you, you have to be very aware, especially in cases like this, how your lyrics might be interpreted by your readers.

Imagine if someone had done this song, but about Sandy Hook. Kinda see my point?

[PhreshDiamond]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

This is true he's the only one who's ever made me laugh

[Citrus]

Also back on the road so no replies xo

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by SaintWest

Hmm..let me try to put it another way.

I'm all for people finding new ways to creative express themselves, or using certain themes/ideas/events and putting a unique spin on them. Even in Hug's review, he wasn't necessarily bashing the concept, just the execution.

The Orlando shooting was a historically tragic event that is still something that affects people today, and will for many years. Especially for a lot of members here on ATRL, who are apart LGBTQ+ community, we feel personally connected to it. That being said, anything to do with the shooting should be. Again, I'm all for creative expression, but there is a time and place for everything. I haven't read your full song, but, it just seems pretty tasteless. The metaphors and lyrical choices you make, I just can't see any justifiable reason.

“Oh, we’re in a night club and some crazed maniac is going around killing people? *sigh*”
"Not gonna lie, seeing you suffer, you try to utter, as blood gushes further!”
“Beg for forgiveness, but I'm f***ing vicious, your carcass delicious!!”

Although these lyrics may mean something else to you, you have to be very aware, especially in cases like this, how your lyrics might be interpreted by your readers.

Imagine if someone had done this song, but about Sandy Hook. Kinda see my point?

The first one was me paraphrasing, or rather, putting a line into context. He didn't actually write that.

But thank you for your input anyway. It really isn't a personal attack.

[Dylobs]

Now that you mention it I do have a problem with Lusamari.


Bitch still hasn't responded to my wall post you nasty thot

[Corsola]

Well when you're laughing at my concept and saying that we'll be getting eliminated if we use it and that it just won't work for a song then offering your concept in place of it, I'm not sure what else you're implying.

I didn't call you either of those things, but if that's what popped into your head...

Anyway, I still respect you as a writer and you're clearly much better than me. I didn't object to your idea out of spite or anything, I just liked the concept that I made (Hug did too) and I wanted to go through with it rather than using someone else's. I'm not saying you're an asshole or mean in general, but I definitely think your overall attitude was condescending not just that day but also in this thread with the comment that started this all and I'm not gonna just ignore that and let you belittle me.

[keshaspearsxo]

Did somebody actually write about Pulse

[Corsola]

I posted that before you edited but I'll just make it clear that I still like you and think you're super talented obviously since you're doing much better than me. I'm just not the type to stay silent when things bother me

[Citrus]

What a song about it, sleigh next round with a catchy bop about standing up to bullies

[Jackson]

Wow @ all these feuds but I'm not involved in any of them

[Dylobs]

I'll call Bey Admired for you

[Jackson]

My and Citrus's concept were obviously way better than anyone else. You're all flops and deserve to be eliminated since we're clearly the most talented here.