[Gladion]

Thanks lovesong!

[Temporal]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

praying 4 us

Girl you don't need prayers Low-key so proud of you slaying

[Pecinta Mariah]

3 positive and 2 mixed

[Temporal]

Damn LS stanned? 3 positive, 2 negative. Versatile chanteuse!

[Tymps.]

Thanks to all the judges, you're my faes

[Marvin]

44. Marvin – Fading
It’s super simple but feels like a real pop song. I wish you went a bit further though. Other people were similarly way below the word limit but they were able to concisely get the theme across due to word choice. While I like how yours is simpler in it’s approach and easily accessible, I’d like to see you add some more to the verses to really help your song come together.

Thanks for the constructive criticism

I'm probably out though

[Truffle.]

3 positive and 2 mixed

[Jack!]

Thanks for the comments lovesong!

Alright, roll on the results whenever they may be.

[minho]

Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah

if I may ask, which lines were strong/weak?

but anyway thank you so much, I loved the verses too

Sorry I meant to include examples

Personally liked lines like:
The darkness is around enfolding me
I'm longing for the light to shine brightly

But didn't like some of the ones that actually kind of don't make sense:
My presence was destined to be alone
and
Never will my love over, it lingers

Like grammatically or in terms of syntax it doesn't quite work.

[TheCheetahwings]

23. TheCheetahWings – Duplicity
It was a nice song and concept but the line “your love is duplicity” really ruined the chorus for me, which is kind of awkward since it’s the frame of your song nn. However, the actual writing was well thought out, the verses were interesting and the idea behind the song was emotional. I felt like you could go even further and push yourself more, but it’s not bad.

Oops, two people that didn't like "your love is duplicity" while Sam says it elevated the song Not sure what to think But I'm glad you liked it okay.

[conatus]

Knowing this will be the song that breaks my top 10 streak.

[minho]

Originally posted by Jack!

Thanks for the comments lovesong!

Alright, roll on the results whenever they may be.

Results will probably not be for a while. Sam got me to post my own comments because he's really busy at work so I assume it'll be posted once he's back.

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by conatus

Knowing this will be the song that breaks my top 10 streak.

music not the bling

[Buyonce1814]

27. Buyonce1814 – Bitter Pill
This really hit home with me. Emotionally it’s tight, really well focused and comes across nicely in writing. I like how some of the lines were a bit simpler but still felt natural. It started really strong which I love but I did feel like the momentum kind of tapered off a bit. It is still a good entry though so definitely keep it up!

Thank you lovesong! I was really hoping the song would resonate with people and it seems to have done so. Really means a lot.

[conatus]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

music not the bling

conatus is OVER. Baroque pop EMERGENCY.

[minho]

Originally posted by conatus

Knowing this will be the song that breaks my top 10 streak.

not when I stanned your entry

Originally posted by TheCheetahwings

Oops, two people that didn't like "your love is duplicity" while Sam says it elevated the song Not sure what to think But I'm glad you liked it okay.

Eh it's all a matter of personal preference. It didn't really drag your score or anything, I was just commenting that it didn't quite work for me.

At the end of the day, keep what you feel is write and that is what will ensure it comes across naturally.

[Moonchild]

40. Moonchild – Over The Moon
Okay this is super cute, the imagery and word choice was brilliant and the emotion really came through which can be difficult when it’s so concise. I like that it’s hopeful yet also a little dark. Really good job with this, it was a unique structure that felt very effective.

Thank you, lovesong! I didn't know the song came across as hopeful, but it's interesting to see how people read it.

[conatus]

Originally posted by lovesong

not when I stanned your entry

[Tender'ly clutches plaque.]

[URBAN]

At this point, I just want to make it through to the top 30.

[Achilles.]

I Got Skill's praise.