[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Moonchild

Thank you!

My mixed-to-positive reviews. ARTPOP teas.

You did better than my comments would lead you to believe. Huh.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Hugamari

**** half of my discography is sex songs, I'd have to do like a Top 10 or something.

ddd I have 0, my discog is all moody love songs, Taylor teas.

[Hugamari]

Also, if you homosicles can remind me (I NEVER REMEMBER, NO SHADE WAS EVER INTENDED), I will make the song title of the Songwriter's Thread based on the song you wrote to win the round. (This is obviously only if you win the round!)

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

ddd I have 0, my discog is all moody love songs, Taylor teas.

We're one and the same. Selena/Demi tea. I'm the better one, so you're Demi.

[ceremonials]

Kiss it better, kiss it better
DONT IT TASTE LIKE HOLY WATER?

[Element]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Not you stealing from Ellie

[Hugamari]

I also hope none of you guys form resentment towards me I actually found out I went IN on one of my friends. I'm just doing what I was hired to do.

[jpow]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Not you stealing from Ellie

Is it surprising though?

(lyrics aren't anything alike though )

[Achilles.]

I can count my sex songs on like 2 fingers. Would you write about the sex if you've never done the sex?

Originally posted by ceremonials

Yes. why?

Send it my way.

[minho]

Originally posted by Hugamari

I also hope none of you guys form resentment towards me I actually found out I went IN on one of my friends. I'm just doing what I was hired to do.

Literally same.

I told someone whose songwriting I usually really like that they'd get better with "practice" ETERNAL SKULL.

[Achilles.]

The girl in the dress wrote you a song.
You should've known.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by JakeKills

I can count my sex songs on like 2 fingers. Would you write about the sex if you've never done the sex?

Literally that's my aesthetic.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by JakeKills

The girl in the dress wrote you a song.
You should've known.

Shut up, twig

[Hugamari]

I can't wait til the round is over so I can tell y'all my personal Top 10...or maybe even just my scores in general.

EDIT: @JakeKills my post count has 1989 in it, will I see The Lord's light in this time period?

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by JakeKills

I can count my sex songs on like 2 fingers. Would you write about the sex if you've never done the sex?

I've never had sex yet I have a few sex bops on my new album cuz it's all about learning to love myself the right way

[Jaxswim]

Okay finally read Huga's comments, thanks bae! I'm getting the message here that my meter was unique and good but my lyrics were basic. I can fix that.

Originally posted by Hugamari

The Real Thing - Absolutely ADORE the meter in this one. It's creative and catchy. I was bopping! The repetitive chorus was annoying, especially since we can't really hear what you hear, but it's whatever. Also thank you for using some slant rhymes it's much appreciated.

[Colton Haynes]

Is this good? I need constructive criticism please

Release Me

How many times do I have to say
I’m never coming back again
You don’t understand
I try so hard to tell you
But you break me down every time

Why do I keep crawling back to you?
I know you’re not good for me
Why do I keep putting myself through this?
You’ll never have what I need

So just let me go
Release the hold you have on me
Cause I can’t breathe

So just let me be
I don’t wanna take anything from you
I’m scared to run, cause I always come back
But I, don’t want to run this time

[swiftie13]

My sex songs are so erugh. I am usually too shy to ever go straight to the point so they become way to flowery to be sexual. I've written a couple where thay has worked and it's really sensual but other (most) times it's so try hard. I'm better off writing about other things I guess. Though I do like the sex

[Jaxswim]

lovesong/Hugamari since yall are here right now, I had a (tragic) prototype version of my song, do yall mind if I post it to tell me what you would have scored it?

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by Colton Haynes

Is this good? I need constructive criticism please

Release Me

How many times do I have to say
I’m never coming back again
You don’t understand
I try so hard to tell you
But you break me down every time

Why do I keep crawling back to you?
I know you’re not good for me
Why do I keep putting myself through this?
You’ll never have what I need

So just let me go
Release the hold you have on me
Cause I can’t breathe

So just let me be
I don’t wanna take anything from you
I’m scared to run, cause I always come back
But I, don’t want to run this time

Well it doesn't rhyme but I like it.