That's a fair criticism! However from the interludes I've heard, they rarely have a typical song structure. But I may have been able to execute it better. Thank for the feedback hung
I don't want to give away too much! You'll find out with my comments tomorrow. (also I have no idea since to me everything is still anonymous)
Chances are I did like it though. Even songs that I scored a 6 I still enjoyed regardless of what I pointed out. There were only a very select few that I felt were not enjoyable to read.
Masquerade - I love the way this reads...like it's a lullaby or something...maybe not quite that, but the word escapes me. Regardless, it was pleasant to read with the way you structured it. I also like how you compared masquerade masks to the way people put up facades to who or how they really are. Very solid entry, overall!
why?