[jpow]

Last season I wrote songs that were just kinda random, and this season I'm going to try to write more about my experiences and so far my song this round seems to have been received better than any of mine from last year so I'll keep doing it

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I like Ariana and the new album, but I agree in ways. I like her music, but it lacks depth. It's very surface level, despite her supposedly writing some of her songs now you can't really tell. She doesn't have any unique viewpoints or any particular topics of interest explored in her music. That said, her music is good at the most basic level, being pleasent to listen to.

Oh, yeah, don't get me wrong, I like the new songs. I just wish that I got more of which side she was coming from. Does she still want to be R&B Ariana or does she want to be dance pop Ariana or maybe she wants to finally tackle something out of her element?

I just think it's too early for her to be taking so many chances.

[Temporal]

Lord at the essays on the last page

Meghan is over

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Temporal

Lord at the essays on the last page

Meghan is over

What can I say? We're writers.

[Navyofbadgals]

Thank You is the worst album of the year

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Navyofbadgals

Thank You is the worst album of the year

This is What the Truth Feels Like & Views say otherwise…

[minho]

Greedy is still a perfect song though. I'm so glad Ariana did this

also: https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz

[Navyofbadgals]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

This is What the Truth Feels Like & Views say otherwise…

I never listened to the first one and Thank You has Mom so...

[KeshasFansRose]

Meghan opening the album with lines like "I've been on a low hater diet" made me almost turn off. Who ok'd this?

[Navyofbadgals]

Originally posted by lovesong

Greedy is still a perfect song though. I'm so glad Ariana did this

Yass preach !

[Temporal]

Still haven't listened to Greedy

[Gladion]

Yeah. The moonlight side of the album and dangerous woman side of the album contradict itself kind of and it bugs me a bit, but musically it's cohesive. It's kind of nice though, I would of been annoyed if the whole album was calling herself dangerous, it would of felt tired by track 6. So there is a good balance between the soft side of the dangerous woman and the dark side of her too

[Gladion]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Oh, yeah, don't get me wrong, I like the new songs. I just wish that I got more of which side she was coming from. Does she still want to be R&B Ariana or does she want to be dance pop Ariana or maybe she wants to finally tackle something out of her element?

I just think it's too early for her to be taking so many chances.

why does she have to choose? She does both well so why not do both?

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

why does she have to choose? She does both well so why not do both?

Because, there really are a million "both" audiences… if she knocked one audience out early, then it's okay to move on the next, but if she's still trying to choose at this point… you can please some of the people all of the time or some of the time, but not all the people all the time…

[Vulnicura]

I don't really enjoy writing songs about personable experiences tbh. I like to keep some things to myself but this probably roots back to last season and this last challenge where my songs aren't that relatable.

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by 8th Prince

19. mxtthewdelrey
You know, this reminds me of something that could be on Lolita Storm's GFSU. It's got a bratty vibe, and it has a perceivable personality and voice, unlike a lot of other entries. There's something other contestants could take from this admittedly strange entry.

Because of the voicing of the piece, the simplistic diction actually works. The rhyming is there, as well. The thing that is truly off is the metering, which I've touched on in a lot of entries. Getting the syllable count between lines to match is the basic start to smoothing that out.

You know, besides the addition of a strong meter, with a few layers of polish and some great punchlines/witty one-liners, this would've been an entry to beat, for me.

oh my god, thank you so so much I love you!

[Obsession]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

This is What the Truth Feels Like & Views say otherwise…

They actually confirm how horrible TY is. The worst pop album in quite some time.

Talk about an album with nothing to say.

[Cupid]

Thanks for the feedback 8th!

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

When you're playing platinum hit there is basically two ways to play: writing songs in the hope that you love them, or writing songs in the hope that the judges love them. Obviously, the two can be intertwined, but one always has to outweigh the other. What's more important to you, making yourself happy or making the judges happy?

Tbh i'm only doing this for myself, I appreciate the feedback but I lowkey don't really care. Just writing for fun and I like what I've written so far. When i'm eliminated i'll go, until then I'll keep doing me.
No shade.

[swiftie13]

Dangerous Woman scalped me. Quite easily my favorite Ari album and YT was amaaazzzing. Maybe because I had a cute boy in bed next to me while listening to it, but I really do love it

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Dangerous Woman scalped me. Quite easily my favorite Ari album and YT was amaaazzzing. Maybe because I had a cute boy in bed next to me while listening to it, but I really do love it

You put the "hor" in whøre tbh



Did you listen to Touch It?