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Originally posted by Allie
How the **** did you get a 10 on the essay pls help
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Strong thesis
- addresses all parts of the question AND uses complex language.
- learn some vocab that can be used fairly easily
- my prompt was about self discipline & my thesis was "although many people say self discipline opposes inherent enjoyment, many successful people have found solace and enjoyment in self discipline"
3 examples (1 per each paragraph)
- you can even make things up.. I did
Conclusion
- restate thesis
- overarching themes need to be addressed here