I’m Gay : I thought this was a solid entry, but I think you could deliver a better song. I thought the first verse started off very steady and well written, but the tumor line is kinda awkward and felt like a forced use of imagery. The second verse was far better than the first. I didn’t like the line “The straight you saw, was a disguise” I get what you were going for with the line, but it felt very stiff and could’ve been worded better.I did love the pre-chorus though, and it was my second favorite part of the song besides the bridge. Plus, I thought the concept was great, truly Cat Venti’s Break Your Heart Right Back.
Mushy Gushy : Relatable chanteuse. Your song titles are always so amusing to me, they’re so unique and fun and always leave me interested to see what you deliver. This is my favorite song of yours honestly. My favorite part of the song were the verses, they were brilliantly well written. The chorus was simple yet effective and had a very catchy tune to it that made the song more enjoyable. I don’t think there was anything about your song I disliked at all, while mushy gushy is an awkward phrase I think you pulled it off very well in the song and it worked.
Forever In A Moment :This so far sounds like a summer bop I would hear on the radio, and I wouldn’t turn it off. My favorite lyric from the first verse, is the vacation/summer breeze line. I don’t think the second half of the verse lives up to the first. The first half of the pre-chorus doesn’t really make much sense, mainly for the killing line. The chorus reminds me of Unwritten by Natasha in a good way of course. I didn’t really like the first half of the second verse, mostly for the life is a number’s game line. I did love the second half, the constellation line was everything. The bridge is cute but doesn’t really do much for me. You were way too hard on yourself this week, you wrote a cute summer’s bop.
To You : This must be dedicated to Cat Venti’s grandpa. It also kinda reminds me of Mariah’s Bye Bye. The first verse is so sad and well written, always here for storytelling lyrics. The lyrics are very simple yet effective. I’m mixed on the fighting line in the pre-chorus, it works, but I feel like you could’ve said this in a more descriptive way. The chorus is perfect and bittersweet though. The second verse is so sad as well, lowkey getting me emotional. I think the bridge is my favorite part just because it’s so sad and it hits hard.
Thanks anyway Matty, glad you enjoyed it for the most part.
This was very left-wing of me, I started off writing a Country song at the start of the week and had no effort to write it and just went off with a risky idea and wrote that song in a few hours.
You've said the same thing after like every review
I said it after all the ones that gave criticisms because I want the judges to know I'm taking it on board and I appreciate the time and effort they put into it.
YAAAAAAAAAAS. Omg thank you Matty! I can already hear Ariana Cat singing this on a small personal stage during a fan event and getting choked up during the last chorus and it'd be like this cute bonding moment that her fans and her will remember forever.
YAAAAAAAAAAS. Omg thank you Matty! I can already hear Ariana Cat singing this on a small personal stage during a fan event and getting choked up during the last chorus and it'd be like this cute bonding moment that her fans and her will remember forever.
Cat is going to SMASH with this one.
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