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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
^^ UFO would probably love this
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I hate it.
Jk
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Originally posted by BILLIONAIRE✘BOY
Ok, this is a part of the darker project ive been working on
Its a bit slower and deals with the passing of your lover
 IN THE DARKEST HOUR
(Verse 1)
In the darkest hour//
Of each and everyday//
Youre soul comes to me ... and tells me its okay//
In the darkest hour//
I lose faith in everything//
I'll get a new heart in due time//
You took the one I had with you when you died//
(Pre-Chorus)
The snows no longer white without you//
I pray everyday for a way I could see your face again//
The birds dont fly as high without you//
I need you here with me before I commit my final sin//
(Chorus)
Every sunday I wear all black//
I walk to the church and sing//
Lord, can you help me now//
I know you like your boys old fashioned... and sound of mind//
But right now baby Im crazy//
Crazy I'm, so crazy now//
In hindsight, this sounds more Lana than I thought |
It's very atmospheric like Ultraviolence
and the desperation yass >>> I'd say one thing to improve would be to delve deeper into the inner thoughts of the narrator, maybe in the bridge.
With a song like this, its strongest point is also its weakest point. It's understated but I think that's part of what draws you in, good job~!
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. But if inspiration strikes and I get a good hook or something I'll usually write a verse and chorus before I burn out, and then go back and write the rest of the song the next day
Guess it is true that the Games sections hates us 