Also, I've already judged the four I received. Here's some hints for you four as a desperate attempt to breathe some life into this thread. These are put in order of highest to lowest that I ranked. You can take guesses at which one you are if you've submitted. The green is from my "Pros" section and the red is from my "Cons" section.
1.
Good use of imagery, each verse and bridge felt like it was in a different setting, making it feel like a story. /
Some lines felt so unnecessary and didn’t add anything to the overall idea of the song.
2.
I love your take on this challenge! /
The rhyme scheme was a bit funky
3.
You have a lot of good ideas going here. /
The lyrics felt really trite, I’d like to see more unique metaphors and ideas next time, if you’re still here.
4.
I like the message of this song. It definitely introduces who you are and what you’re about. /
The verses and chorus feel really disjointed, like they’re not really related.
I'm going to be the Simon of this game
Next week I'll give more tips on rhyming, I feel so bad for judging some of you on things you probably had no idea about
Believe me, I have nothing but appreciation for all of your lyrics. I wish I could just delete the "Cons" section but unfortunately that's the part that's going to help you the most because it will tell you what needs improvement.
Ya'll need to get started. I know that writing isn't exactly the easiest nor fastest process for everyone, but chh.... 
