[ceremonials]

mess

you should send out PMs in the meantime maybe

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by swiftie13

they are all 8 syllables in standard american english

edit nvm, i added no in front of one on my own

even then it,s 8-8-7-8

I literally said in my post he changed the last line. In his submission, it was 8-8-7-7

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

haven't read your reviews, but I just heard another judge agrees with me. as such, it doesn't appear to be much of a waste of time to me

i would do them now, but I think you need some time to think about and take your judgement in. i'll push it back to the start of the hour, just for you.

Punish us daddy

[Citrus]

Oh mess I didn't know Cupid had done critiques. Thx for the feedback judges <3

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I literally said in my post he changed the last line. In his submission, it was 8-8-7-7

oh mess my bad

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

haven't read your reviews, but I just heard another judge agrees with me. as such, it doesn't appear to be much of a waste of time to me

i would do them now, but I think you need some time to think about and take your judgement in. i'll push it back to the start of the hour, just for you.

I don't mind if you dislike my song, just give it a proper review sis How do you want me to improve or take anything away from it if you just make some snarky comment about it?

But have fun doing that, I'm gonna sleep in a few mins anyways. I'll see results tomorrow then.

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

8-8-7-7 (you added an 'I' to the last line here)

It's minor but I would've done 8-8-8-8 for the ultimate bop.

[Tylerbv]

Why is the beginning of Miranda's new album so iconic already?

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

I don't mind if you dislike my song, just give it a proper review sis How do you want me to improve or take anything away from it if you just make some snarky comment about it?

I'm not sure that song has any improvements to be made. You've won this game before, so I don't think you need a line by line, word by word essay, do you? I assume you'll do better in the future. If not I'll have to make myself clearer in that instance

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I'm not sure that song has any improvements to be made. You've won this game before, so I don't think you need a line by line, word by word essay, do you? I assume you'll do better in the future. If not I'll have to make myself clearer in that instance

Mess, I suppose not.

[swiftie13]

Did y'all try the chicken

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Here's something: stop being so awkward and contrived with your language, you're better than that sis.

dkfkgkg, mess. That is true



edit: ha caught u

[Citrus]

Here's something: buy Dolly Parton's 'Home for Christmas' on iTunes

[PhreshDiamond]

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

dkfkgkg, mess. That is true



edit: ha catch u

caught*

[Temporal]

God, remind me to never compete again if I suddenly feel like pulling a Fefe, y'all are mean

[ceremonials]

i feel like i could actually go top 10 tbh.

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Did y'all try the chicken

jgkjgfkfkj you THOUGHT

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Temporal

God, remind me to never compete again if I suddenly feel like pulling a Fefe, y'all are mean

Not everyone can be Hug I guess.

[swiftie13]

low key knew he was gonna see it, hence the late entry

fight me. Matty knows there is nothin but disgust love between us