Abyssy - Angel/Demon:
Your meter was good, your rhymes served, it made sense, everything was strong lyrically. This is your first song but please teach the others lol.
whats the rest of your song? also, making all your lines the same syllables isnt always a good idea
Well I don't like think about that when I'm writing bc I have a pretty good natural grasp on meter but it usually happens cauuuuse idk it works out better that way. But that was the whole pre chorus so by 2nd half he was just referring to the 2nd two lines
now post results this round should've been over 5 hours ago
haven't read your reviews, but I just heard another judge agrees with me. as such, it doesn't appear to be much of a waste of time to me
i would do them now, but I think you need some time to think about and take your judgement in. i'll push it back to the start of the hour, just for you.
even syllables match up
