[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Tymps.

https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz swag on a tree or a bush possibly

Oops I was at the bottom

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by MattyTacos

my ex-lover will still think of me

this sounds like a Lana lyric

[keshaspearsxo]

How do I threadban tymps

[conatus]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

How do I threadban tymps

post your reviews

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Oops I was at the bottom

[Cupid]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

How do I threadban tymps

[Vulnicura]

Vulnotcura - This seems like something pretentious conatration would stan for. There are too many frills in this, it lacks a punch. I like some of it, the second verse is probably my favourite. It just feels like every other word has been handpicked from thesaurus.com - Give me more emotion next time, less fancy ****.

conatration - No definition found.

poor Cupid being too illiterate to understand my entry

[Jackson]

ooh Cupid's ATRL looks sexy give me your password

[Gladion]

Gladion - Hoping to achieve fixation? Do you know what that word means?

Omg!!!

[Jackson]

do you ever just look at peoples' IPs for fun to see where they are?

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

conatration - No definition found.

poor Cupid being too illiterate to understand my entry

Conatus + Contrarian

It's what I call him cuz he's a pseudo hipster.

Originally posted by Jackson

do you ever just look at peoples' IPs for fun to see where they are?

Tbh no not unless i'm dupe checking.

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by Cupid

Conatus + Contrarian

It's what I call him cuz he's a pseudo hipster.

if I wanted bottomatus to stan i would've just linked a double penetration ****o with harp music background

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Cupid

give me some powers fairy godmother

[conatus]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

if I wanted bottomatus to stan i would've just linked a double penetration ****o with harp music background

BITCH

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

if I wanted bottomatus to stan i would've just linked a double penetration ****o with harp music background

the accuracy

[keshaspearsxo]

Cupid you forgot Blue.'s entry

[Achilles.]

Wow connor and I have more in common than I thought.

[Dylobs]

"seemingly dead and empty at first sight" at first sight is redundant. Seemingly would suffice. Delete "so/petal" in the first verse, you repeat it too much. Petal/seems again in the bridge. The chorus has potential, actually the whole song has potential. You have a nice idea, but you keep repeating the same things. Expand/work on your vocabulary and stretching your imagery. The second verse is the best part!

Thanks, but I can't really agree with everything here mainly:

Delete "so/petal" in the first verse...you repeat it too much

As I only used the word "so" once throughout the song so I don't quite get that.

Thanks again tho. Now it's pears turn

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Dylobs

Thanks, but I can't really agree with everything here mainly:



As I only used the word "so" once throughout the song so I don't quite get that.

Thanks again tho. Now it's pears turn

I meant Rose sorry!

[PhreshDiamond]

So its almost Wednesday here