It's alright I'll come 'round when you're not in
And I'll pick up all my things
Everything I have I bought with you
But that's alright too
It's just everything I do
We did together
And there's a little piece of you
In whatever
I've got everything I need
I've got petrol in the car
I've got some money with me
There's just one problem
You're the only one I want
You're the only one I want
You're the only one I want
You're the only one I want
This was good, but like Vulnicura pointed out, it was kinda rape-y? Like, if I hadn’t seen that discourse in the thread, I would have totally assumed this was about a rape, and I’m kinda surprised that you didn’t pick that up from what you wrote in the chorus ANYWAYS, this was pretty good, as expected; I liked the use of “prism” tbh, it didn’t feel try hard (@Titty).
- “Slipping through my fingers like water / Breaking apart into dazzling colours” slay
- Chorus is so rape-y, which makes the whole song feel rape-y
- “Nothing prepared me for your beam of light” blarg at another “night/light” rhyme
This was well done, not mind blowing or anything, but well done.
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2. TheCheetahWings - Saving Grace
You and your structure The other FLOPS should take notes. This song was alright, there wasn’t anything here that was brilliant, but for the first round, it did what it needed to.
- Rhyming in the chorus was v simple
- The bridge was kinda choppy, mainly the last three lines
- “We hid within the shadows far from sight” this line was quite forced
Overall this was kind of a throwaway song, but again, it did what it needed to.
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3. OreGuy - Still Love
This song was cute conceptually, but the execution was lacking.
- “The clouds are heavy / Their sounds are scary” this rhyme was pretty elementary
- “I should've confess” should be “confessed” (you’re talking about an action you wished you would’ve completed in the past)
- “I've been away for later” this isn’t how you use “later”, you could say “a while” or “long time” but not really “later”
- “And still standing still” slay the alliteration (and tongue twister)
- The bridge didn’t really make sense, you’ll show someone how you’re both suffering and that’s going to make them want to stay?
I think you’ve improved from what we saw last season, but the language barrier is still kinda there.
I feel like no matter how good or bad my songs are, they are always so different and (hopefully) fun for the judges to read/look forward to reading That's what I like to think
I'll serve to randomness again this season, don't you wait! I will have a new magnum opus!
I'm so late.
I don't think I got the pm for the rate 
my favorite rival (even though he is only my rival, i'm definitely not his rival since we are on two different levels )
That's what I like to think