[Temporal]

Originally posted by conatus

it's 4am here hurry up miss thing

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

take your time temp

Oh

[Temporal]

I'm already halfway through, ff

[keshaspearsxo]

quality judging takes time

[Temporal]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

quality judging takes time

That's what a talentless loser would say tbh

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Temporal

That's what a talentless loser would say tbh

jackson got shat on

[Temporal]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

jackson got shat on

True, let me slam ha score again

[Aurora]

Shawn Mendes' Mercy is on the radio right now, must be a sign @Tempura

[OnikaSlays]

This is the chorus. Is it any good?

Is this a dream
Or am I going insane
It's like a false awakening
But why can I still feel the pain

This is really short and the verses are a lot better tbh

[conatus]

Originally posted by OnikaSlays

This is the chorus. Is it any good?

Is this is a dream
Or am I going insane
It's like a false awakening
But why can I still feel the pain

This is really short and the verses are a lot better tbh

the meter's kind of off and the lexical choices feel really safe and predictable

[keshaspearsxo]

is this is a dream

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Aurora

Shawn Mendes' Mercy is on the radio right now, must be a sign @Tempura

I heard Never Forget You two days in a row @ my dining hall, forgot to tell you that

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Temporal

True, let me slam ha score again

im ok with this, but it'd be better if you did it to another entry

[OnikaSlays]

Originally posted by conatus

the meter's kind of off and the lexical choices feel really safe and predictable

Drag me a bit but ugh this is so hard

140 words is not enough

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

is this is a dream

Wait

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Temporal

I heard Never Forget You two days in a row @ my dining hall, forgot to tell you that

I meant you should have Mercy on my entry 👀

But slay at the Zara stanning in the US, hope she's not just a one minor hit wonder there.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

im ok with this, but it'd be better if you did it to another entry

My #1 for B1 will remain my #1 for B1, deal with it

[OnikaSlays]

Note to self: Don't write a song based off an edgy/cool sounding title you came up with and let it come naturally

[UFO]

Sending later this afternoon

[conatus]

Originally posted by OnikaSlays

Note to self: Don't write a song based off an edgy/cool sounding title you came up with and let it come naturally

this is a v. good tip, i used to write based on titles all the time and it's so difficult most of the time

[UFO]

Originally posted by OnikaSlays

Note to self: Don't write a song based off an edgy/cool sounding title you came up with and let it come naturally

This is so ****ing true tbh.

[keshaspearsxo]

why is chantaje the song of the year shakira invented music