Dylobs – The Tide to End It All
WHAT was that section labelling? This felt kinda like a cross between a Finding Nemo theme song and a Meghan Trainor type thing. I like both of those things but I know you don’t so suck on that. The whole dad thing was a little awkward throughout, but the water imagery was spot on. I wasn’t a fan of the “thigh” line either. Hunter’s label was fairly vague, so it was a good one to choose because I don’t feel like this fits hugely into any one label, but I guess it does its job.
I like Finding Nemo I have no idea where you got that from. I'll give you the other thing I don't like doe.
I think what I got from this was: be vague enough that it works for anybody
I keep getting told that my song needs to be cohesive, but I love the style of my songs and I guess I have to understand at this point that unless you enjoy the music of GFOTY, Lipgloss Twins, ANOHNI, Felicita, SOPHIE, Aqua, my general writing inspirations, then you aren't going to enjoy my songs. I came in this competition to write for me, not to change my style to please others. If I wanted to change up my style and write a song to impress you (see: Prayer Pose, my least favourite song in this competition) then I could, but I wouldn't be staying true to myself.
I keep getting told that my song needs to be cohesive, but I love the style of my songs and I guess I have to understand at this point that unless you enjoy the music of GFOTY, Lipgloss Twins, ANOHNI, Felicita, SOPHIE, Aqua, my general writing inspirations, then you aren't going to enjoy my songs. I came in this competition to write for me, not to change my style to please others. If I wanted to change up my style and write a song to impress you (see: Prayer Pose, my least favourite song in this competition) then I could, but I wouldn't be staying true to myself.
sis, this comes across as really pretentious you're basically saying that if you're not an #indieheaux "you just don't GET my songs!!". artistic minimalism, its impact. the whole point of the competition, ie its challenges, is to branch out and apply yourselves to other areas and see what happens.
I think a lot of people take this challenge really seriously.
At the end of the day it's a game, it's supposed to be fun.
Of course! I completely agree with you. At the end of the day, this is supposed to be fun for me. I don't enjoy writing things if I'm not doing it for myself, so nonetheless I'm glad I got this chance to share with you a little bit more about me. If worst comes to the worst, I shall try and bow out gracefully knowing that I got the chance to both open up (Harvey) and share my personal style (Girls World, Thinking About You) in this competition.
Of course! I completely agree with you. At the end of the day, this is supposed to be fun for me. I don't enjoy writing things if I'm not doing it for myself, so nonetheless I'm glad I got this chance to share with you a little bit more about me. If worst comes to the worst, I shall try and bow out gracefully knowing that I got the chance to both open up (Harvey) and share my personal style (Girls World, Thinking About You) in this competition.
Tbh, I usually come in here for the people rather than the competition,
(seeing as how I've never managed to pass round 2. )
I wrote more songs when I was banned than during my PH8+9 run fdghj
Tbh, I usually come in here for the people rather than the competition,
(seeing as how I've never managed to pass round 2. )
I wrote more songs when I was banned than during my PH8+9 run fdghj
Tylerbv – You and I
You chose an interesting subject matter because I work at a bank and I’ve been robbed at gunpoint before at work, so I was kinda getting some anxiety while reading this . At face level this was a lot like your past songs. You tackled a big storyline and it often felt like you were cramming words together which made the song lack cohesion at times. There were really no standout lines and just as many awkward lines as usual, but together it worked as a story. The one thing you did better, though, was provide an interesting and unexpected plot twist towards the end of the song that drew my interest (although I could have done without the last line, as it was implied and was stronger without it).
Oop @ me writing about your life
The problem with my writing is that I prefer writing stories. I don't really do much of the whole imagery stuff just because a) I'm not good at it and b) I prefer story songs
If I don't get eliminated, I'm gonna try to switch it up since everyone has told me to do that
Oop @ me writing about your life
The problem with my writing is that I prefer writing stories. I don't really do much of the whole imagery stuff just because a) I'm not good at it and b) I prefer story songs
If I don't get eliminated, I'm gonna try to switch it up since everyone has told me to do that
. I'm so happy you think the song fits your label 
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