Top 5
1. January – The Basque witch trials begin.
1. Lucius Julius Ursus Servianus and Lucius Licinius Sura become Roman Consul.
3. Reports of the eruption of Krakatoa are recorded in the Javanese Book of Kings.
3. May 6 – George V becomes King of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland upon the death of his father, Edward VII.
5. The remnants of Comet Ikeya-Seki are expected to return to the inner Solar System. It was last seen from Earth in 1965–1966, and broke into three pieces as it approached the Sun.
The 5th hint is going to be the hardest, so work on the first 4.
10. MattyTacos - Head Over Heart
Hor Records
Every single rhyme here was an easy rhyme, and the concept here was pretty tired. This was a watered down Viva La Vida really. Llike many entries this week, this stayed a pretty middling level throughout, avoiding going for the jugular -except for "Sipping on our history, guess I’ll have another drink" which was at least somewhat creative - and felt like a throwaway filler track. The storyteller aspect for Hor's label was also missing too, there wasn't any depth beyond "we broke up and now I'm alone" to this. Your flow was nice at the very least, as were the rest of the mechanics, but I'm not going to patronize you by saying that this was anything beyond okay. Stop lingering around in the world of cliche's and overdone concepts and start veering towards some more thematical pieces like your R1-3 entries.
Thanks for the feedback, I'll be sure to come up with stronger concepts. But, I'm glad my meter is improving at least.
This round will be my first flop, this is what I get for writing songs I like n
@Temporal each verse is supposed to be about how hard/scary real life is ("When the morning's cold and hungry / Sometimes I don't wanna wake up" and "Would we die in the opening scene / Our are characters important enough?"). "Be scared with you for life" is him saying he wants to face all of life's uncertainties with this person.
I feel dumb because I thought this was all like, super obvious. But am prepared for this humbling.
Wait, I love cold and hungry morning. Slay! Now I'm lowkey scared to wake up!
