when will Nait Pheonix come thru with these kind of receipts in one of his heated moments?
"Why waste my talents on some ATRL tournament when I could just go back to UNIVERSAL (where i used to work as an intern) and pitch some demos to a few dusty white guys?? WATCH ME IN SIX MONTHS MOTHER****ERS, Y'ALL WILL REGRET IT SOON ENOUGH... I WILL BE A ****ING STARRR"
"Our hearts might not make perfect shapes / But that don’t mean we can’t be great" YAAAAAAS! That was a great couplet, but the rest of the song produced mixed results. The way you used "glass eyes" it made it seem like you were in a ballroom full of blind people with fake eyeballs The first verse and pre-chorus, in general, were pretty rocky, the lyrics were choppy and bland, but the last three lines of the verse had some quirk to them. I wish you would've made the song entirely about a fairytale falling apart (from the beginning to the end, not just the middle to the end when the story starts getting interesting), those lyrics where you gave the cliché's a new twist were where you shined. I liked the concept, but those first dozen or so lines where you didn't do anything interesting really held this back.
Honestly this review seems more positive than a 5 which I apparently got from the hints so slay! I'm surprised you didn't like the first verse because pretty much everyone has praised it so far, but of course it's always good to hear different perspectives. Also I hope you got what I meant with "glass eyes" even if it came off weirdly
Honestly this review seems more positive than a 5 which I apparently got from the hints so slay! I'm surprised you didn't like the first verse because pretty much everyone has praised it so far, but of course it's always good to hear different perspectives. Also I hope you got what I meant with "glass eyes" even if it came off weirdly
The scores that jpow(?) assigned to the tiers aren't accurate, but I won't correct them further
"Why waste my talents on some ATRL tournament when I could just go back to UNIVERSAL (where i used to work as an intern) and pitch some demos to a few dusty white guys?? WATCH ME IN SIX MONTHS MOTHER****ERS, Y'ALL WILL REGRET IT SOON ENOUGH... I WILL BE A ****ING STARRR"
