[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by Ventitonic

The Other Side of Me - Hannah Montana is seriously one of the best written songs of all time and it KNOCKs, y'all need to stop

Just Like You says hi!

[Jaxswim]

Woo. I'm FINALLY done, aight! Some ppl may be getting PMs soon

[minho]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Ventitonic , this Post is so great ,with this comment you have inspired me for my new song ,, Queen of darkness . Now i am working on that . Yes i am only 15 , but i have a talent for writing

Yes, that's great that you're working on a song. I'm really glad his post could inspire you.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by lovesong

Yes, that's great that you're working on a song. I'm really glad his post could inspire you.

This comment helps me write my grass imagery for my song, but this thread's posts are ironically also very poetic... :/

[ughgabriel]

So my song is kind of a mix between Troye's Bite and Gaga's SHICD. I'm serving sex this round

[minho]

Originally posted by Hugamari

This comment helps me write my grass imagery for my song, but this thread's posts are ironically also very poetic... :/

Hope you don't mind me saying this...YOUR SONG ROCKS!!!!!!!

Ok, now that that's over, I would like to also share this.

Long ago, there a beautiful kingdom that resided up in the sky. That kingdom was called the kingdom of Aerosol . Very few knew of this magical land of eternal beauty, where peace reigned forever & chaos was never the problem.

Sorry, just had to get that out there. But your songwriting brings out the story teller in me.

[Achilles.]

I just watched Elizabeth: The Golden Age and now I want to read Cupid's song about the Armada.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by lovesong

Hope you don't mind me saying this...YOUR SONG ROCKS!!!!!!!

Ok, now that that's over, I would like to also share this.

Long ago, there a beautiful kingdom that resided up in the sky. That kingdom was called the kingdom of Aerosol . Very few knew of this magical land of eternal beauty, where peace reigned forever & chaos was never the problem.

Sorry, just had to get that out there. But your songwriting brings out the story teller in me.

This comment helps me calm down when I'm mad and about to quit Platinum Hit. Love it❤❤

[Dylobs]

Beyoncé vs Kylie was weird

Thanks you know who for sending me your song. I'll check it out when I get home from this presentation.

My song would either be Umbreon or Tyranitar depending on how I choose to continue my song.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Dylobs

Beyoncé vs Kylie was weird

Thanks you know who for sending me your song. I'll check it out when I get home from this presentation.

My song would either be Umbreon or Tyranitar depending on how I choose to continue my song.

My favorite Pokemon

[Achilles.]

I'm gonna stop sugarcoating so much when people ask me to read their songs.

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I just watched Elizabeth: The Golden Age and now I want to read Cupid's song about the Armada.

I'll send it you later, I can't stop crying

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I'm gonna stop sugarcoating so much when people ask me to read their songs.

If the message you just sent me was sugar coating

But it was v v helpful so you should do more of that!

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

If the message you just sent me was sugar coating

But it was v v helpful so you should do more of that!

No, that was without the sugarcoating.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Vision

I'll send it you later, I can't stop crying

I'm so sorry Cupid, I'm glad there's a community of people here that can mourn with you and hopefully you can find peace in this. Writing is such a great way to help sift through thoughts, it's helped me get through this kind of thing before. Don't be afraid to let your feelings out in a safe place

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Jackson

I'm so sorry Cupid, I'm glad there's a community of people here that can mourn with you and hopefully you can find peace in this. Writing is such a great way to help sift through thoughts, it's helped me get through this kind of thing before. Don't be afraid to let your feelings out in a safe place

I'm just in shock, she was the same age as me, how could this happen. I've never known anyone personally (around my age) to die. I'm kind of glad I won't be around next week, it'll be nice to take a break and reflect.

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by Jackson

My favorite Pokemon

I guess I'll go for the cutesy kind of dark then

[Hugamari]

Okay, so I decided I want to post about stressing in here, and honestly stressing is actually really easy. All you have to do is say your line with a normal speaking voice, and compare it with another line. If you can say it the same without forcing it, then they have the same stressing! Let me give an example here.

"Whispers in the night haunt my dreams" is 8 syllables. Let's take another line that has 8 syllables
"I haven't slept in seven days" is also 8 syllables. If you were to try to say it like the first line, it'd kinda look like this

"Ihave nt slept in se ven days"

It's not the best example, but basically, you'd be rushing the first part of "haven't", and seven would take much longer to say than it should. It wouldn't fit the meter. Let's find one that would.

"Demons in the dark make me weak"

You can say this the same way you would "Whispers in the night haunt my dreams". Dreams has a bit of a longer start, but as a general rule it works!

Not the best example, but @ the judges aren't doing anything so I tried!

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Vision

I'm just in shock, she was the same age as me, how could this happen. I've never known anyone personally (around my age) to die. I'm kind of glad I won't be around next week, it'll be nice to take a break and reflect.

I'm glad you have some time to let your thoughts out. I'm sure the RT people have you covered but me and the PHitlers are here for you and anyone else also, and we can figure out the whole challenge thing I'm sure if you're not feeling up to it

[Achilles.]

Oh god.

I kinda just assumed that you were talking about losing a family member, but then I saw...
I don't believe I interacted with her much, but she seemed like she had a beautiful soul.
May she rest peacefully.

Was she ever on twitter, do you know? I feel like there was someone on twitter who went by the same name (or something similar) who I used to talk to, and I can't remember if it was her or not.