[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Temporal

Can we all agree that desire/fire is the worst rhyme ever

No, because girl/world exists and is more prominent…

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

No, because girl/world exists and is more prominent…

That ones really bad too

[keshaspearsxo]

How long until I turn into a tyrant again

[ceremonials]

Me, Jake and MusicKid are coming to slay. when will the other types

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Temporal

That ones really bad too

There's like no actual good rhymes with either word, too…

Girl=Whirl/Curl/Unfurl/Hurl
World=Whirled/Curled/Unfurled/Hurled

I mean…

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

No, because girl/world exists and is more prominent…

This tea

Also scar/anything

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Temporal

Can we all agree that desire/fire is the worst rhyme ever

I hate ANYTHING that rhymes with door

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Temporal

Can we all agree that desire/fire is the worst rhyme ever

I hate using the word fire in a song. Same with scars and chains.

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Vision

hew wants to read my song

Originally posted by HausofNiko

can i send my song to someone? Ill read yours too

(I sent it to you vulnicura and cupid )

Originally posted by URBAN

I started writing my song, it's a bit personal but I'd like to share it with someone who is willing to read it and give some pointers.

I'll read your guys' songs…

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

I can't think of a concept or anything right now. My mind is all jumbled.

Shocking! sorry
Well, maybe if you look up your type. Find something interesting about electricity we don't know. I mean, there are a lot of good song titles in "electric":
Electric City?
Shock Factor?
Thunder?
Perfect Storm?
Lightning Strikes?
Electric Blue?

I hope this gets something percolating!

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

I hate ANYTHING that rhymes with door

What for?
It's not that much of a chore…
With the right rhyme, it can soar
All it needs is the right metaphor
Or does this strike you right in the core?
Sorry, just ignore me…

[Musickid203]

My name Starkeisha
And I'm the best
You know I'm petty
I like to start some mess

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

What for?
It's not that much of a chore…
With the right rhyme, it can soar
All it needs is the right metaphor
Or does this strike you right in the core?
Sorry, just ignore me…

Originally posted by Musickid203

My name Starkeisha
And I'm the best
You know I'm petty
I like to start some mess

10/10 would bang

[Hugamari]

My song is going to be about Sally the Sapphire Pegasus.

[minho]

Originally posted by Hugamari

My song is going to be about Sally the Sapphire Pegasus.

that exists already though:

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by lovesong

that exists already though:

Stay mad that Krusty the Gross Soda Flop peaked lower than Slaylly the Sapphire Pegodsus. I guess "Talent always wins" rings true in this case LOL.

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Stay mad that Krusty the Gross Soda Flop peaked lower than Slaylly the Sapphire Pegodsus. I guess "Talent always wins" rings true in this case LOL.

Didn't Sally lose LMAO

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Temporal

Can we all agree that desire/fire is the worst rhyme ever

Damn. Let me delete the one couplet I have written.

[UFO]

Originally posted by Vision

Breakaway is a classic, which no-taste bottoms are tryina say otherwise? Square up!

It's a classic but not a lyrical masterpiece

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Didn't Sally lose LMAO

Originally posted by lovesong

Yep, #2 placement LOL

No wonder Hug likes her

YOUR FAVES LOST TOO, AND PEAKED LOWER THAN MINE. HAHA.



How can you come for someone at the top when you're at the bottom, scraping.

[Achilles.]

Don't put me off cause I'm on fire
And I can't quench my desire
Don't you know that I'm burning up for your love
You're not convinced that that is enough
I put myself in this position
And I deserve the imposition
But you don't even know I'm alive
And this pounding in my heart just won't die
I'm burning up