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13. Musickid203 & Lucky#17 - Venom
I like how although this is a tired concept, it didn't read that way. You two have such unique styles so when I heard you were collaborating, I expected great things. Although I feel like you could have reached a higher pinnacle, this entry was not bad at all. Some of my favorite lines included "It's child's play and I'mm confined in your puzzle," and "You move quick like the wind through my goldie-locks / Seems that brunette gives you more than what I've got," that show both your style and clever use of language. I think some words like "rebuttal," Armageddon," and "masquerade," were a bit forced and the structure got messy in the second verse, but overall it was nicely done.
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The fact that your favorite lines are the ones I wrote. Then go on to find you bashing the second verse, which was also written by me
I knew me and Lucky would come up with something great. We should have another collab challenge. I'd pick him anyday
