Not a favorable review, I see…
I didn't repeat "you're why I'm in this war," but I did place a revision of "you're still worth fighting for" as "you're what I'm fighting for" which I guess you can say is repetition (?).
I
am starting to see a certain repetition of expecting "unexpected" rhyme schemes, but expected meter and whatnot… what about the message? Are you telling me how I portray the message is more important than the message itself?
