[Temporal]

Originally posted by Vision

[jpow]

Originally posted by ceremonials

Me!

I'm still waiting for your critiques from last night

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Temporal

I had a dream that Troye Sivan and I dated When will I stop being the Platinum Hit Hopeless Romantic?

I'm not really attracted to him (I mean he's adorable but I'm not into him like that, I'd rather be bffs), but I really kinda just want to pull his hair in a very sexual way.

I think I have a thing for boys with curly hair.

I want to write a beach rock song called Curly Haired Boys.

Originally posted by Vision

Am I meant to interpret this as "two bottoms repel each other" because that's how I interpreted it.

Originally posted by swiftie13

One of my friends brothers caught me trying to be a gargoyle while sitting on top of a tall drawer. I would have rather been caught looking at ****.

Keep writing posts like this and I'm going to make my sig a permanent tribute to you.

[feelslikeadream]

sneak peek

It seems like an ideal time
To dress up like Hitler
And poke fun at old lovers
Oh oh, oh oh
It seems like an ideal time
For pancakes at midnight
To hook up with strange guys
Oh oh, oh oh

[Achilles.]

Happy birthday?

[swiftie13]

anything resembling 22 will automatically get a 0 srry!

[mxtthewdelrey]

Can someone please answer my question - Is six verses too long? It's 1 minute 27 seconds timed with me singing it, but it's quite fast

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by mxtthewdelrey

Can someone please answer my question - Is six verses too long? It's 1 minute 27 seconds timed with me singing it, but it's quite fast

I'm sure you'll be fine.

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I think I have a thing for boys with curly hair.

[swiftie13]

If you're confident in your art, you'll be fine.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by swiftie13

One of my friends brothers caught me trying to be a gargoyle while sitting on top of a tall drawer. I would have rather been caught looking at ****.

My brother used to do that when we were kids and the 3 of us shared a bedroom

[Hugamari]

Ok, so while our host was busy dreaming about dating bottoms, I personally had one of the weirdest, but most fulfilling songwriting moments of my life. I was asleep because my life is in shambles, but in my dream, there was a song (which even though Tymps. claims it's impossible, I'm positive I never heard this song before!), and like, the song had me waking up crying. I decided that I needed to write it down before I forgot it, and even though bits and pieces went missing, I did get the general idea down in about 10 minutes.

I could easily send this for the challenge as an outro, but LOL I don't want to change the name of my album or make judges judge another song. I also low-key don't think it'd even do as well as my current song is doing, even if that's about an average of 7.

Goodnight

After years in a cage
I am free to fly away
But what good is freedom
When I'm locked away from you?

So goodnight
I'm closing my eyes now
There's no spark left in me
That you loved so much to see

So goodnight
My dear, it's bed time now
I have no energy
And these hands are feeling weak

Goodnight
I hope to see you soon
I'm so so very tired...
..There you are. I missed you...

After years in a cage
We are free, we'll fly away

[Gladion]

You got my entry, right temporal? I think I said its intro if not, it's an intro

[Temporal]

I'm a top u stupid fats

And yes Niko, I got your entry (and 2nd PM)!

[Temporal]

Originally posted by mxtthewdelrey

Can someone please answer my question - Is six verses too long? It's 1 minute 27 seconds timed with me singing it, but it's quite fast

6 VERSES or 6 STANZAS? The latter will probably be fine depending on if they're quatrains or not.

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by Temporal

I'm a top u stupid fats

[conatus]

Originally posted by Temporal

I'm a top u stupid fats

Nobody was disputing, sis. What are you overcompensating for?

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by Temporal

6 VERSES or 6 STANZAS? The latter will probably be fine depending on if they're quatrains or not.

idk, you tell me!

I love writing songs, but I'm also very very dumb and my vocabulary is almost non-existent!

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

Don't h8 me cuz u ain't me

Originally posted by mxtthewdelrey

idk, you tell me!

I love writing songs, but I'm also very very dumb and my vocabulary is almost non-existent!

A Verse could be multiple stanzas

Verse
Deez Nutz are nice
Deez Nutz are kind
They don't have lice
They don't like ice

Your Nutz are stupid
Your Nutz are looping
They look like Cupid
Who's also stupid

A stanza is just ONE of those blocks of four lines while the verse comprises both of them.

I probably could've looked up a definition instead but w/e

[mxtthewdelrey]

Originally posted by Temporal

Don't h8 me cuz u ain't me



A Verse could be multiple stanzas

Verse
Deez Nutz are nice
Deez Nutz are kind
They don't have lice
They don't like ice

Your Nutz are stupid
Your Nutz are looping
They look like Cupid
Who's also stupid

A stanza is just ONE of those blocks of four lines while the verse comprises both of them.

I probably could've looked up a definition instead but w/e

oh! then six stanzas! slay at you having some knowledge!