[FCKNAmbrosia]

Originally posted by Musickid203

I need opinions on my intro.

Any volunteers?

I can do it

[conatus]

Going outside of your comfort zone is definitely a good thing, regardless of how good you may be at what you already do. Never hurts to try something new and push yourself.

[Obsession]

Is anyone willing to read my interlude? I don't have a problem with it, but I don't know. I find that I usually don't see the problems judges see until it's already judged.

[jpow]

Okay I'm done who wants to read?

[FCKNAmbrosia]

Originally posted by Obsession

Is anyone willing to read my interlude? I don't have a problem with it, but I don't know. I find that I usually don't see the problems judges see until it's already judged.

I offer as a volunteer

[Jackson]

Originally posted by conatus

Going outside of your comfort zone is definitely a good thing, regardless of how good you may be at what you already do. Never hurts to try something new and push yourself.

Yep, especially now in the beginning of the competition when there's more fat to be deleted

[ceremonials]

Jackson is noT gonna like my entry but I'm.not gonna change it

[ceremonials]

Everyone should just send their songs to each other and get feedback tbh

I don't even ask anymore I just send it.

[Witch Privilege]

Originally posted by ceremonials

Jackson is noT gonna like my entry but I'm.not gonna change it

**** Jackson. He's the worst.

[Tylerbv]

I'll read over anyone's intro. I'm horrible at writing so my feedback won't mean much, but I'll try to help

[Achilles.]

I took a verse out of my intro (added bonus of deleting hug's least favorite bit) and now it's got as many lines as my intro from last season. It seems twice as long though.

I sang it to myself and it clocked in at just over two minutes, so I guess I'm finally good in the length department.


I'm really, really happy with this.

[Gladion]

send me your songs i'd love to read them

just you gotta read mine too :P

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Achilles.

My gay music is the most iconic thing about PH8. #impact

Tea!

[Tylerbv]

i feel like intros usually have a story or somethin but mines literally just like nothin
mess. lotus inspire me!

[Temporal]

#4 on the homepage, 600 more views and we top "Azealia Banks Account Gets Suspended," get to it fats!

[Tylerbv]

let me just refresh the page

[swiftie13]

Fat you should post the post counts for this thread. I want to see how much of a life I don't have

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Fat you should post the post counts for this thread. I want to see how much of a life I don't have

It's not hard to find out yourself, fat!

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Well, I'm going to assume, on a metacritic rating, Achilles. gave me about an 80! Maybe I'll get a couple other opinions, though.

EDIT: I wanted to tell y'all that I got $10 for helping a friend of my mom's move some things out of his garage for "Spring Cleanup" which I guess is something the city does there. Who needs a job when I get paid $10 for not even a half hours work.

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Hugamari

It's not hard to find out yourself, fat!

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Well, I'm going to assume, on a metacritic rating, Achilles. gave me about an 80! Maybe I'll get a couple other opinions, though.

If it's so easy do it for me!

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by swiftie13

If it's so easy do it for me!

Wow Temporal, look at this LAZEE judge you have.



Second highest post count, though, so I guess he's good for something!