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Discussion: ATRL Songwriter's Thread | Jacktrus gain dual #1
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Originally posted by KeshasFansRose
Lol, I use rhymezone.net  it shows full rhymes and half rhymes |
b-rhymes.com is also great.
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Originally posted by Lynx
The random surge. 👀
Also enjoy the ATRL+ ClarksonFats, you'll need it for your hosting duties, I'm sure your inbox will fill up fast!
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Oh I'm sure. Hopefully the update will come and chat can save me some inbox space, but lord knows that won't happen 
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rhymezone >>>> but rhymer is prettier
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Soak & Drown
Why can't you just leave my soul alone?
All I need is to fall into his arms, and come home
You always persist, that I'm a masochist
That I won't deny but I would advise you to
Open your eyes and see there's more to this
I'll always soak in the misery
Just fill the tub and lather it over me
Nowhere else I'd rather be
Just let me drown in the misery
Behind the sadness in a young girl's eyes
There's a story, just let her sing you the lullaby
I guarantee it'll make you cry
Always the same mistake, not a story of another heartbreak
But it's still enough to cause an earthquake in my mind
I'll always soak in the misery
Just fill the tub and lather it over me
Nowhere else I'd rather be
Just let me drown in the misery
I'll always soak in the misery
Just fill the tub and lather it over me
Nowhere else I'd rather be
Just let me drown in the misery
Do you know what it''s like to scare yourself with the thoughts in your head at night?
Do you know what it's like to struggle to make it through til the morning light?
You don't know anything about me, so stop trying to cause a fight
I can be a sweetheart but I can also be ruthless and unkind
So stop right now, before you start swimming against this tide.
Because...
I'll always soak in the misery
Just fill the tub and lather it over me
Nowhere else I'd rather be
Just let me drown in the misery
I'll always soak in the misery
I guarantee, there's no use trying to change me
But I can see
That you're not gonna leave
So you can soak in your misery
And take some time, to question your sanity
Maybe you will see
A small part of what it's like to be me
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Originally posted by Alesus
wrote this song a little while back for fun. it's not really serious and i was just exploring the concept of talking about a bumpy relationship with colors (ground breaking, i know), but i liked it, so i'll share.
SPECTRUM
i
spectrum of emotions
it’s all the colors with you
spectrum of emotion baby
i don’t know what to do
v1
lust is red
sorrow is blue
purple is fear
fear of losing you
orange is joy
white is bliss
black is asphyxiation
cuz’ with you i’m remiss
p/c
so remiss, I forget
I forget to breathe
oh, i never know with you baby
i never know
c
it’s a spectrum of emotions when I’m with you
purple, then red
orange, then blue
back and forth on this wave
i don’t know what to do
i’m falling helplessly and
hopelessly in love with you
v2
but as quick as day to dawn
it’s back to the same old blue
all the bright colors are gone
and suddenly i’m tired of you
c
it’s a spectrum of emotions when I’m with you
purple, then red
orange, then blue
back and forth on this wave
i don’t know what to do
i’m falling helplessly and
hopelessly in love with you
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red, blue, green
(i’m running back and forth on this wave)
purple, white, black
(is our relationship worth all this change)
red, black (high, low)
blue, green (please go)
white, purple (left, right)
ora-a-a-ange (please don’t)
c
it’s a spectrum of emotions when I’m with you
purple, then red
orange, then blue
back and forth on this wave
i don’t know what to do
i’m falling helplessly and
hopelessly in love with you
o
spectrum of emotions
it’s all the colors with you
spectrum of emotion baby
i don’t know what to do |
Love this. So simple yet so good!
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Picking out some challenges for PH9 
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Originally posted by Alesus
is this sarcasm  |
no!  i love your writing 
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
Picking out some challenges for 9xPH |
Season 6's are the best, as is the whole season
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Originally posted by Jackson
Season 6's are the best, as is the whole season |
Hmmm maybe  I'll have to see what the other judges think (once I get a ****ing panel)
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
Hmmm maybe I'll have to see what the other judges think (once I get a ****ing panel) |
I know you've probably stated it before, but do you have an idea when the next season will start?
I can't wait to write to challenges, I miss doing that.
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
Picking out some challenges for PH9 |
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Originally posted by Alan Palomo
no! i love your writing |
thank you  i'll be sure to post a lot more
i actually wrote an entire album for Rihanna for Create A Label, so maybe i'll share those if anyone is interested 
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Originally posted by Keshafied
I know you've probably stated it before, but do you have an idea when the next season will start?
I can't wait to write to challenges, I miss doing that. |
Mid-May, running through the summer 
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Rhymezone is honestly horrible the near rhymes are just tragic
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Originally posted by Tymps.
Rhymezone is honestly horrible the near rhymes are just tragic
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True. I have yet to find a site that gives me good ones but then again I haven't really looked
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I'll try and be back for S9 but I'm REALLY busy atm. I want to so bad!
I'd also love to judge *wink wink* but I have a feeling I'm not experienced enough.
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Originally posted by ausdaniel
I'll try and be back for S9 but I'm REALLY busy atm. I want to so bad!
I'd also love to judge *wink wink* but I have a feeling I'm not experienced enough.
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Well hopefully things settle down in the next 6/7 weeks or so!
And you can apply to be a judge, applications are in the PH8 thread (ignore the deadline  )
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ClarksonSlays got fired. I, Temporal, will be your new PH9 host!
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Originally posted by Temporal
ClarksonSlays got fired. I, Temporal, will be your new PH9 host!
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Thank God, I hated that fatty
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Originally posted by Jackson
Thank God, I hated that fatty
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Same. Who even stans Kelly Clarkson anyways? Ew.
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So this really weird thing happened last week where I matched with my older brother's best friend from high school on tinder (especially weird because our high school is 500 miles away and this guy lives a state north of me but happened to be visiting here) and we hung out and caught up and kinda discussed all the things we never thought we would tell each other, and it kinda just made me think how weird it was that like 5 years ago I NEVER thought I'd be talking to anyone about my sexuality, and definitely not this guy. So I kinda wrote a song to our younger selves saying that in time things would get better and our "sins" and secrets would someday be OK (we both were mormon as well, and if you know anything about their stance on homosexuality  ).
So I wrote this cool song called Timeflow but I don't feel like sharing the lyrics right now because some of them are borderline cheesy and I don't want to get dragged cause they're really personal. But the melodies are really nice and it sounds good with my voice so maybe I'll record it soon and post it and then you won't even notice those lyrics. It also has this guitar part that I could see being an EDM breakdown so I'm ready for my Seeb remix to go top 10
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