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Tournament: PLATINUM HIT 8
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Y'all better live up to this hype. 
Still waiting on a couple of entries.
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Originally posted by URBAN
Not by me lol.
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True.
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Member Since: 4/4/2014
Posts: 10,514
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Sent. 
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Originally posted by Sam
Y'all better live up to this hype.
Still waiting on a couple of entries. |
I still can't get over everyone freaking out about this yesterday and then delivering just massive slayage 
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Member Since: 2/7/2014
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sam
Y'all better live up to this hype.
Still waiting on a couple of entries. |
Who are you waiting on? 
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Member Since: 4/3/2014
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I only really like my bridge tbh. I spent like ALL day writing the verses and I still hate them
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
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Originally posted by Tymps.
praise me heathens
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Did you read my PM, fat?
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Member Since: 9/16/2011
Posts: 50,981
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Originally posted by Tymps.
praise me heathens
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It's not the worst I've read so far. 
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Member Since: 4/4/2014
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 Lifebloodby Moonchild
Emotion: Desire
[Verse 1]
We meet in the moonlight, our clothes shrug off
Hands on me hard and lips on me soft
Give it to me now, no worry, no cost
Hands tangled in my hair, let's get lost
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Verse 2]
Handprints on the mirror fog up our sin
Mouth against mouth and skin against skin
Sex-clouded eyes and lust in my vision
Give in to human intuition
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Bridge]
Come here, come now, he doesn't have to know
This is life, no one has a halo
Your body on mine, what's there to resist?
And where's the fun without any risk?
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
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Quote:
Originally posted by ceremonials
I only really like my bridge tbh. I spent like ALL day writing the verses and I still hate them
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You song as a whole just slayed me
I can't at the beginning of the week looking hopeless for most of us and then everyone deliverying. I'm scared
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
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Originally posted by Achilles.
It's not the worst I've read so far. |
What is the worst?
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
Posts: 22,487
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Quote:
Originally posted by swiftie13
Did you read my PM, fat?
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Yes, wasn't it just like a sentence saying it was better for guilty
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Originally posted by Achilles.
It's not the worst I've read so far. |
Suck a mdick
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
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Quote:
Originally posted by Moonchild
Lifeblood
by Moonchild
Emotion: Desire
[Verse 1]
We meet in the moonlight, our clothes shrug off
Hands on me hard and lips on me soft
Give it to me now, no worry, no cost
Hands tangled in my hair, let's get lost
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Verse 2]
Handprints on the mirror fog up our sin
Mouth against mouth and skin against skin
Sex-clouded eyes and lust in my vision
Give in to human intuition
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Bridge]
Come here, come now, he doesn't have to know
This is life, no one has a halo
Your body on mine, what's there to resist?
And where's the fun without any risk?
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood |
I am jealous that I'll never write a sex anthem as graceful as this. Bye. Delete it, skinny
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
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Quote:
Originally posted by Tymps.
Yes, wasn't it just like a sentence saying it was better for guilty
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I'm pretty sure I also complimented the song, skinny. Anyway, I'll say it again. I really liked it, it had nice cohesive imagery and the technicalities were on point.
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Member Since: 2/7/2014
Posts: 3,371
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Quote:
Originally posted by Moonchild
Lifeblood
by Moonchild
Emotion: Desire
[Verse 1]
We meet in the moonlight, our clothes shrug off
Hands on me hard and lips on me soft
Give it to me now, no worry, no cost
Hands tangled in my hair, let's get lost
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Verse 2]
Handprints on the mirror fog up our sin
Mouth against mouth and skin against skin
Sex-clouded eyes and lust in my vision
Give in to human intuition
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Bridge]
Come here, come now, he doesn't have to know
This is life, no one has a halo
Your body on mine, what's there to resist?
And where's the fun without any risk?
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood |
I have such a nice melody in mind for this, it would slay 
(The writing is amazing too)
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sam
Y'all better live up to this hype.
Still waiting on a couple of entries. |
Love me pls 
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 43,104
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Quote:
Originally posted by Moonchild
Lifeblood
by Moonchild
Emotion: Desire
[Verse 1]
We meet in the moonlight, our clothes shrug off
Hands on me hard and lips on me soft
Give it to me now, no worry, no cost
Hands tangled in my hair, let's get lost
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Verse 2]
Handprints on the mirror fog up our sin
Mouth against mouth and skin against skin
Sex-clouded eyes and lust in my vision
Give in to human intuition
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood
[Bridge]
Come here, come now, he doesn't have to know
This is life, no one has a halo
Your body on mine, what's there to resist?
And where's the fun without any risk?
[Pre-Chorus]
Every touch, every time, a walking dream
Move close, move in, living fantasy
[Chorus]
I can feel your heartbeat in your kiss
Ice touch, sweat, skin, I like it like this
Each move, each pulse, feel it within
Contract in me, breathe out, breathe in
Moments like this are my lifeblood |
Yeah, I'm so ****ing done with this. Let me just say it now in front of everyone so that it's on record: you're going to the ****ing finale.
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
Posts: 22,487
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Quote:
Originally posted by swiftie13
I'm pretty sure I also complimented the song, skinny. Anyway, I'll say it again. I really liked it, it had nice cohesive imagery and the technicalities were on point.
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Thanks
I wish I didn't win last round because before then I didn't have an attitude where it would bother me if I flopped :/
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 43,104
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Quote:
Originally posted by Tymps.
Thanks
I wish I didn't win last round because before then I didn't have an attitude where it would bother me if I flopped :/
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#TympsProblems
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Member Since: 1/2/2014
Posts: 23,393
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Can i send my song to someone? I don't think I sent it to anyone the way it is
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