[BlueM]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

In terms of slant rhymes - weren't they always looked down on last season? I have seen forced rhymes mentioned a few times so far this season. It's a judges personal preference I guess. Be careful is all I can suggest.

slant rhymes and forced rhymes are different. Jackson said that the dreams-gleams rhyme seemed forced, although it's a perfect rhyme. It seems forced because of the context

[Alesus]

Comeback round next week please

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Want to Tinychat tonight

I wish I could join . I'm about to sleep.

Originally posted by BlueM

slant rhymes and forced rhymes are different. Jackson said that the dreams-gleams rhyme seemed forced, although it's a perfect rhyme. It seems forced because of the context

Aah I see. Thanks for the clarification.

[BlueM]

Guys, I need advice!

Regrets-Secrets - rhyme or not rhyme?

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by BlueM

Guys, I need advice!

Regrets-Secrets - rhyme or not rhyme?

in my accent that's not a rhyme but it's easy to pass off as one!

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

In terms of slant rhymes - weren't they always looked down on last season? I have seen forced rhymes mentioned a few times so far this season. It's a judges personal preference I guess. Be careful is all I can suggest.

I was asked to try using slant rhymes by Fefe last season, and I believe the song in which I did became my lowest scoring song the entire season

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I was asked to try using slant rhymes by Fefe last season, and I believe the song in which I did became my lowest scoring song the entire season

! I guess sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't

[BlueM]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

in my accent that's not a rhyme but it's easy to pass off as one!

Yeah, for me, they rhyme I think, but Bu pointed out, that they might not

[BlueM]

I really should go to sleep now because I'm tired af and tomorrow, I have to cover a lot of studying, but I'm just too drawn in by ATRL and my jam Honey Whiskey

[jpow]

Everybody so far loves my bridge, I'm so proud of it

[Moonchild]

Woo, the continued slayage of "Hello". Adele clutching onto and snatching my wig RIGHT off.

[Tymps.]

www.tinychat.com/ExploringGaySexuals

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by BlueM

Thank you! That means so much coming from you! Over the Moon is literally the best song lyrics I've ever read

Thank you, that means a lot. I'm proud of it.

Originally posted by BlueM

Guys, I need advice!

Regrets-Secrets - rhyme or not rhyme?

I think it rhymes, but be careful to avoid forcing it.

Originally posted by Tymps.

www.tinychat.com/ExploringGaySexuals

I would join, but I'm on mobile.

[Vulnicura]

finally written a draft verse and chorus maybe I'm just forcing it out but this is really challenging.

[Temporal]

I haven't started yet I low-key feel like my floppage last round destroyed my creative energy

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

I haven't started yet I low-key feel like my floppage last round destroyed my creative energy

Weren't you top 10 last round

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Weren't you top 10 last round

No. 17

[Tymps.]

Okay then please don't talk about your floppage when I was only three spots ahead of you and I was content

[jpow]

You don't flop until you get to #39 in the challenge like I did

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Okay then please don't talk about your floppage when I was only three spots ahead of you and I was content

Well I dropped 13 slots, so it was my lowest peaking song and my biggest drop ever