[Jaxswim]

I have a verse, prechorus, and chorus and I've just been staring at it for like an hour bc I don't wanna keep going and mess it up, I'm so happy with it atm

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

I'm really trying to focus on meter this round and I'm struggling so much.

I don't know much about meter itself, but I generally get good comments about that, so if you need a help you can pm me

Though in general it seems GotSkill is the only one who picks up on it anyway, so

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I don't know much about meter itself, but I generally get good comments about that, so if you need a help you can pm me

Though in general it seems GotSkill is the only one who picks up on it anyway, so

Huga and Sam love their meter too!

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I don't know much about meter itself, but I generally get good comments about that, so if you need a help you can pm me

Though in general it seems GotSkill is the only one who picks up on it anyway, so

thanks!

I've been trying to think of rhymes for silver and I just googled it and it doesn't have one

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Vulnicura

thanks!

I've been trying to think of rhymes for silver and I just googled it and it doesn't have one

Slant rhymes sis! Filter, filler, thriller, killer, etc...

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

Slant rhymes sis! Filter, filler, thriller, killer, etc...

Yes! I support this.

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

Slant rhymes sis! Filter, filler, thriller, killer, etc...

Slant rhymes are unprofessional. You must use perfect rhymes all the time. If your song rhymes less than the Cat in the Hat you are getting a 0.

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Slant rhymes are unprofessional. You must use perfect rhymes all the time. If your song rhymes less than the Cat in the Hat you are getting a 0.

Stop trying to sabotage the gorls, this is a friendly game!

[jpow]

I fixed a couple of things and need more advice, anyone want to read my song

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by jpow

I fixed a couple of things and need more advice, anyone want to read my song

my inbox is open!

[BlueM]

Yes, tonight I will commit all my future regrets (loud)

My sex hit is coming!

[keshaspearsxo]

Anybody can send me anything I just can't guarantee I'll get back to it in a timely matter or if I'll even be much help tbh

[BlueM]

Originally posted by jpow

I fixed a couple of things and need more advice, anyone want to read my song

I'm always here

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by BlueM

Yes, tonight I will commit all my future regrets (loud)

My sex hit is coming!

That line highkey slays me.

[swiftie13]

Madonna is the queen of forced rhymes but she pulls it off so well

[BlueM]

Originally posted by Moonchild

That line highkey slays me.

Thank you! That means so much coming from you! Over the Moon is literally the best song lyrics I've ever read

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by BlueM

Thank you! That means so much coming from you! Over the Moon is literally the best song lyrics I've ever read

Well you've never seen mine

[BlueM]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

Well you've never seen mine

You never sent it to me

[Buyonce1814]

In terms of slant rhymes - weren't they always looked down on last season? I have seen forced rhymes mentioned a few times so far this season. It's a judges personal preference I guess. Be careful is all I can suggest.

[Tymps.]

Want to Tinychat tonight