Here's a song I was paying around with. It's really crude (this is not humility, just read and you'll see) but the theme/story behind it is quite good. If y'all would care to share your thoughts I want to strengthen it up, especially the hook
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[VERSE 1]
Round and around, she went on that pole
Sad, she knew, but that’s the way life go
All smiles, bright eyes
It was nothing but lies,
But that’s just the way life go
She was the light in a sea of all black
Always up front, and never at the back
Ooh-oh, but she wasn’t happy
Oh oh oh, that girl just wasn’t pleased
[HOOK]
Round and around
She went on that pole
Round, and around
And around again
Every night, just that same old show
Round and around
And around again
[VERSE 2]
Those dollar bills falling all around her face
A grim reminder of her cruel fate
But she stayed for the love she bore her little sis
Kept on dancing, and prancing, and showing her ****
[HOOK] (x2)
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