Yeah it is a bit generic. This round is important because you want to make sure every line has something that makes it stand-out yet ties together in the end.
You should spice the song up some more
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
The last line should be salvaged tho @Truffle
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Originally posted by swiftie13
Hm, I agree with your worries
Thanks for the feedback, I already had my doubts in the beginning tbh,
let me add some flavor to it