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Chapter 7: Comments (Virgins)
Chapter 7: Comments (Virgins)
MOBA
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Originally posted by Superiore
The background picture is great as it represents both your style and Rih's roots but then the text is just thrown there in white boxes hidden under collapse tags? I wish you did a blending of the two parts rather than separating it this way. If the text was implemented in the graphics, you would've got a couple points more from me but, unfortunately, this way it looked a little lazy.
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Originally posted by Kworb
This is really cute. I love it.
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Originally posted by Katie
ehh....I'm not really into collapse tags in posts like these. It should be more visually stunning at first glance. The entry as a whole was okay.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Super basic and simple, but vibrantly cute. Not much for me to work with and judge but you still got the job done.
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ZENA
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Originally posted by Superiore
I can't at you and Jorge using the damn same header for her name. The entry looks a bit My Space-y but still is quite good. The formatting is definitely on point but maybe it could've been improved with the addition of some better graphics which would've brought some more flavour. Yas @ the promo for her albums, though. When will Ms. Fenty?
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Originally posted by Kworb
Eh, you tried your best. I think.
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Originally posted by Katie
it's so cute! Like something I would have made. It reads like a GeoCities page from like 1991 with the table blocking. I like it a lot.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Come the **** THROUGH. The formatting template is like the go-to style you always use but it goes so well for this round. It's like this compact unit with so much content yet I don't feel overwhelmed when I look at it. It actually excites me, like “omg where do I start first!”
I love the gif inclusion too because I'm shocked no one else has used one in theirs. The only things I would change are just quality improvements. Like that jacked up png cut job in the header, some of these LQ af pics. Little things like that though cause I wouldn't rearrange a thing.
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ROZE
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Originally posted by Superiore
THIS is the example of how sometimes simplicity brings better results than overdoing. It looks so clean and clear, yet it low-key slayed me. Thank God, you didn't make it a DripMINO fanfic this time around.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Looks great but I hate the font.
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Originally posted by Katie
The font choice was kind of iffy. The rest of the entry looks a little too streamlined. I'd like something more blended instead of neatly organized.
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Originally posted by Kitt
I thought this would be pale in comparison with how basic it is, but after seeing the works of Guero, Citrus', Qatari, Serena, etc. it's not so bad. It's very simple but seamless, not a hair out of place, and detail focused for the content that IS there. I'm just dead af that you didn't get the memo that you could add your own text elsewhere. lmao. I hope one of the other judges catch the vacation pic cause I still think that was a kii.
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RIMO
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Originally posted by Superiore
wish you at least told us what were the supposed directions you gave to Era, because this totally looks 100% like his previous graphics jobs I've seen. Did you pick the picture he had to use? Did you tell him to crop them that way? Did you at least do the additional little texts near the images? We don't know. Having someone else do your graphics in any other challenge would've been okay but for this it wasn't at all. There's other contestants who weren't in their comfort zone with this but at least they tried to make something and I appreciated that effort. I don't know if the other judges are gonna be oblivious of all the previous things I told but, for me, it would be disrespectful to the others not to put you in last position.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Beautiful, like pages from a magazine. It looks awesome. (I deducted 3 points)
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Originally posted by Katie
I'm not really sure how to grade this one. On the one hand, it's obviously perfect. Zero flaws detected. Except for one flaw: you didn't make this. Domino says you were the guiding force but it still wasn't your work. I have to deduct points from an otherwise perfect entry.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Lazy mother****er. How do you always got an excuse each week too? Disgusting. Wire me some money and I just MIGHT use my wildcard on you.
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ERA
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Originally posted by Kitt
Did you sign up for LA? I wish you played tbh. I suppose it would've been too much since you were still in ANTM at the time that it started, but please try out for S5. Your work is amazing.
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GOGO
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Originally posted by Superiore
RIP in piss.  Pity points because the text formatting was at least working. |
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Originally posted by Kworb
This is what the internet looked like in the late 90s.
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Originally posted by Katie
always test your entries within a quote since that's how they're posted. Never format based on the PM you send. Because of that, the red background doesn't go the entire width and Rihanna's picture is so stretched it makes her forehead look big.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Not sure who was lazier, you or Citrus. I'm kinda crackin' up at this, though. The failed [d=1] background and broken images. Well, bye girl. You were fun to have around.
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ZITO
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Originally posted by Superiore
The idea behind it is cool but it's really hard to have a read of the text with all the different directions its put in and different dimensions. With a different development this could have been one of the best entries of the week but, as it is, it just gives me the impression of a far-fetched hurried mess.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Pretty cool, though I'd have made it all images.
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Originally posted by Katie
I'm not sure what you were going for with the text on her body. It's really off putting and cheap looking. Someone needs to be really good at photoshop to make that work. The rest of it is good, not great.
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Originally posted by Kitt
lmao wat. No you didn't just slap some damn text on some pics and call it a day. And they're not even my favorite half naked ones to bring out my gay and distract. Lazy ass.
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LUNA
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Originally posted by Superiore
I really liked the creative input in this. badgalriri made of Instagram her home these past years so it's really fitting for this text, in my opinion. It was nothing that required that much work in editing but you made it work with the right choices in text colors and the right pictures. Insta eye-catching for sure. Good one.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Love the idea, well executed.
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Originally posted by Katie
okay, this is perfect. You win. Everyone knows Rihanna and those damn pictures. This is so creative and perfect.
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Originally posted by Kitt
I get it. Instagram. Social media queen. But, ugh, IG is just so messy as a theme. I love that you used real posts from her feed though.
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Stay tuned to see the comments for the virgins.
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