[Aurora]

Meter and syllable stressing. So important. Don't **** it up.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by GotSkill

ask fefe and he'll give you an even longer essay than I just did about it

#FefeConfirmedAgain

[Kworb]

Hmm this is tough. All my favorite intros and interludes are instrumentals.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

#FefeConfirmedAgain

The only thing confirmed is your R1 elimination when I give your song a 0.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Sam 

The only thing confirmed is your R1 elimination when I give your song a 0.

Wtf

[Hugamari]

Flow is also important! Two lines can both have the same syllables, but not the same flow, which makes it sound disjointed.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Sam 

Meter and syllable stressing. So important. Don't **** it up.

Yes basically this.

[Temporal]

If I was a new contestant y'all would be overwhelming me tbh

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Flow is also important! Two lines can both have the same syllables, but not the same flow, which makes it sound disjointed.

Yes and that's mainly due to syllable stressing.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

If I was a new contestant y'all would be overwhelming me tbh

This is the first round. We're going to be a lot more lenient... well, at least I am... when it comes to these types of things. It doesn't come naturally to everyone and that's 100% fine. There's room for everyone to learn new things. I knew nothing about meter/stress before joining PH, the judges really helped me with that. Round 1 is always tough because you don't know what's gonna work and what isn't.

[Jezang Looz]

Aww you added me on the list

I'll work on this tomorrow after I slept on it

[ausdaniel]

Wow what the hell, my intro just kinda turned sexual all of a sudden! I'm just writing sexually wtf. Idk if it's cheesy sexual or not because I never write like this but in a way I'm really proud of myself. I've edited my song again so if there's anybody again willing to exchange songs to read and critique please PM me

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Sam 

This is the first round. We're going to be a lot more lenient... well, at least I am... when it comes to these types of things. It doesn't come naturally to everyone and that's 100% fine. There's room for everyone to learn new things. I knew nothing about meter/stress before joining PH, the judges really helped me with that. Round 1 is always tough because you don't know what's gonna work and what isn't.

Yeah, Gotskill helped me with meter in R1 last season when I hadn't even considered it before

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by ausdaniel

Wow what the hell, my intro just kinda turned sexual all of a sudden! I'm just writing sexually wtf. Idk if it's cheesy sexual or not because I never write like this but in a way I'm really proud of myself. I've edited my song again so if there's anybody again willing to exchange songs to read and critique please PM me

Is ausdaniel going to be the Hugamari of this season

[Aurora]

I might send out the first PH PMs today.

[ausdaniel]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Is ausdaniel going to be the Hugamari of this season

Let's just call this a one time thing for now, and see where the rest of the season goes

I mean I am all for trying new things!

[ausdaniel]

Originally posted by Sam 

I might send out the first PH PMs today.

What does this mean? hahah what constitutes a PH PM?

[Speezy]

k wrote a new dark sexy interlude

this interlude slays my existance btw

[Aurora]

Originally posted by ausdaniel

What does this mean? hahah what constitutes a PH PM?

Well I haven't done any promo yet, the challenge has been posted and sign-ups are still open. So I'll PM everyone who's signed up (and hasn't posted since I posted the challenge) and maybe send some PMs to people who said they were interested in joining in the songwriter's thread and haven't done so yet.

[Hugamari]

My early songs in S7 were such a mess, though. Three sexual songs and a rap that tanked. Amazing how I survived the early rounds.