1. Perfect song for the first position.
2. I guess it works but that song..
3.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
Hey Funky. I like the first two positions you chose (as in their songs and explanations). It's ghetto and filthy so I can tell this entry truly came from you, Funky. I know DOMINO just told you guys to pick your favorite three so there didn't have to be a certain theme, but I do think you should have kept the ghetto fabulous sonic theme present in your third choice since you suddenly go eurogay on us in your third selection though the song does fit your description. Cute tumblr. Overall, a solid entry though I wish you had stayed consistent sonically.
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Originally posted by Kitt
“Not Tonight”
Yas. Perfect introduction for the trinity that also serves as foreplay to the rest. What the **** is a crusty coochie 😩 so tired of this. You trying to get placed in the bottom? ...Nevermind. If a crusty coochie is tight, clean, and trimmed then I’ll take it.
“Throw That Boy *****" *adds to plug playlist* smfh poor boy in this video look like he’s shamelessly caught his fair share of STD’s.
"A Public Affair” A Jessica Simpson song for this *** fest.
In anything I’ve ever judged, I don’t think an entry has ever made me laugh so hard throughout it. The commentary, song choices, and each position and it’s justification just gets better than the last. Quite the climax. The judge pandering, my name getting two cameo appearances. Glad to know you know which one matters most.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Bit messy. Bit gross. Bit scary how much you know of all the judges. But I like the effort you put into your fan fiction. The songs all work but I wasn’t a fan of one of your…positions. DISCLAIMER: I refuse to go into detail regarding my likes/dislikes of specific positions! I refuse to be exposed! Only Santaus knows my likes.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
What in the world did I just read? I am legitimately screaming at the examples and the <<suited for …>> parts. Well, the songs were alright but not amazing. Jessica Simpson, Lil Kim and Fly Young Red in the same trinity is just plain wrong. I’m trying to imagine it right now.. wait.. NO not happening. Your personality is what made your entry special, though. It definitely brought a smile in face and hey, sometimes that’s all you need to do.
MICH
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Originally posted by Tiberius
1. I think I've learned enough about this position today. The song fits more than it did for Funky.
2. Good choice for this one.
3. Perfect choice.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
Hello University of Michigan. With trinities, there needs to be some sort of unifying factor other than the obvious theme DOMINO gave you guys. That was where you went a little sour, in my opinion. You start off with the train song which was humorous but then go totally literal on your next two tracks. I would have preferred you to either stick with a humorous entry or go serious like your last two tracks. Sonically, they're all urban but your first track doesn't compliment U Already Know or 1 + 1 since it has that novelty appeal to it that makes it funny. Your explanations were both pithy and good as usual. It's really just the small but noticeable inconsistency I didn't totally like. Still, a good entry from you.
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Originally posted by Kitt
“C’mon N’ Ride It”
Such a seamless fit with the subliminal meaning and fun nature (that is usually a required mindset for such activities like a damn orgy.)
“U Already Know”
Self explanatory.
“1+1”
I see it.
A mess that you have missionary and doggystyle, two of the most conventional positions in comparison, but start off with a damn train.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
You can tell what was written from experience and what wasn’t, unless I’m mistaken. (Not shade or anything) I just felt it in the writing. The third write up was lovely.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
The first position and song seemed more like a parody to me and I couldn’t take it very seriously. Nevertheless it made somewhat sense. Your second choice was good, the song matched the position. Now, the third song and position combination is the highlight of this entry for me. It matched perfectly. Overall solid but not as good as you are capable of. I know you can do much much better, you’re a runner-up and we’ve seen a lot better from you.
JORG
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Originally posted by Tiberius
I see you kept the dick away from the vagina/asshole this round.
1. It sure works for this round, the song is definitely also a metaphor for oral sex. I don't like it when religion is used as a metaphor for sex but it works so..
2. This works too.
3. Mess.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
I actually really liked that you didn't just choose three random positions and actually chose a route to go with this round, since trinities really should come together somehow after all. However, you didn't do as good of a job actually choosing songs. Like A Prayer was fine even though I hope you know the song's a double meaning which is why you may have had to reach a little to make some lyrics work. Jack U off was clearly a perfect pick and also went along with your very pop sonic route. Then you drop the ball with Fire Under My Feet which literally has one lyric that could possibly relate to foot jobs and while I know you said to think dirty, it just doesn't work. It really is an empowerment rack whatever way you put it. A couple people did the same thing successfully but this one falls flat since you relied on one line solely. Overall, I loved the idea but your execution was lacking Jorge.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Slay at this formatting. 10 just for that. And also not only for having a theme but one that calls for many unconventional positions (outside of blowjob).
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Um…I like the definitions you added. What bothers me is that Jack U Off has a blatant message whereas Like a Prayer is a tiny bit more subtle and then you have Fire Under My Feet is just a complete reach and you just made it sexual for the sake of this challenge. It would have been a clever entry had you done this for all three “Jobs” but meh.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
<<“I wanna take you there," she wants to say she wants to get her man to orgasm>> <<with 'power' she references her man's physical power, his penis.”>> Okay now pause, Jorge! I literally can’t at this entry coming from you. I just can’t. This doesn’t feel legal, at all. What confuses me is that you mention penis once, but then use verga. However, this entry shocked me in a positive way. I didn’t expect this from you. Everything seemed perfect… until you brought Leona’s song into it. That one drags it a bit down for me. And I see that you have been using Kitt’s layout from Holy Trinity, which is nice. All in all a very solid entry.
EILV
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Originally posted by Tiberius
I'm sorry but I don't think you got the theme for this week. The theme was asking for sex positions not types of sex, while submissive, S&M and being on top are types of sex.
Sure, the songs would fit so I give you points for that but I can't give you other points as it doesn't fit the challenge.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
You literally didn't choose any positions so that pretty much annihilated you. I did like that you went a submissive route so you had an actual theme set, but you didn't do the main task which made no sense. Sexxx Dreams & S&M do work for that submissive theme you chose, but you didn't explain them well and you didn't correlate them to a specific position. Love On Top has no correlation to sex besides the way you forced it to fit, but you're supposed to have your songs present a position and then elaborate on that in your explanation, You just forced your explanation into making the song fit. Not a good entry for you, Melvin. You ignored key components of this challenge and didn't really make up for it with your song selection. I know you can do better.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Replace Gaga with Nicki and it would’ve truly been a Holy Trinity trinity.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
All really obvious sex songs (aside from LOT) but aren’t really sex positions? But I appreciate you putting the audios and not the actual videos. Accidentally getting caught up watching the MV during sex is super distracting and can get awkward. So props, even if it was done unintentionally.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
The layout is cute. The song choices are good. But damn, you missed the actual task, Melvin! You were supposed to pick three sex positions and find a song for each. You talked about sex in general which isn’t what we were looking for. Also you were late, I know why it happened but even if you had worked 48 hours on this one it felt like there wasn’t enough content. All I was able to judge were your songs but that’s only half of the task.
RENA
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Originally posted by Tiberius
ddd this was harder for me.
1. As in dwuw's case, this is also fitting. I liked your reasoning and explanation more, though.
2. I don't really feel this choice for this position.
3. The lyrics are really fitting for this one.
Mostly I loved the way you put it all in context and your reasoning.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
Your writing is so pretentious I actually personally wanna spit on you and use bad grammar as I insult you. But, your entry was really good. You intertwined three sexual acts with religion of all things which oddly worked super well. I don't approve of ever using the same artist twice in a trinity since you only have three songs to begin with and choosing three different artists shows a bit more diversity. That's really the only negative though. All three of your tracks intertwined your own sexual thoughts and your underlying theme of religion very nicely. They also chronologically make sense when thinking of how this bedroom affair would play out which was just a nice added touch. Great job Serena and very outside of the box in doing so.
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Originally posted by Kitt
The Madonna stanning I do like the ironic connection with this being “holy trinity” yet about sexual positions and you being religious but I just don’t think it was a good idea to choose another Madonna song especially while also the position is in the same vein to the one before it. If you wanted something pop and about referencing getting ate out, there's still a plethora of options to choose from. But I absolutely adore the personal connection you've put into this and I'm surprised at how fleshed out it is coming from you.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
I knew you were fronting. POWER BOTTOM. OWN IT.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Okay Serena, wottice. That was amazing, I can’t. Who would have thought that an actual virgin would be so good at picking a trinity for sex positions and then explain them like it’s a test for God knows what. I’m very impressed. The songs matched the positions perfectly (except Holy Water maybe, I didn’t get it as much as the others). I like how you had like a mini introduction instead of just randomly starting. The songs make sense together and individually, which is also a plus. All I have to say is, YAS chyanchyeuse, YAS!
MINZ
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Originally posted by Tiberius
1. Really good choice, Reverse Cowgirl is all about the girl being on top so Commander is a great fit for this one. The lyrics are pretty sexual too.
2. It works but imo this would work perfectly for missionary.
3. I had to google it before dd, but it's another great pick.
Great entry overall.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
I feel like having sex on an exercise ball is a terrible idea because you guys will fall and your hole will be torn up. Just saying. Anyway, your choices and your explanations all were nice. I just didn't really see where they came together because for example you said that there was a big finale during Sexercize as if your tracks created this sex scene when your first two completely contradict one another? Hope that makes sense. That was really your only problem but it did throw me off quite a bit. It felt like you threw three well done entries together rather than totally unified them as one. In the middle of the pack.
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Originally posted by Kitt
"Perfect for: Spooning" blackladysittingdown.jpg
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
This was well enough but the songs and the words together didn't do it for me. Your explanation was almost too professor like and I was missing that sexualized oomph. The inclusion of spoon was rather cute. Not really sex but just as intimate, if not more so.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Hmm… I kind of get your first choice but then I don’t. Being a commander seems more like a top if you ask me. Using that song for a submissive role is a bit confusing but I get it in a sense that that person tries to be the dominant one in that position?! The second choice, however, is amazing. It’s funny because I didn’t know what spooning meant until Drip asked me if I am the big or the little spoon a few weeks ago. Okay at your third choice. I’ve never seen that pose whatsoever but judging by your explanation the song fits. Overall good but not amazing, Element.
FAFA
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Originally posted by Tiberius
1. Great fit for oral
2. Not really fitting
3. It works
Really lackluster, and it could've been a much better entry reading the theme you started with. But it felt rushed. I expected more from you.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
You really took a clear sonic route with your entries so that was nice and consistent. I also like that chronologically, your explanations make sense in a clever way (though the last one was too brief). Problem is.... your song selections didn't completely pair with them. Watch N Learn you used for oral sex which works to an extent but it's not blatantly clear that's the focus of the song. Get On Your Knees works for oral sex as well but you wrote missionary which is not what the song focuses on. You mention the guy getting on his knees in your explanation though which confuses me. Trading Places works with your title but your explanation(s) didn't really explain the whole versatile aspect of that title on top of being so brief. I feel like you had one of the best ideas but executed it half-way rather than all the way there.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Love the introduction and the narrative.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
The storyline was cute. The positions were basic. One night stand at best.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Fafa, first of all what’s up with that random ass Drake face on the top corner and Hotline Bling lyrics next to it? TF you think this is? What I didd like about this entry is the mini story that you created to explain things. It made more sense like that. The first two song choices were actually amazing. However, you kind of fell flat with the third one. Not only did you basically not say anything on why the song matched the position but it was also the shortest explanation despite this position is probably what the foreplay built up to. I expected more from you and you didn’t deliver all the way.
Probably the most original entry for this challenge. Really great also, I loved your approach and it was so funny reading it. Amazing.
Every song fits perfectly.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
You know you always go out of the box which is admirable even though it may not work sometimes. Luckily, it does this time. The whole mocking religious theme to your trinity was really cute especially when we're making sex trinities. Your first choice was hilarious. Your third choice you fully connected to with your explanation which is what explanations are for: completing the package. My only issue with your entry was that while I know Mary Mary is of some sort of religious affiliation, the song selection sonically threw you off from this very lovely faux holy theme you had set up for yourself. Besides that, one of the better entries submitted this round.
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Originally posted by Kitt
This is just way too cohesive for me. You're a damn genius for remembering The Loophole too.
Praying Position as a sexual position...with God 🏃🏾🏃🏾🏃🏾🏃🏾🏃🏾 Girrrrrrrl. I hate you.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
The story was bordering on convoluted but kudos on some of your effort, kudos on your positions and kudos on making me have to think about some of those double, triple entendres.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
As a person who believes in God, I felt personally attacked and disgusted how you brought God into this mess. As the host of Les ATRLers, however, I feel like you delivered on a whole other level than a lot of the others. You had a clear theme and explained your song choices and positions really well. Then I had to pause at this <<After you two have a nice laugh about it, he will inseminate you.>> WOTTICE? I died at this entry. Well done, Orange, well done.
RIMO
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Originally posted by Tiberius
The third position and the song you chose is the most fitting out of your entry.
Overall this is another lackluster entry of the week, it feels rushed and I feel like you didn't really care about it.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
Using Bey twice was a bad idea in my opinion because you only have three songs and using two on the same artists shows a lack of diversity. Anyway. CIL didn't fit the first position for me because the remix has this midtempo and I feel that position would only work with something very intimate and slow. I actually like your other two choices. Love Me Like You Do works for your given position and Rocket is clearly about the girl being on top. The real problem here is your explanations, Qatari. You hardly explained anything and what you did was practically all sonic and not lyrical. I would have liked some lyrics supporting your points and overall just better explanations. Look at a few other player's entries and you'll see what I mean. The explanations were just so lacking and while your song choices slightly made up for that, it still needs to be worked on. Not the best entry but I do see good in it. Just bring out that good completely next time.
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Originally posted by Kitt
I think the CIL remix works well for The Cat aka basically missionary, but kind of funny that the song was made for a film about BDSM. I'm giving you points though for being the first to use regular ass cowgirl after reading 70 entries with reverse.
Now for using two Beyoncé songs, in the real Holy Trinity your ass would get dragged so hard for that. I'm lenient with it here but it feels so disjointed to use two of the same artist and then some other cone.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
You might as well have gone all out used Bey for all three songs. That random ass Bieber insertion made me angry. But strangely enough, I liked your explanations as they bring me back to my pre-active years.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Qatari I must say that I’m not very impressed by this entry. It seems rushed, poorly explained and it just didn’t click with me. I would blame it on your lack of experience but dwuw and Serendipity have both delivered superb entries despite being virgins so that is no excuse. Crazy in Love and Rocket were amazing choices for these positions but the explanations were just meh. The second choice doesn’t make too much sense to me. It’s really not about the song choices as such, it’s just the overall feel of this entry that isn’t great.
ZENA
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Originally posted by Tiberius
Good entry overall. All the songs fit the positions.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
Good thing is you successfully completed the main task of this round and you did it pretty well. All your songs go along with the positions you chose very obviously and your explanations only add to what your songs already explain themselves. The tracks should for the most part speak for themselves so I'm glad you accomplished that. The real problem is it's all over the place sonically and this is a trinity after all. I'm not saying you had to choose three same tempo R&B songs but there should be some sort of direction and you chose three completely different tracks sonically. That bothered me with a lot of these entries so you're not the only one but that's just my take on what a trinity needs. Overall, you did a good job and you're probably one of the better entries this round.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Well someone was eventually going to choose G.U.Y. :eyes: That was one of the first that popped into my head when playing around thinking of what I’d choose. So perfect that it's almost too predictable. **** it though, we aren’t in the real trinity anymore.
“Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy"
Wait, I remember this song! I'm glad your country ass remembered it cause it's perfect.
“From The Back”
This choice is kind of the anticlimax to your trinity. Nothing special about it and almost a waste of potential as there is a plethora of songs to choose from if you’re going the simple doggystyle route.
All in all, it's a really solid entry. Typical positions with two songs that are either basic or predictable but it’s all consistent.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Idk if I wanna dock you or award you for using Save a Horse. Too obvious yet such a throwback to a huge song that's celebrated for it's obviousness. The descriptions of the positions were obvious. Obvious is obvious.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Your entry is among the best ones for me. The songs matched really well with the positions that you chose. The layout was cute and organzied. Yes, you did choose obvious songs like G.U.Y or songs like Ride a Cowboy but honestly, it worked. I liked how you explained the song, then how it fits to the position. Well done, Scene!
GOGO
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Originally posted by Tiberius
I love that you chose Speechless for the last position. And again, the other songs are fitting the positions. Everyone chose mostly the same positions so my comments are getting shorter
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
In what world is Ride subtle? Anyway, all of your songs fit your positions and you explained decently. That's sort of always been an underlying problem with you so it's sort of frustrating to see you constantly settle for good when you could be great when it comes to these type of entries. You had a clear sonic direction and I also like how you show the different sides to sex in the sense that sex can be just casual fun, filfthy fun, or truly passionate fun. It completes the package and while I don't know if that was purposeful, it worked well regardless. Good entry Guero. Just work on explaining and you'll be getting higher scores than right now.
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Originally posted by Kitt
at Pull My Hair. Haven’t heard that one in like 10 years.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
I don't like thinking of you like that, unnie. I'm uncomfortable. But I liked your flow. You told a story with the fluidity of how you get to each position rather than just a story, if that makes sense.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
The songs you chose were great and your explanations were on point but left me wanting more. It did come off as a bit rushed or you just didn’t put in as much effort as some of the others but the core is there.
MOBA
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Originally posted by Tiberius
Mess, not this being Drip's entry from the perspective of a 3rd person.
I love when y'all took different approaches for this challenge, it was really funny reading this while it did what the challenge asked for.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
This is sort of odd but I think it works out in the end. The way you wrote your explanations was interesting and different even though I feel your fave fanfic star outdid you there. Your songs also slide into one another easily which makes your entry seem like a true package rather than just three songs grouped together. There's really no outright negative thing to say other than I feel you got overshadowed by DripDrip which makes your similar entry (involving fanfic) seem a bit less in comparison. Still, nice job.
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Originally posted by Kitt
I like that I’ve never heard of any of these songs and the fanfic.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Latin. Passion. Best part being the offerings of the perspectives.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Bomb, wyd? Wottice? I didn’t know if I should cry or laugh… Either way, had I not been involved into this mess I would have loved this way of presenting a trinity so well done. You took not so obvious songs and used them in a fitting way. Oh, and the optional full fanfic was a great idea, too. Knowing ATRL you’d be banned in a second if those were actually part of your entry but this way we could <<enjoy>> reading the full story instead of the closeted version. I liked it.
ROZE
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Originally posted by Tiberius
The 2nd most original entry of the week, I love how you named yourself the positions and I loved how you incorporated your brand into it. Really good, DOM must be proud.
The songs are perfect choices.
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Originally posted by DillonATRL
This was really clever. From the fanfic to the Disney princess theme, you really did go a different route... and it totally worked. Your positions were brand new but still kept on track with the requirements for this round. You explained your fan fiction in a way that also described the song which killed two birds with one stone. Again, I love the Disney princess gone sort of wild theme and how you transition from princess to freak by the end of the entry. This is just a really smart idea and it was also executed very well which leaves me with nothing to complain about. Nice job, FlopFlop.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Cater to my feminist submissive heart, why don't you.
“Here is where I mention and whisper into his ear to let Buddy be an All Star.” you know what this sounds like. Lowkey wish you would've done the mood ruining dialogue for each one.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
One of the most creative but not sure how I feel. I think a bit more general would have gotten me to latch on a bit more. Bit too specific. Never be pigeonholed.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
<<#FunFact: Me and Domino did all these on our first date.>> <<Here is where I mention and whisper into his ear to let Buddy be an All Star. Mr. D doesn't like this and has to teach his Princess Drip a lesson. >> <<as I wrap my legs around him for balance and support.>> I CANNOT BREATHE! I thought I would feel uncomfortable reading this entry solely based on seeing my name being mentioned. But you have proved me wrong. This was amazing. The songs were great, the positions matched. Everything was great. Definitely one of my favorites this week. Look at you, miss thing. I didn’t know you could deliver. It seemed effortlessly amazing and I was impressed at you including what you love which is disney. YAS!
I didn't write a lot in my descriptions because I thought we were supposed to keep it short. I could have written paragraphs but I didn't want to ramble on.
*adds to plug playlist* smfh poor boy in this video look like he’s shamelessly caught his fair share of STD’s.
A Jessica Simpson song for this *** fest.
I'm glad your country ass remembered it cause it's perfect.
you know what this sounds like. Lowkey wish you would've done the mood ruining dialogue for each one.
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