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Discussion: ATRL Songwriter's Thread | Jacktrus gain dual #1
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Originally posted by ceremonials
True. I was writing the first verse the other day and I was trying so hard to be deep but it just came off as so forced.
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Here's a song that just came to me earlier on in the year. I submitted it for a round in Platinum Hit, and it won that round (and ended up being the highest-scored song of the season). It's not my favourite song I've ever written or anything, but it was pretty well received, so maybe you'll like it. 
 Set Sail
Verse 1
I was stranded when you landed
And you tried to make a home
On this isolated island
Where I made do on my own
Should have sent you on your way
I was better off alone
Still I tried to best provide you
With a shelter from the cold
And was beautifully blinded
By the lies you always told
Should have realized as I melted
Like the ice that plagues your soul
Pre-Chorus
I thought you were after my time and affection
But your compass points in a different direction
I’m not just a treasure for your prize collection
So turn to the ocean and kiss your reflection
Chorus
The winds begin to howl
Calling your name
Placing their blame
The waves are crying out
Screaming your name
Theirs to reclaim
Your siren song now silenced
By the sound of your betrayal
It’s time for you to go
Now set sail
Verse 2
Soon I realized it was unwise
That I took a stranger in
But your effervescent aura
Made regret feel like a sin
So I pushed my doubts away
Like a sail in the wind
But you broke me, which awoke me
From the spell which you had cast
So that never-ending nightmare
I’ll leave buried in the past
Now you realize you can’t own me
Like a flag bound to your mast
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
I thought you were my counterweight
My anchor and my ground
Just like a fool I caught the bait
And let you pull me down
So if you try to call my bluff
Or get lost out at sea
There’ll be no lighthouse bright enough
To guide you back to me
Chorus
Outro
Your siren song now silenced
By the sound of your betrayal
It’s time for you to go
Now set sail
Set sail
Set sail
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Originally posted by Sam
Here's a song that just came to me earlier on in the year. I submitted it for a round in Platinum Hit, and it won that round (and ended up being the highest-scored song of the season). It's not my favourite song I've ever written or anything, but it was pretty well received, so maybe you'll like it.
Set Sail
Verse 1
I was stranded when you landed
And you tried to make a home
On this isolated island
Where I made do on my own
Should have sent you on your way
I was better off alone
Still I tried to best provide you
With a shelter from the cold
And was beautifully blinded
By the lies you always told
Should have realized as I melted
Like the ice that plagues your soul
Pre-Chorus
I thought you were after my time and affection
But your compass points in a different direction
I’m not just a treasure for your prize collection
So turn to the ocean and kiss your reflection
Chorus
The winds begin to howl
Calling your name
Placing their blame
The waves are crying out
Screaming your name
Theirs to reclaim
Your siren song now silenced
By the sound of your betrayal
It’s time for you to go
Now set sail
Verse 2
Soon I realized it was unwise
That I took a stranger in
But your effervescent aura
Made regret feel like a sin
So I pushed my doubts away
Like a sail in the wind
But you broke me, which awoke me
From the spell which you had cast
So that never-ending nightmare
I’ll leave buried in the past
Now you realize you can’t own me
Like a flag bound to your mast
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
I thought you were my counterweight
My anchor and my ground
Just like a fool I caught the bait
And let you pull me down
So if you try to call my bluff
Or get lost out at sea
There’ll be no lighthouse bright enough
To guide you back to me
Chorus
Outro
Your siren song now silenced
By the sound of your betrayal
It’s time for you to go
Now set sail
Set sail
Set sail
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The pre chorus  I love it!
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Don't drag me please, I wrote this one for my boyfriend to, well, ask him if he wanted to be my boyfriend. So it's kind of cheesy and simple 
Will You Be Mine
2.-WILL YOU BE MINE?
I wish I could be the one you needed
I wish you could see the sky in my eyes
If I just knew a way to make you happy
To make you feel safe when you're by my side
God, I wish I could be the best for you
There is something that makes me go back to you
And I could keep going on, swimming against the sea
I'd like to know if we're going to end up being together
But this book has a missing ending
Oh, I wish I could write a future with you
Cause maybe I'm not what you've been looking for
And at certain times I can let you down
I've been so stupid
I've been a little selfish
But I love you
I love you
And I poured my heart
Will you ever be with me?
I wish you could see I'm standing here
Melting with time while the clock's ticking
I see you keep complaining about the cold
I could be your heater and keep you warm
Don't you see all the things I'd do for you?
But maybe you're not what I've been looking for
And at certain times you can drive me insane
You've been so silly
You've been so blind
Still I love you
I still love you
And I don't know why
Why do I look for you love?
But I don't even have to doubt
If you are good for me or not
Cause I can feel it all so clear
We are dangerous to each other
Swear I would never want to leave
By your side I will be standing
Cause we can't be the perfect love
But we could make the perfect fit
You complete me
Can't you see?
Baby, you're all that I've been waiting for
I don't care about the times that I've been hurt
We are imperfect, but us, together
We could shine like gold
Because I love you, I love you, I love you
So do you love me, you love me, you love me?
I said I love you, I love you, I love you
Tell me if you love me, you love me, you love me
I'm dying to know
All this time I've waited
To say
To ask
Will you be mine?
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I'm on mobile so I can't double quote but Set Sail had a really easy, catchy melody in my head, I can see why it won 
Gabe yours is so cute! I would definitely be endeared if someone wrote something like that in honor of me 
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Originally posted by ceremonials
The pre chorus I love it! |
Quote:
Originally posted by EatmeZayn
I'm on mobile so I can't double quote but Set Sail had a really easy, catchy melody in my head, I can see why it won |
Thank you. 
Quote:
Originally posted by ughgabriel
Don't drag me please, I wrote this one for my boyfriend to, well, ask him if he wanted to be my boyfriend. So it's kind of cheesy and simple
Will You Be Mine
2.-WILL YOU BE MINE?
I wish I could be the one you needed
I wish you could see the sky in my eyes
If I just knew a way to make you happy
To make you feel safe when you're by my side
God, I wish I could be the best for you
There is something that makes me go back to you
And I could keep going on, swimming against the sea
I'd like to know if we're going to end up being together
But this book has a missing ending
Oh, I wish I could write a future with you
Cause maybe I'm not what you've been looking for
And at certain times I can let you down
I've been so stupid
I've been a little selfish
But I love you
I love you
And I poured my heart
Will you ever be with me?
I wish you could see I'm standing here
Melting with time while the clock's ticking
I see you keep complaining about the cold
I could be your heater and keep you warm
Don't you see all the things I'd do for you?
But maybe you're not what I've been looking for
And at certain times you can drive me insane
You've been so silly
You've been so blind
Still I love you
I still love you
And I don't know why
Why do I look for you love?
But I don't even have to doubt
If you are good for me or not
Cause I can feel it all so clear
We are dangerous to each other
Swear I would never want to leave
By your side I will be standing
Cause we can't be the perfect love
But we could make the perfect fit
You complete me
Can't you see?
Baby, you're all that I've been waiting for
I don't care about the times that I've been hurt
We are imperfect, but us, together
We could shine like gold
Because I love you, I love you, I love you
So do you love me, you love me, you love me?
I said I love you, I love you, I love you
Tell me if you love me, you love me, you love me
I'm dying to know
All this time I've waited
To say
To ask
Will you be mine? |
I like the non-conventional structure (no exact repeating phrases or stanzas)... I'm not usually a fan of that style of writing but I think it works quite nicely in this case!
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Originally posted by ughgabriel
Don't drag me please, I wrote this one for my boyfriend to, well, ask him if he wanted to be my boyfriend. So it's kind of cheesy and simple
Will You Be Mine
2.-WILL YOU BE MINE?
I wish I could be the one you needed
I wish you could see the sky in my eyes
If I just knew a way to make you happy
To make you feel safe when you're by my side
God, I wish I could be the best for you
There is something that makes me go back to you
And I could keep going on, swimming against the sea
I'd like to know if we're going to end up being together
But this book has a missing ending
Oh, I wish I could write a future with you
Cause maybe I'm not what you've been looking for
And at certain times I can let you down
I've been so stupid
I've been a little selfish
But I love you
I love you
And I poured my heart
Will you ever be with me?
I wish you could see I'm standing here
Melting with time while the clock's ticking
I see you keep complaining about the cold
I could be your heater and keep you warm
Don't you see all the things I'd do for you?
But maybe you're not what I've been looking for
And at certain times you can drive me insane
You've been so silly
You've been so blind
Still I love you
I still love you
And I don't know why
Why do I look for you love?
But I don't even have to doubt
If you are good for me or not
Cause I can feel it all so clear
We are dangerous to each other
Swear I would never want to leave
By your side I will be standing
Cause we can't be the perfect love
But we could make the perfect fit
You complete me
Can't you see?
Baby, you're all that I've been waiting for
I don't care about the times that I've been hurt
We are imperfect, but us, together
We could shine like gold
Because I love you, I love you, I love you
So do you love me, you love me, you love me?
I said I love you, I love you, I love you
Tell me if you love me, you love me, you love me
I'm dying to know
All this time I've waited
To say
To ask
Will you be mine? |
Cute!
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Originally posted by Sam
You're not a man! You're just a mannequin!
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You caught me.
Also mess at this thread being active.
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Originally posted by Tymps.
You caught me.
Also mess at this thread being active. |
I'm reviving it.
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Welp having a horrible day right now it made me write a good song so hey!
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I wrote this one on my piano, it's very personal.
Thick Walls
Maybe it was the way I used to dress
Maybe it was the way I used to act
Why me? Why is this happening to me?
I didn't ask for this, I swear I didn't ask for this
People say it was all my fault
They say that I deserved it
It was the only way I could learn
Maybe the nights were made to frighten me
Now these jeans feel so useless
They can't cover up the shame
And all this water feels so dry
It can't wash the dirt away
Cause I said no
And I screamed no
But the walls were too thick
But I said no
I shouted no
But the people covered up their ears
Don't let the words come in
Don't let the people hear
And it's not that I didn't like company
It's just that sometimes I liked to be alone
People like me need some time for themselves
And the beast knew it with his hunting sight
I should've looked behind
I should've turned around
I should've used my teeth
I should've used my nails
Cause I said no
And I screamed no
Scars on my body and my mind
But I said no
I shouted no
I begged for mercy, please have some mercy
Won't care about your tears
Won't care about your fears
It takes you one night
To live or die
It takes you one night
To run or fight
I tried to run
On the try I died
Cause you came to fight
And you felt alive
Alive
Cause I said no
And I screamed no
I'm beaten on the concrete
But I said no
I shouted no
But it was already too damn late
What a pretty night it was
I was your pretty f*****' night
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Originally posted by ughgabriel
I wrote this one on my piano, it's very personal.
Thick Walls
Maybe it was the way I used to dress
Maybe it was the way I used to act
Why me? Why is this happening to me?
I didn't ask for this, I swear I didn't ask for this
People say it was all my fault
They say that I deserved it
It was the only way I could learn
Maybe the nights were made to frighten me
Now these jeans feel so useless
They can't cover up the shame
And all this water feels so dry
It can't wash the dirt away
Cause I said no
And I screamed no
But the walls were too thick
But I said no
I shouted no
But the people covered up their ears
Don't let the words come in
Don't let the people hear
And it's not that I didn't like company
It's just that sometimes I liked to be alone
People like me need some time for themselves
And the beast knew it with his hunting sight
I should've looked behind
I should've turned around
I should've used my teeth
I should've used my nails
Cause I said no
And I screamed no
Scars on my body and my mind
But I said no
I shouted no
I begged for mercy, please have some mercy
Won't care about your tears
Won't care about your fears
It takes you one night
To live or die
It takes you one night
To run or fight
I tried to run
On the try I died
Cause you came to fight
And you felt alive
Alive
Cause I said no
And I screamed no
I'm beaten on the concrete
But I said no
I shouted no
But it was already too damn late
What a pretty night it was
I was your pretty f*****' night |
I like this one better.
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These few weeks it's been a lot about writing songs  <3
Btw I'm a singer if you need someone to maybe sing your lyrics, i'd be honored, there's some great stuff here
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This is the chorus for "Man with the Anchor". Idk what to do for the verses but I kind of like it tbh
The Man With The Anchor
You wanted me to be your anchor
Even if that meant I had to drown
But I told you if I'm going under,
Then we're both going down
You see if the water takes me
Them You're always gonna drown
And you can't turn back, see
Because we're six miles down
Guess you should've thought twice
Before you pushed me in
You should've known what kind
Of demons you were dealing with
Oh, The king of the sea, he
Had to finally lose to win
But he had finally been beaten
By who he thought he'd tied down
Yes, the man with the anchor sent him back into the holy ground
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Wow at this thread not being closed due to inactivity. The power 
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Me and Sam are keeping the good sis alive
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Bump. 
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I have quite a few songs written tbh. Most of it were written from Mariah Carey's perspective although most of them are quite personal  I think Nightfall's lyrics are my personal best tbh 
Fragile
You stole my heart with just one gaze
Now I am stuck in this huge maze
Never thought it would come to this
Now you are the one that I miss
I stood there alone as I cried
All you did was apologized
Who knew you would tear me apart
Now I'm left with an aching heart
[Chorus]
Baby I'm so fragile
Baby I'm volatile
Won't you stay with me?
And comfort me?
[Verse 2]
You knew I'm like a china vase
Just something you could replace
You had it all but did not know
And you just had to let me go
If I could recapture
I would go back to that chapter
The times when we first fall in love
A love sent from heaven above
[Chorus]
Baby I'm so fragile
Baby I'm volatile
Won't you stay with me?
And comfort me?
[Bridge]
Why our love is nothing but a distant memory?
Why did you have to abandon me and just leave it be?
Why can't you just stop for a while and see?
Why do you need to focus on others when you have me?
[Chorus]
Baby I'm so fragile
Baby I'm volatile
Won't you stay with me?
And comfort me?
Nightfall
Who knew you would leave me in despair
Let the darkness overcome me
Have me trapped by your snare
And let me struggle to break free
[Prechorus]
Now you've created a monster inside of me
Now it's struggling to break free
And it's time for my revenge
Finally time for revenge
Cause...
[Chorus]
You've destroyed my heart
Now I'll destroy yours
Tear your soul apart
And leave you in remorse
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
Now I'm on a mission
Releasing my inhibition
Don't care if it's a transgression
Now I'm loading my ammunition
It's time to extirpate
My turn to annihilate
This pain won't dissipate
Until you're left alone
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
[Verse 2]
You've already committed a sin
When you left me in the ruins
I'll be searching for your tracks
Cause' it's time for me to payback
[Prechorus]
You created a monster inside of me
Now it's struggling to break free
And it's time for my revenge
Finally time for revenge
Cause...
[Chorus]
You've destroyed my heart
Now I'll destroy yours
Tear your soul apart
And leave you in remorse
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
Now I'm on a mission
Releasing my inhibition
Don't care if it's a transgression
Now I'm loading my ammunition
It's time to extirpate
My turn to annihilate
This pain won't dissipate
Until you're left alone
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
[Bridge]
You might as well admit your defeat
I've grown stronger, harder to beat
I'm not that naive girl like before
Not someone you can throw and ignore
(Instrumental)
[Chorus]
You've destroyed my heart
Now I'll destroy yours
Tear your soul apart
And leave you in remorse
So now I'm on a mission
Releasing my inhibition
Don't care if it's a transgression
Now I'm loading my ammunition
It's time to extirpate
My turn to annihilate
This pain won't dissipate
Until you're left alone (You'll regret it all)
Within the nightfall (The things you've done)
Nightfall
Within the nightfall (Nightfall)
Nightfall
Nightfall
Denial
From the outside, you seem urbane
Acting all sweet and naive
But in reality, you're insane
Someone no one would perceive
We used to be savage lovers
We were wild and uncontrollable
Thought we could stay like this forever
But now you're just unapproachable
[Pre-chorus]
Can you hear it echoing?
Can you hear it screaming?
The conflict that I'm feeling
Deep down inside of me
[Chorus]
Baby I'm in denial
Why does this feel like a trial
When we used to love each other
Thought that we would be together
Forever (Forever, Forever, Forever.....)
Now I'm picking up the pieces
That you've left behind
Now I'm lost without a cause
Feels like I'm losing my mind
[Hook]
I am in denial right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
[Verse 2]
I'm tired by your endless talk
But now I'm feeling very lost
From the very pain you've caused
You very well know that...
[Chorus]
Baby I'm in denial
Why does this feel like a trial
When we used to love each other
Thought that we would be together
Forever (Forever, Forever, Forever.....)
Now I'm picking up the pieces
That you've left behind
Now I'm lost without a cause
Feels like I'm losing my mind
[Hook]
I am in denial right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
[Bridge]
My mind feels addled right now
What path should I choose right here
The thoughts are dragging me down
And I can't see clear anymore
Cause....
[Chorus]
Baby I'm in denial
Why does this feel like a trial
When we used to love each other
Thought that we would be together
Forever (Forever, Forever, Forever.....)
Now I'm picking up the pieces
That you've left behind
Now I'm lost without a cause
Feels like I'm losing my mind
[Hook]
I am in denial right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
I am in denial right now (Help me now)
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now (I'm so conflicted)
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
Reverberate & The Recovery
Reverberate (The Outro) Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
Am I gonna be forever alone?
All by myself on this forsaken road
Will I continue to be in misery?
Or will I be able to break free?
From all the despair that is binding me
Ohh, Ohh
Ohh, Ohh
(Instrumental plays)
Ohh, Ohh
Ohh, Ohh
Let it reverberate
(Instrumental plays till fades out & transitions into the hidden track)
The Recovery Lyrics:
[Spoken Verse]
I let it reverberate
I left it all to fate
But you guided me
And led me out and be free
[Verse 1]
These endless rain
Falling within my heart
These hidden pain
Embedded within me
What have I gain?
Other than sadness and grief?
[Pre-chorus]
That's when I fell to my knees
Tears fall down as I prayed
Asking why did this happened to me
That's when I heard a voice
Saying to me
That he'll be by my side
Comforting me deep inside
Mend the pieces that were torn apart
And heal my broken heart
That he'll be right there
[Chorus]
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
(Piano Instrumental)
[Verse 2]
Lost a part of me
But I'm still standing strong
Finally I'm free
From the pain I've had all along
I have found the key
That have led me to recovery
[Pre-chorus]
Cause I fell down to my knees
Tears fall down as I prayed
Asking why did this happened to me
That's when I heard a voice
Saying to me
That he'll be by my side
Comforting me deep inside
Mend the pieces that were torn apart
And heal my broken heart
That he'll be right there
[Chorus]
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
[Bridge]
You gave me the strength when I was weak
Gave me the comfort that I seeked
That's when I finally recover!
Leaving this pain behind forever!
That's when I finally recover!
Leaving this pain behind forever!
Once again, I fell to my knees
Tears dried up as I prayed
Asking why did this happened to me
That's when I heard someone
Saying to me....
(That I'll be brand new!)
[Chorus]
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
[Outro]
I've escaped tonight
I've finally recovered
I've seen the light
Finally free like a bird
(Piano Instrumental)
[Acapella]
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
Thank you Lord!
For more info, check out here -> http://createalabel.comyr.com/index....carey-atavism/
Some of the songs are not written by me btw. Whisper, Take A Look, Shangri-La and Run Away were not written by me.
And also, an additional song that I've wrote recently as well.
Hope
[Verse 1]
Baby you're just unfair
Having fun on your own
While I was dumped somewhere
Ohh, I should have known
[Pre-chorus]
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh
I was played around
And I didn't even notice
I was dragged around
Can't believe I used to love it
[Chorus]
I was given a ray of hope
But I was robbed away from it
I do not know how to cope
From all the emptiness I feel
Within
x2
(Instrumental)
[Verse 2]
My heart's just left with dust
My feeling's turned to stone
Don't know anyone I could trust
I'd be better off being alone
[Pre-chorus]
Oooh, Oooh, Oooh
I was played around
And I didn't even notice
I was dragged around
Can't believe I used to love it
[Chorus]
I was given a ray of hope
But I was robbed away from it
I do not know how to cope
From all the emptiness I feel
Within
x2
(Instrumental)
[Bridge]
Took me so long to realize
That I was cheated upon
Can you hear the outcries
Of my aching heart
(Hope)
x8
[Chorus]
I was given a ray of hope
But I was robbed away from it
I do not know how to cope
From all the emptiness I feel
Within
x2
(Instrumental)
[Outro]
Now I'm finally moving on
I'm saying my goodbyes to you
Baby I'll be finally gone
Leaving this barren avenue
I'm creating a new hope in me
I'm leaving and I'm finally free
I'm changing my own course
So that I won't get lost
I finally have hope...
(repeat to fade)
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Originally posted by EpicSongFan
I have quite a few songs written tbh. Most of it were written from Mariah Carey's perspective although most of them are quite personal I think Nightfall's lyrics are my personal best tbh
Fragile
You stole my heart with just one gaze
Now I am stuck in this huge maze
Never thought it would come to this
Now you are the one that I miss
I stood there alone as I cried
All you did was apologized
Who knew you would tear me apart
Now I'm left with an aching heart
[Chorus]
Baby I'm so fragile
Baby I'm volatile
Won't you stay with me?
And comfort me?
[Verse 2]
You knew I'm like a china vase
Just something you could replace
You had it all but did not know
And you just had to let me go
If I could recapture
I would go back to that chapter
The times when we first fall in love
A love sent from heaven above
[Chorus]
Baby I'm so fragile
Baby I'm volatile
Won't you stay with me?
And comfort me?
[Bridge]
Why our love is nothing but a distant memory?
Why did you have to abandon me and just leave it be?
Why can't you just stop for a while and see?
Why do you need to focus on others when you have me?
[Chorus]
Baby I'm so fragile
Baby I'm volatile
Won't you stay with me?
And comfort me?
Nightfall
Who knew you would leave me in despair
Let the darkness overcome me
Have me trapped by your snare
And let me struggle to break free
[Prechorus]
Now you've created a monster inside of me
Now it's struggling to break free
And it's time for my revenge
Finally time for revenge
Cause...
[Chorus]
You've destroyed my heart
Now I'll destroy yours
Tear your soul apart
And leave you in remorse
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
Now I'm on a mission
Releasing my inhibition
Don't care if it's a transgression
Now I'm loading my ammunition
It's time to extirpate
My turn to annihilate
This pain won't dissipate
Until you're left alone
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
[Verse 2]
You've already committed a sin
When you left me in the ruins
I'll be searching for your tracks
Cause' it's time for me to payback
[Prechorus]
You created a monster inside of me
Now it's struggling to break free
And it's time for my revenge
Finally time for revenge
Cause...
[Chorus]
You've destroyed my heart
Now I'll destroy yours
Tear your soul apart
And leave you in remorse
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
Now I'm on a mission
Releasing my inhibition
Don't care if it's a transgression
Now I'm loading my ammunition
It's time to extirpate
My turn to annihilate
This pain won't dissipate
Until you're left alone
Within the nightfall
Nightfall
[Bridge]
You might as well admit your defeat
I've grown stronger, harder to beat
I'm not that naive girl like before
Not someone you can throw and ignore
(Instrumental)
[Chorus]
You've destroyed my heart
Now I'll destroy yours
Tear your soul apart
And leave you in remorse
So now I'm on a mission
Releasing my inhibition
Don't care if it's a transgression
Now I'm loading my ammunition
It's time to extirpate
My turn to annihilate
This pain won't dissipate
Until you're left alone (You'll regret it all)
Within the nightfall (The things you've done)
Nightfall
Within the nightfall (Nightfall)
Nightfall
Nightfall
Denial
From the outside, you seem urbane
Acting all sweet and naive
But in reality, you're insane
Someone no one would perceive
We used to be savage lovers
We were wild and uncontrollable
Thought we could stay like this forever
But now you're just unapproachable
[Pre-chorus]
Can you hear it echoing?
Can you hear it screaming?
The conflict that I'm feeling
Deep down inside of me
[Chorus]
Baby I'm in denial
Why does this feel like a trial
When we used to love each other
Thought that we would be together
Forever (Forever, Forever, Forever.....)
Now I'm picking up the pieces
That you've left behind
Now I'm lost without a cause
Feels like I'm losing my mind
[Hook]
I am in denial right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
[Verse 2]
I'm tired by your endless talk
But now I'm feeling very lost
From the very pain you've caused
You very well know that...
[Chorus]
Baby I'm in denial
Why does this feel like a trial
When we used to love each other
Thought that we would be together
Forever (Forever, Forever, Forever.....)
Now I'm picking up the pieces
That you've left behind
Now I'm lost without a cause
Feels like I'm losing my mind
[Hook]
I am in denial right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
[Bridge]
My mind feels addled right now
What path should I choose right here
The thoughts are dragging me down
And I can't see clear anymore
Cause....
[Chorus]
Baby I'm in denial
Why does this feel like a trial
When we used to love each other
Thought that we would be together
Forever (Forever, Forever, Forever.....)
Now I'm picking up the pieces
That you've left behind
Now I'm lost without a cause
Feels like I'm losing my mind
[Hook]
I am in denial right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
I am in denial right now (Help me now)
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I feel conflicted right now (I'm so conflicted)
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh (Denial)
I am in denial right now
Reverberate & The Recovery
Reverberate (The Outro) Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
Am I gonna be forever alone?
All by myself on this forsaken road
Will I continue to be in misery?
Or will I be able to break free?
From all the despair that is binding me
Ohh, Ohh
Ohh, Ohh
(Instrumental plays)
Ohh, Ohh
Ohh, Ohh
Let it reverberate
(Instrumental plays till fades out & transitions into the hidden track)
The Recovery Lyrics:
[Spoken Verse]
I let it reverberate
I left it all to fate
But you guided me
And led me out and be free
[Verse 1]
These endless rain
Falling within my heart
These hidden pain
Embedded within me
What have I gain?
Other than sadness and grief?
[Pre-chorus]
That's when I fell to my knees
Tears fall down as I prayed
Asking why did this happened to me
That's when I heard a voice
Saying to me
That he'll be by my side
Comforting me deep inside
Mend the pieces that were torn apart
And heal my broken heart
That he'll be right there
[Chorus]
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
(Piano Instrumental)
[Verse 2]
Lost a part of me
But I'm still standing strong
Finally I'm free
From the pain I've had all along
I have found the key
That have led me to recovery
[Pre-chorus]
Cause I fell down to my knees
Tears fall down as I prayed
Asking why did this happened to me
That's when I heard a voice
Saying to me
That he'll be by my side
Comforting me deep inside
Mend the pieces that were torn apart
And heal my broken heart
That he'll be right there
[Chorus]
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
[Bridge]
You gave me the strength when I was weak
Gave me the comfort that I seeked
That's when I finally recover!
Leaving this pain behind forever!
That's when I finally recover!
Leaving this pain behind forever!
Once again, I fell to my knees
Tears dried up as I prayed
Asking why did this happened to me
That's when I heard someone
Saying to me....
(That I'll be brand new!)
[Chorus]
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
That's when I realize
I can't stay like this forever
That's when I recover
That's when I recover
And finally arise
And become someone new
[Outro]
I've escaped tonight
I've finally recovered
I've seen the light
Finally free like a bird
(Piano Instrumental)
[Acapella]
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
(That's when I recover)
Thank you Lord!
For more info, check out here -> http://createalabel.comyr.com/index....carey-atavism/
Some of the songs are not written by me btw. Whisper, Take A Look, Shangri-La and Run Away were not written by me.
And also, an additional song that I've wrote recently as well.
Hope
[Verse 1]
Baby you're just unfair
Having fun on your own
While I was dumped somewhere
Ohh, I should have known
[Pre-chorus]
Ohh, Ohh, Ohh
I was played around
And I didn't even notice
I was dragged around
Can't believe I used to love it
[Chorus]
I was given a ray of hope
But I was robbed away from it
I do not know how to cope
From all the emptiness I feel
Within
x2
(Instrumental)
[Verse 2]
My heart's just left with dust
My feeling's turned to stone
Don't know anyone I could trust
I'd be better off being alone
[Pre-chorus]
Oooh, Oooh, Oooh
I was played around
And I didn't even notice
I was dragged around
Can't believe I used to love it
[Chorus]
I was given a ray of hope
But I was robbed away from it
I do not know how to cope
From all the emptiness I feel
Within
x2
(Instrumental)
[Bridge]
Took me so long to realize
That I was cheated upon
Can you hear the outcries
Of my aching heart
(Hope)
x8
[Chorus]
I was given a ray of hope
But I was robbed away from it
I do not know how to cope
From all the emptiness I feel
Within
x2
(Instrumental)
[Outro]
Now I'm finally moving on
I'm saying my goodbyes to you
Baby I'll be finally gone
Leaving this barren avenue
I'm creating a new hope in me
I'm leaving and I'm finally free
I'm changing my own course
So that I won't get lost
I finally have hope...
(repeat to fade)
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