[Tymps.]

A T R L ' s
H O L Y T R I N I T Y
J U D G I N G

HausofNiko

Originally posted by Buddy!

Alright I kinda like this. It's good yet it's not bad. Revenge isn't always need though

Originally posted by conatus

This honestly just feels really cheesy and after-school-special-y. "Beautiful" and "Breakaway" are obvious choices, and "Before He Cheats" feels so ridiculous in the context.

Originally posted by Legend E

You did not just include my two faves in one trinity. Aside from that, even though I love Carrie, her choice totally doesn't fit in here - she's basically angry over a break-up. Also, I wish it looked more like a story than this list of tips you have made, but it's a good entry.

Hugamari

Originally posted by Buddy!

The Zara song literally got me woo. Like, I feel the heavy emotion(s) through these songs and descriptions. This is honestly an amazing entry, and I can tell you really worked hard for this. But I will admit I was a bit confused as to what was going on. With the video (which I think was great!) and all those quotes. It was like to much going on.

Originally posted by conatus

It's good that you really fleshed out the story and created a whole narrative here, but at the same time, it felt a little too wordy. It could have been more concise but just as effective. The song choices are good but could be better.

Originally posted by Legend E

Aw, the video was such an experience, thank you for doing it! As for the song choices, they aren't bad, but more cohesiveness could have worked I think. Overall, good job, thanks for watering my eyes, Huga

Kitt

Originally posted by Buddy!

Hm, Heaven kinda feels off. Like I understand what you're trying to say, but I don't necessarily see how it fits. Otherwise, the songs are good. They clock each of your points.

Originally posted by conatus

The songs really work well and I like the personal connection you create between you and the reader/listener, but at the same time, it feels like there's so much more you could have done with it. The songs kind of all blend together? I don't know. Still a good entry, though.

Originally posted by Legend E

A very good entry, I must say. Yes, maybe the choices were kind of safe, but they all work and make up a great entry. Nicki's song is really emotional, poor her and her teenage struggles

Kyle.

Originally posted by Buddy!

wow every single song is great! This is an amazing trinity! Each song greatly reflects your theme and what you're trying to get across. Omg those tweets tho I love it.

Originally posted by conatus

Now, I really like this because of the layout and the obvious Gossip Girl inspiration to it. My problem? The songs are similar sonically. It was good at showcasing the progression of feelings surrounding a break-up, though.

Originally posted by Legend E

Your songs go well together (their melodies), and I like the idea with the tweets, but I think your choices feel kinda...plain? It's an interesting approach definitely, but I think you could have done more, maybe with your explanations?

lovesong

Originally posted by Buddy!

This is ok. Would have liked to have known what your theme was, like placing it in your entry but that's just for my own convenience (i'm lazy!!) But overall this is a good entry. However I feel like this dosen't stick out of the pack. Very bland in comparison to some of the others.

Originally posted by conatus

Nothing wrong with the progression of the narrative, "Girls Like Girls" and "Secret" just feel the slighest bit samey.

Originally posted by Legend E

I like how you did this whole summer theme, all to include "Summertime Sadness", but I don't know, I think that in your story that relationship should have started, considering both "Secret" and the song mentioned above are including singers who are in relationships, judging by the lyrics, I think.

Sam

Originally posted by Buddy!

Eh, not really feeling it this time. Each song isn't great, and the way you went about this was...odd. I'm not even sure what the exact word for this is (insert shade here). The entire breakdown of this gsave me a Gaga tea though. ICU.

Originally posted by conatus

I mean, it works, I guess. The problem? I swear last week I said I wanted to see a more diverse entry from you. So what is this?

Originally posted by Legend E

I like your entry, considering it was maybe a harder theme than the other ones, but I wish somehow you didn't include only hip-hop artists, we all know that's a subject they are writing about a lot of times.

Scene.

Originally posted by Buddy!

asjhabs my poor emotions, ugh. This is so sad and so, so true; for my own personal experiences anyway. Everything really meshes well, and I honestly got a bit choked up. The songs were on point, and even though I hate reading, the prologue was amazing. Well done.

Originally posted by conatus

"A Moment Like This" feels far too cheesy and that version of "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" has become a tad cliché, but there's nothing outstandingly bad here. The progression is really good, and none of the sentences feel superfluous.

Originally posted by Legend E

Hell, why have you even been eliminated in the first round?

Theus

Originally posted by Buddy!

awww Theus has a little crush This is cute! Screaming at the title though. Luke always loses. Anyway, I do think the way you went about this is iffy to me. The songs are ok, and overall everything else was just fine. But I can't hate on your personal experience!

Originally posted by conatus

I... Really like this? This is probably your strongest entry so far. Good job.

Originally posted by Legend E

I really liked your trinity this time. The whole thing that I think is a mess are the explanations. How come you jump straight from confessing your love to that sort of demanding part on the second song and then again it is that love or desire. But anyway, I kind of get what you meant so it is good overall.

wesleywalrus

Originally posted by Buddy!

This feels so immature to me. Katy seemingly fits in well for once. Like, I never thought a mid-life crisis was supposed to be light-hearted? Idk, maybe that's just my opinion. I do like the Marina touch though.

Originally posted by conatus

Some of these rhymes were awful but the whole entry has this sort of Dr. Seuss feel to it which is really endearing. In terms of the songs, I like "Who Am I Living For?" and "Forget", but they feel too sonically similar. That is probably the one thing holding the entry back.

Originally posted by Legend E

Ok, I love your approach with the little poems, but your entry seems a bit basic with the choices. They work together however, which is good, but I still wish for riskier choices from you. Great entry, though.

[Gladion]

welp im in the flop trinity again

[wesleywalrus]

Welp.

[Hugamari]

I would say I was hoping for better comments, but I do realize this was a much closer competition than earlier rounds.

Wonder how this will turn out

[Gladion]

I have a horrible blister, i got burned by cookies 2 days ago

[Gladion]

I was told to pop it, but im too scared

[Tymps.]

Rankings on the next page, along with the twist! Excited!

[Gladion]

TWIST?!?

[Hugamari]

Feeling like the prey
But I want to be hunted
You can have your way
I just want to be wanted

[Gladion]

I love twists!!! Excited!!!

[Buddy!]

excited

[Gladion]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Feeling like the prey
But I want to be hunted
You can have your way
I just want to be wanted

what is this song

[Tymps.]

Niko there's been a twist every round.

[Gladion]

Originally posted by Buddy!

excited

I'm really excited that you are also excited.

[Hugamari]

I don't need your acceptance
Don't need you in my presence
I don't need you to judge me
I don't need you to love me

I don't need your approval
I don't need you at all
I act on my own accord
And I don't need you anymore

[Gladion]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Niko there's been a twist every round.

I hope this one is cool!

[minho]

aint serving up dinner
i'm serving up #skillz

[Gladion]

U cant have my heart so do what u want wit my body

[wesleywalrus]

Bumpity bump bump

[Scene.]

Excited