Window Pane (Musickid203) : I liked it, the rhyming was on point and the concept was well done and felt clear. However, I need you to dig a little deeper. This was very reminiscent of your round 1 entry, although not quite as raw. It's a balanced, solid entry though.
Not too bad. I'll take it
I was originally writing a song about suicide but everyone was expecting it. Had I wrote about suicide would that have been me digging a little deeper?
TT called me radio-ready, that is the best compliment I could ever get! I totally write for the radio, I'm happy that it comes out to one of the judges.
I don't know if upbeat lyrics are my thing or I don't know if those particular set of lyrics are my thing but I deff didn't want a to be a one genre lyricist. I just wanna expand my horizons and improve my versatility.
I was originally writing a song about suicide but everyone was expecting it. Had I wrote about suicide would that have been me digging a little deeper?
no, I know exactly what you mean, I'm glad you got it 
