Hello Navi. I wrote a song and would love to hear your opinions on the lyrics.
ON HIS OWN
VERSE 1
All you men are cheating yourselves, day by day
Wasting all your pain on her waist & her gaze
I spy a white lie coming to the surface to graze
Like a white knight, play a game, then act like a saint
PRE-CHORUS 1
He'll cut their heartstrings, play 'em like a harp
Pick a silly little song to tear their mind's apart to
One too many lost who thought he'd be their one true love
Well honey, he's not worth the knot, so let loose and move on
CHORUS
He's on his own, to come around
Let him be found, by someone who is lost too
Oh, and when he does, let him be crushed
As his loneliness calls, and he's gone
These men are something
These men are something
Where are the husbands
Who know how to be honest to you? x2
VERSE 2
Monogamy is illusion, one-on-one ain't the same
They all allude to their papers, but don't love where they lay
I spy a crude remark her way, but she won't budge. she just plays along
At odds, she keeps her posture, men just like it this way
PRE-CHORUS 2
She's his guitar, somber strumming till the tune's lost
He's her vagabond, her bad boy with a charm
Till there's no good at all, so she knows what she wants now
Takes charge before he stops, severed strings played in the background
CHORUS
Now he's on his own, to come around
Let him be found, by someone who is lost too
Oh, and when he does, let him be crushed
As his loneliness calls, and he's gone
These men are something
These men are something
Where are the husbands
Who know how to be honest to you? x2
BRIDGE
All these damsels, but you're stressing
Always tryna get the next one
No one left to really help you out
Where's your manners? Count your blessings
She was counting on you last week
But you left her house, she cant't help you
She'll just call you out
RIGHT NOW!
CHORUS
Now he's on his own, to come around
Let him be found, by someone who is lost too
Oh, and when he does, let him be crushed
As his loneliness calls, and he's gone
These men are something
These men are something
Where are the husbands
Who know how to be honest to you? x2
I just wish it was sung by a competent artist, why couldn't they have gotton Katy or Madonna to do it or any other female singer 
we are just kinda slow in eastern Europe with urban music but I swear hearing it at the club was a godly expirience
