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Originally posted by MattyTacos
GotSkill, nnn, yes I am 15. The xxxposure. I agree, this week my flow was kinda bad at times and I really struggled on how to fix it.  I understand what you mean, I was trying to give away the meaning of the song while also not giving away the meaning of it, and it totally got confusing.
Fefe, I looked up the word and it means "(of a person or their efforts) persisting tirelessly." So the chorus does make sense since I'm saying how we are tireless/energetic. But I think those lines were super basic so.
Huga, I'm confused, what about it was too different? Was it the structure? Did the structure make it more confusing? |
Yes, it was the structure to be honest. I felt like you just changed the structure just to change it, not because the song would actually be improved by doing so. That's just how I felt, though.
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