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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
Now Euphorian sis, you know I love you, but let me real here
Whenever you would post your entries in the thread I would read like the first line or two or maybe a full verse if I felt crazy, but I could never make it all the way through
But then that second song you were working on this round and showed me was actually all types of slay. It felt completely different to your other work (what I managed to read of it) and if you leave this round it's gonna be such a shame because that song was just  I hope not submitting that one doesn't come back to bite you

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Omg you bitch you should've said so because I didn't wanna bother you during CHRISTINAMAS
I get what you're saying though like it was a really good song but I felt like it was too basic and I didn't really like the direction it was heading. Oh **** I'm gonna regret this, aren't I? Might as well just post it here for everyone to see

Not this becoming a Sam Jay/Pears situation. Absolute death if I'm worrying for nothing and I actually slayed this round

Like omg I'm reading it back now and
What If
HOOK
I was yours and then you drifted away
One last look and then you left me insane
I watch on, on the other side
Feeling like I could break down and cry
My glass tears the same
VERSE #1
There wasn’t much between us
Just a veil of dust that drove us apart
And I regret what I did
Cause now I am what you are; shattered glass
I see you in front of me
With such great panache, the memories flash
I run towards not thinking
Before the forces hold you and I back
This fence of transparency is not what we need
Especially when that’s all that we ever see
CHORUS
What if we were what we were supposed to be
And not just what if like the fairies
What if we crossed the boundaries again
Would that bring everything to an end?
Distorted reality – it seems so clear
Rose-tinted in nature, can’t keep living like this
But there’s nothing to hide behind these glassy/glossy eyes
Yet we still believe in our fragmented lies
Yes, I re-used a couple of lines...suck on it judges!
