[Capital B]

I'm like, really, really, really scurred.

Thought I stepped my game up this round, but honestly so did everyone!

Now being placed automatically in the bottom 4 due to the twist...and that's after losing 30 points last twist. GYALS, I need your prayers plz.

[Rider]

Pray 4 me too please..

[Scorpio]

Why hasn't Cupid sent his rankings yet, though. I am mad.

[Melvin]

Originally posted by DOMINO

Why hasn't Cupid sent his rankings yet, though. I am mad.

He probably thinks they're due tomorrow.

Or he's genuinely bothered by that twist.

[Scorpio]

Originally posted by Melvin

He probably thinks they're due tomorrow.

Or he's genuinely bothered by that twist.

He could have at least told me, though.
And after 5 rounds he should know that it's always a two day routine.

[Melvin]

Results NOW!

[Scorpio]

Episode 5 - Elimination Ceremony: Comments

First of all you are going to get the comments that each judge made for your entries.
After that you are going to get the results. Good luck.

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Allstar

Originally posted by Kitt

I love anti-hero/grey area characters; they always end up as a personal favorite. I know how compelling it can be to accidentally slip into dissertation mode when talking about favorite characters, but by the way you detailed him, you did well in piquing an interest to wanting to see more of the show. Very simple and effective presentation also. Never watched the show, but always felt like he didn't look v intimidating to play such a role, so that montage is intense.

Originally posted by DripDrip

This was very well thought out and really well said. Never actually seen the Soprano's but even after its iconic finale people are still typing their own fan theories about the show. I never thought I'd see someone on ATRL like Tony thought without mentioning the word "Daddy" , so for that alone I applaud you. Although the non centering of the video when the image and header is centered is making my OCD act up.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

Has a lot of depth, again well written. You are a good writer, Allstar, but sometimes I feel like it is a little bit too much.
Scene: Good

Capital B

Originally posted by Kitt

Both of the Jay's in those clips look so tired of her

Originally posted by DripDrip

Nnn, this is weird judging my object of affection, my sick obsession, my drug Boyonce. Welcome back to ATRL

But Yaaaaas mawma. Besides the basic font you used for your header image thing, I love this choice. Tyra is in every way, shape, and form a character in her own right. Your examples in this entry only prove that. How could you forget her iconic Smizing though?

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

This was an experience, and I can relate to this because I have watched her show since the beginning as well. It was also very funny. Quite entertaining.
Scene: Good

coolcristobal

Originally posted by Kitt

The gif is mediocore to me, but points for creating a flop thread to stimulate it's usage Bold for someone who literally just came out of the blue on this site and game.

Originally posted by DripDrip

Yas, stan for Roger, Stewie's lessor half. This was short and I GUESS you hit all the key points. It was very college essay IMO, I didn't feel anything besides you trying to get your points across, its very like "okay, next" to me.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

I think this was good, but then again everyone did well in this challenge. I really love Roger. I just wish you included a little bit more of a personal connection. That would have taken it to the next level.
Scene: Good

FunkyDinevo

Originally posted by Kitt

What the ****? I'm living for your formatting this round. What kind of Melvin/Latch teas though. Who'd you pay? What graphic designer atrler owed you a favor?

Originally posted by DripDrip

Does Beck Buck Wild look like Iggy to you? She kind of gives me Iggy teas. Anyways. Very impressive entry, its so fun, you showed all these sides of New York and showed why she really is your favorite tv personality or character or whatever. Anyways, slay a bit. I don't really have a lot of negative critique for you.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

This was a no brainer. Good job overall. I just think there were too many scenes. Like really..
And that cute little gif you created… I received a whole lot of life.
Scene: Iconic

Melvin

Originally posted by Kitt

She only commented on a few (no time).

Originally posted by DripDrip

Melvin, did you recycle that header from your ANTM Build-A-Challenge challenge? I see you girl. Well I wish I could have read all the things you had to say but your formatting had it blocking off words at the end of your sentences However; your entry was very nice put, it has the basics but with a little more touch ups. Oliva better CLAWK Andrew tho.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

I really liked your entry. The layout looks clean and fantastic, really. (Although it was cut, so thank you for posting the full version).
Scene: Captivating

Element

Originally posted by Kitt

Maybe it's the inclusion of that big ass photo and embedded video, but this entry was a bit intimidating to read through. However, once I did, it really wasn't that bad.

Originally posted by DripDrip

Holy **** we've had 28 season of survivor
Hmmmmmm I don't know if you're video showing more of who she is as a good or bad thing. I'll go with good. Your enjoyment of her says a lot about you and more then any entry I think I know you a little bit more now. This is out of the box and not someone I even thought about. Good job.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

This was a cute entry. It just wasn’t as exciting to read as the other ones.. Maybe because I have never heard of her.. But that doesn’t take away from your effort - which is visible.
Scene: Interesting

darkhorse

Originally posted by Kitt

The clips were really effective in illustrating your points. I'm also always here for your list-style entries—it's a handy technique when it comes to these challenges where explanation is the focal point, but I think you could do a lot more with it formatting wise. It frees up a lot of space, so you could make the most out of that and include more well-placed images/gifs or embedded media. This is a little advanced, but you have the potential to present some great entries for future game entries.

Originally posted by DripDrip

This girl is hilarious omg
I liked how each of your points that you mentioned as to who she is you connected it to yourself, it made it more personal and gave a clear understanding of why you like the character so much, and bonus you even talked about the actress! Overall great entry.

( He accidentally wrote darkhouse instead of darkhorse. )

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

Also a good one. But your font is really small, and you always have the same size in each one of your entries.. It’s a bit hard to read.
Scene: Cute

Rider

Originally posted by Kitt

She only commented on a few (no time).

Originally posted by DripDrip

Good God that scene lemme watch this on Netflix, I'm intrigued. Lynette better spill that tea about that ladies husband tho.
Although that being said I was kind of more fascinated with the video then your overall entry. It was good, but after seeing the clip, I kind of wanted to know more about your experience with ha. It was very Wikipedia.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

What was missing was the personal connection because clearly you are not a woman so her being the perfect woman might not be something you relate to. I did however like your reasons.
Scene: Good

Serendipity

Originally posted by Kitt

She only commented on a few (no time).

Originally posted by DripDrip

Ah, I love this. You took a risk by picking such an iconic and well known character and really going all in on who she is, giving her background and so forth. It was very well written, and I really liked the gif. you used. It had all the qualities you talked about her in it, from the fashion to the dirty humor and her lively spirit. Very well done.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

Very good. It was fascinating to see you love all the sexual facts about her when in reality you are so private about it that it almost seems nonexistent to you. I could not really detect the personal connection because I know you, and you are not like that. But your text was so fabulous again.. I CAN’T.
Scene: Good

Superiore

Originally posted by Kitt

She only commented on a few (no time).

Originally posted by DripDrip

I lovvvveee me some Fiona, and I know you're capable of writing much more about her then this tiny paragraph you left me wanting more, it felt like you just tore this from a TV Guide review on the show.

Originally posted by H-I-M

He only did the ranking and gave you scores.

Originally posted by DOMINO

You kept it on the shorter side, which is fine. But you have not mentioned any type of personal connections which is not that fine. Your scene, though.
Scene: JAZZ

Stay tuned.

[Melvin]

Not eveyone in the bottom 4 having decent comments.

[Capital B]

Happy with my comments. If I go home because of this twist...

[darkhorse]

Rider, Melvin and B obviously did better

[FunkyDinevo]

[Rider]

It was nice knowing y'all.

[darkhorse]

Not you ruining my sister's birthday party

[Capital B]

Waiting for some twist where all four of us actually go home

[Melvin]

Originally posted by Capital B

Waiting for some twist where all four of us actually go home

If only the Windows in my room opened...

[Capital B]

New twist: this whole game was a dream and it's still really the application round

[Allstar]

Am here so where are the results

[Allstar]

oh wait lemme read

[Melvin]

Not the bottom 4 posting back-to-back.

[Scorpio]

Episode 5: Results

If your votes were the same but someone placed lower/higher than you it was because you
had more/less points in les stats board.

I just want to say that all of you did pretty well this round.
And I knew it was going to be hard to eliminate you guys even without the twist.

Rider - Capital B - Melvin - darkhorse

You are the bottom four this round. However the others will get ranked first before I get to you.











I legit don't want to do this...






















The best ATRLer this week is...








































1. FUNKYDINEVO



Congratulations, you advance to the next round.
+35 points were added to your stats.[/B]





2. SERENDIPITY



Congratulations, you advance to the next round.
+33,5 points were added to your stats.[/B]





3. ALLSTAR



Congratulations, you advance to the next round.
+31,5 points were added to your stats.[/B]





4. ELEMENT



Congratulations, you advance to the next round.
+28 points were added to your stats.[/B]





5. SUPERIORE



Congratulations, you advance to the next round.
+25,5 points were added to your stats.[/B]





6. COOLCRISTOBAL



Congratulations, you advance to the next round.
+25,5 points were added to your stats.[/B]





The Bottom Four

Rider - Capital B - Melvin - darkhorse




Who will go home?

Stay tuned.